Date: 09/23/09 10:57 pm Title: Princess
THIS TOTALLY REMINDS ME OF "CAN'T BUY ME LOVE" THAT OLD MOVIE OF THE GEEK PRETENDING TO BE THE POPULAR GIRL'S BOYFRIEND AND I MIGHT JUST WATCH IT AGAIN.
THANK YOU AND I LOVE THIS STORY, SO KEEP BRING THE PLOT AND MAKE IT GOOD.
Author's Response: LOL. Well, Neither one of us have ever heard of that movie, but we're glad you like the story!
Date: 09/23/09 10:46 pm Title: Bill's Plan
LET THE FUN BEGIN BABY.
I CAN'T WAIT
Date: 09/23/09 08:58 am Title: Princess
i think it would be funny if they shared a "pretend" kiss in the caf to prove to everyone they were dating, but bill actually liked it.
Date: 09/23/09 08:24 am Title: Princess
From what you're writing it looks like the story's leading into a major issue of Bill having anorexia, refusing to eat food. I guess I'd like to see that happen, but nothing major about it, and Kris could help Bill through it. You know when they get closer he could tell Bill he's beautiful and always was, so he doesn't need to stop eating. Bill should totally NOT end up back with Jason, however I think somewhere within the story Bill's plan should work, Jason and Bill should get back together, but then Jason cheats on Bill again and hurts him. Kris being there to pick up the pieces of Bill's broken heart!!!!!! I can't wait to read more.
Date: 09/23/09 03:42 am Title: Princess
So cool. I love school stories. Some things I'd like to see are... glimpses of Bill's cute side from Kris' eyes! Yeah I cant elaborate but I can say that I love love love underestimated Bill stories so maybe allow Kris to see Bill's 'normal' side; the Bill Tom usually gets to see at home. ;_; I dont know! Just keep writing, cant wait for more.
Date: 09/23/09 02:27 am Title: Princess
OMG...really? i dunno....i want a kiss...but i think that'll happen , lol, soooo BUT GOD i want kriss to keep calling bill princess and for it to become an endearment! but u probably planned for that too....so m out of ideas. gah and you knwo i juat had to read this! i -breathyvoice- ITSAMAZIN'!!! gah i love you girls -cuddles you and sweeps wif u-
Date: 09/22/09 11:58 pm Title: Princess
I would like to see a huge blow up and serious fight at the end of the story between Kris and Jason. That would be osm.
Date: 09/22/09 11:03 pm Title: Princess
OMG!!!! princess!!! that is really sweet!!!! XD
mmmmm you can make them kiss already!!!! XD
hehe only suggestion!!! but i really would like that!!!
Date: 09/22/09 10:48 pm Title: Bill's Plan
more more more luv luv it
Date: 09/22/09 10:36 pm Title: Bill's Plan
more more more luv luv it
Date: 09/22/09 10:21 pm Title: Princess
this sounds an awful lot like the movie "Drive Me Crazy" lol but w/e still love it guys ILD
Author's Response: LOL. It might kinda sound like it right now, but it's really not. Bill's not trying to change Kris, they're not friends and never were, etc. It does have a teenage movie feel throughout tho. ^^
Date: 09/22/09 10:12 pm Title: Bill's Plan
Okay semi review semi amusement.
First off I love the fact we've got yet another Bill/Kris fic on here, and I been a fan of you both for a while.
secondly.. that video erm song is not stuck in my head, though a little bit of looking lead me to find the offical music video for the song.. and I mean the full dirty song.
Enjoy!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NgrGRcjyzVw
Date: 09/22/09 09:43 pm Title: Princess
I want to see more of Kris' personality, and Bill's too.
I want to know how he treats his fellow classmates as well as what goes on in that thick head of his(pardon the pun.:).)
Oh, and more on Bill and Tom's family life.:).
Date: 09/22/09 09:02 pm Title: Princess
kris.. i like kris. but why are bills "boyfriends" always blonde?
Author's Response: Hmm... I dunno. We didn't plan it that way, really. We just typed a hair color once and didn't want to change it, so it stuck. XD xxAli
Date: 09/21/09 08:49 pm Title: Bill's Plan
Hehe...this should be good.
Date: 09/21/09 06:45 pm Title: Bill's Plan
wowzersss.
Date: 09/21/09 11:33 am Title: Bill's Plan
mission impossible XD
i dont even know what its saying and its going over and over an over ... god major fail
love the beginning im like addicted to all the Kris/Bill stories and coming from you guys its just amazing!!
Date: 09/20/09 11:09 pm Title: Bill's Plan
sounds interesting dearies can't wait to read more ILD
Date: 09/20/09 11:50 am Title: Bill's Plan
Yay MORE!!!!!
Date: 09/20/09 10:35 am Title: Bill's Plan
Homework: 0.o -eye twitch- W .. t .. f was that?!
Review: I have found my new FAVE story .. and I love Gay!Tom :) He just so -squishable-
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Rach