Date: 09/24/09 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 10
thanks !!!!1 please continue!!!! XD
Date: 09/24/09 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 10
Awwwww!
What happens next? What happens next?
This chapter was cute but I can't help but feel like it's the calm before the storm.
Date: 09/24/09 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 9
I love this! update!
Date: 09/24/09 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
-sniffle- -hugs Bill-
Finally, I was able to read with out being told that you had updated .. again. Lol -sticks out tongue-
This is turning into one sad story ... but I am really enjoying it.
Date: 09/24/09 11:50 am Title: Chapter 9
Well, I can't imagine anything Mr. Blair got anything bad on them so they could win, assuming Jorg doesn't buy everyone off.
Date: 09/24/09 12:36 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh, I cried this whole chapter; so sad.
Did she have cancer? Oh, whatever she had, it's still really sad.
And Tom's dad......with the way this is going, I know Tom's dad is gonna get Lizzy. OH, the injustice. I dunno if I can keep reading this.....but I will.
Date: 09/23/09 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 8
:( Update soon!
Date: 09/23/09 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
i L0000000VVVVVVVE THiS ST0RY, ALTH0UGH i HAVENT CAUGHT ANYTHiNG DiFFERENT YET
Author's Response: uhm, MINOR changes such as typos, filling scenes out more, rewording things, but still, there's a small difference. and i said in the summery that it was an EDITED version, NOT reworked. so it's the same story line...
Date: 09/23/09 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
Really sick...right. I bet it's a conspriacy. Jorg is behind it somehow.
Date: 09/23/09 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
Something tells me them coming over is an uh oh...But I don't know...I'm loving this story. Really.
Date: 09/23/09 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
Love it! love it!
Date: 09/23/09 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 6
OH MEIN GOSH!!!! love it!
Date: 09/23/09 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
Well that could have been better timed.
Date: 09/23/09 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love this story!
Date: 09/23/09 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 8
awww ive fallen in love with this all over again!!! :) more sooon pleeeease?? :) fern xx
Date: 09/23/09 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
Did you add in the "Idiot Tomi" phrase toward the end there?
Perfection.
Author's Response: LOL. Nein. the "Forgotten chicken" came from when thea and i would sing "forgotten chicken" all the time. this was originally written BEFORE fries and that was in the original version. :D
Date: 09/23/09 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
I still hate Jorg. He's such a douche...