Date: 09/21/09 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Eh.. I don't know what to say or how to react :-/. Because I really, really don't find that bodyguard attractive at all in any sense (and I've said it before). Besides i'm acting like jealous Tom here... No one should touch Bill except Tom (Me twincester? Nooooooh :D).
After saying that I must say that your writing was really hot and detailed. Bill's role was perfect for this and topping from bottom was interesting and hot to read. Actually I think he does just like that :D. In a weird way when Bill was called "Mr. Kaulitz" it was hot. It's so unusual here, when Bill is always just Bill. It made a nice twist here. And I love fingering... Fingering, fisting and rimming are better than fucking, if someone asks me :).
And is it just me or is this whole fandom making fun of Mr.Bodyguard's fanny pack? Bill needs to do something about it :D
But yes, nice and hot and I loved Bill's role even if I'm not a big fan of his bodyguard. I would like him to be both of the twins toy maybe, but.. Nah, sidetracks. Good job! :)
Author's Response: Aw, you know I've only heard a couple people who don't think the bodyguard is hot. But I'm glad you still enjoyed the story, even if you're not totally with the pairing. Haha yes! We were all making fun of the fannypack. But that's okay; the last picture I saw of the bodyguard, there wasn't a fannypack in sight. :p Anyway, thank you! :D
Date: 09/21/09 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mmm, this was so yummy. I love Bill taking charge, and the scene where he was tickling down Lukas' arms was so hot for some reason. I like the idea of fragile Bill making that big man helpless. ;) I loved this!
Author's Response: I like the idea of fragile Bill making that big man helpless.
And that was it, entirely. The idea made me squirm and Bill/Lukas had to happen. I'm just happy you liked it! Thank you! <3
Date: 09/21/09 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
First of all I have to say that I almost missed my bus this morning trying to read this. I'm happy I waited though. It was so good and so worth the wait. ;)
And I have to say, my all time favorite line was the last. I'm hoping for a part two someday. ;)
Keep up the great work! :)
Author's Response: LOL Aw, honey, I didn't mean to almost make you late! I'm thrilled you liked it. <3
Date: 09/21/09 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is just absolutely fantastic. I so love this new bodyguard pairing - yummy for Bill!
*sits and waits for Part II*
xoxo
Author's Response: Haha! We'll have to see if Part II happens. I'm glad you liked it, though. Thank you!
Date: 09/21/09 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Um, basically, I um, guh? I love, love, love Bill topping from the bottom, as it were. And then the ending multiplies the cute and sexy by like a million, which means, in a nutshell, that my head has exploded. So perfect!
Author's Response: LOL You so made me grin. Thank you! <3
Date: 09/21/09 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Yum.
I think I enjoy their talk at the end the most. Yes, bill is the boss.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks!
Date: 09/21/09 11:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Sequel! Se-quel!! SEQUEL!!! SE-QUEL!!!! Please, ma'am, may I have a sequel? OMFG - this is so hot! Holy SHIT! *desperately wants to read about Lucas' way!!*
Author's Response: LOL We'll have to see! Thanks :D
Date: 09/21/09 10:50 am Title: Chapter 1
LOVELOVELOVE..and where's my sequel?! :P
Author's Response: LOL So far, it's hanging out in my head and damn, it's steamy in there! :p
Date: 09/21/09 10:44 am Title: Chapter 1
I really love the details about the fanny pack~~~Bill is right,that's so lame~~haha~~~
anyway, i love this!!!!
can't wait to see the sequel, if there is any...
Author's Response: We'll have to see! Thank you :D
Date: 09/21/09 04:06 am Title: Chapter 1
So sweet! It was hot but it was also sweet. I couldnt help but grin from start to end. Hope there's more of this pairing from you!
Author's Response: It's entirely possible! Thank you :D
Date: 09/21/09 02:57 am Title: Chapter 1
I need to know how Lukas does it his way!!!
So, basically, since I am dying to know, I demand a sequel, or if there is one already written, please direct me to the link.
Fantastic, btw.
Author's Response: LOL Thanks. And maybe we'll get to see Lukas' way...
Date: 09/21/09 01:22 am Title: Chapter 1
dies a slow death into a big puddle of earthshattering goo.
that was SOO worth the wait!
loved Tom climbing into the van and squishing Lukas into Bill..Bill being all nervous pressed up against him.
and as hot as dominant Bill is...the thought of that HUGE man manhandling Bill at the end and flipping him over...
whew..*fans self*
wants a Lukas for her own.
Author's Response: Haha! YESSS! I love that you loved this! <333
Date: 09/21/09 01:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh Ohhhhh MOOOOORRREEE PLEASE!!!! Write more.
Author's Response: LOL Thanks!
Date: 09/21/09 01:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Omg *_* I actually never thought I'm gonna like this pairing. Thanks to you!
I love it so much! The sexy tiemz and agressive!bill! Ooooh in the end ~Lukas~ (lol that name FTW!!) transforming into the wild one so hot.
Yep, you pretty much made me melt in this fic and I LOVE EEET.
Author's Response: Haha! I knew you didn't want to read it. Weren't you the one who said you would, just for me? I'm glad you did! I'm even more glad that you liked it. Thank you!
Date: 09/21/09 01:03 am Title: Chapter 1
guh.
i JUST got out the shower like an hour ago DAMMIT.
and now i need another one because this was SOOOO fucking hot.
guh bb, i think i just came seriously.
NEVER has calling Bill 'Mr. Kaulitz' turned me on so much before.
i do declare myself pregnant and having your babies after this fic xD
Author's Response: LOL! Omg, spontaneous orgasm would be quite interesting! Sorry about your wasted shower, bb! And thank you! <3
Date: 09/21/09 12:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh God, SEQUEL, with Lukas in charge! PLEASE! D:
Author's Response: I'm definitely keeping the option open, but no promises. <3
Date: 09/21/09 12:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh dear, i loved this... WOW!!! Oh my... lol
Author's Response: LOL Thank you!
Date: 09/21/09 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Ack! FIRST! (for some reason, that makes me happy! :D)
I can't put into words how much I love this story.
I adore the fact that you took it nice and slow, poiting out even the little details. Too many times, I read fics that are rushed, and several times I read really good smut scenes that just don't put in the tiny details-- which is perfectly fine, but I love that you did. It makes it seem more realistic, makes it easier to believe, and just overall makes the sex. :)
Also, I love Bill's need to be in control. Bill controlling the bodyguard, someone who's bigger and definitely stronger than him? Hawtness, kthnx.
The whole story was smooth, and the beginning scene, with Bill and Tom, showed that even when Bill's doing something intimate as sex, and though his brother isn't involved, he's always thinking of him. Much respect to that detail!
Author's Response: LOL I never thought that someone would say FIRST in a review of mine. Goober. Does it count when we were talking in email right before I posted? Isn't that cheating? :p
You know, I think Bill really does have a need to control things, situations and people irl, so this made total sense to me. But hell yeah, with the hottieguard, it's just ... hotter. LOL I'm really glad you appreciated those details in what was essentially a pwp. Sometimes I think some things will be lost and I'm glad when they aren't. Thank you, honey! <3