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Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/09 11:11 pm Title: A Kiss

O.O You HAD to end it there ... didn't you .. you .. you EVIL PERSON YOU!!! -pouts- I wanted to hear Tomi's reaction .. but NOOOO you HAD TO STOP THERE .. now I am going to pout in the corner till you update again ... -stomps away dramatically, mumbling "mean people. Have to get my hopes up and then stop"-

Reviewer: Ohz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/09 09:12 pm Title: What they See

Update soon. :)

Reviewer: bookme Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/09 03:51 am Title: What they See

I really like this story
it is sooooo sweet

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/09 01:12 am Title: What they See

Hiii guys! *waves* danke fer the update! :D I'm so excited for this story. (As long as I don't have to cause scenes at public restaurants, whilst Anony hides behind Vi, and makes Vi take all the blame...) But you know, I'm thinkin that in reality, I don't know who to cast my ballots for...oooh. TSOA. Anywho....loves ya! *off to find some oreos, or other reasonable facsimile....*

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/09 12:06 am Title: What they See

i did it & i registered...i'm a member...when my brain is a little more responsive, i'll nominate stuff...i like the fact that kris was nice enough to give bill his hoodie...and i agree with tom...when's bill gonna see what's right in front of him? better be soon before it's too late...

Reviewer: Billa_Loves_Skittles Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/09 11:49 pm Title: What they See

i made them  O.o the sechslign awards, i just made you guys tag along..wel alcie tag along  VI NOMINATE BB!!! -shakes booty-

Reviewer: Lrigrl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/13/09 11:43 pm Title: What they See

FINALLY!! *squeals* I thought you guys had forgotten about this story. It's such a gem.

This is sooo sweet!

I hope that Jason encounters a serious ass kicking, though. >:( He's such a jerk! And he seems to have no remorse for causing Bill to end up in a hospital, the shallow b---- *breathes*

ANYWAY. lol.

I hope that Bill realizes that there's so much better for him. A.k.a. Kris. ;)

I can't wait to read more. :)

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/09 11:17 pm Title: What they See

thanks I love this story!!

Reviewer: freedom-reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/09 10:58 pm Title: What they See

OMG I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/09 10:18 pm Title: What they See

WHAT THE HELL TOKI?!?!?! I LOVE IT! That's so great how you threw that in there, and it was so slick, too, lol.

If I could just have everyone's attention for a moment, please? Thank you. *clears throat*

JASON IS STILL A DOUCHE!

Thank you for listening.



Author's Response: best review ever. vi agrees. we both love it.

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/09 09:41 pm Title: What they See

Thank you for reminding me, although this will require a ton of reading. I'm on it.

This chapter was sadly short, and I desperately want Bill to open his eyes as well. Oh well, maybe next chapter...:D

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/09 08:39 pm Title: What they See

Awww!!!! To freaking cute!!! Really, Bill and Kris just need to just make it official. -rolls eyes and mumbles- "Stubborn men.." && I agree with Tomi completely. Bill really just needs to open his eyes and see what is right there. The most amazing guy ever.

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/09 02:49 pm Title: The Help

real fun, huh? can't wait...i hope he does show bill that there's more to a relationship than jason's twisted idea...

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/09 02:47 pm Title: The Help

real fun, huh? can't wait...i hope he does show bill that there's more to a relationship than jason's twisted idea...

Reviewer: Billa_Loves_Skittles Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/09 02:25 am Title: The Help

...no review homeowrk???    ahmigad what ever shall i do woth myself??? I KNOW!!!

IT’S RAINING TODAY
THE BLINDS ARE SHUT
IT’S ALWAYS THE SAME
I TRIED ALL THE GAMES THAT
THEY PLAY | BUT THEY
MADE ME INSANE
LIFE ON TV
IT’S RANDOM
IT MEANS NOTHING TO ME
I’M WRITING DOWN
WHAT I CANNOT SEE
WANNA WAKE UP IN A DREAM
OH
THEY’RE TELLING ME
IT’S BEAUTIFUL
I BELIEVE THEM
BUT WILL I EVER KNOW
THE WORLD BEHIND MY WALL
OH
THE SUN WILL SHINE
LIKE NEVER BEFORE
ONE DAY I WILL BE
READY TO GO
SEE THE WORLD BEHIND MY WALL
TRAINS IN THE SKY
ARE TRAVELLING

 THROUGH FRAGMENTS OF TIME
THEY’RE TAKING ME TO PARTS
OF MY MIND
THAT NO ONE CAN FIND
I’M READY TO FALL
I’M READY TO CRAWL
ON MY KNEES TO KNOW IT ALL
I’M READY TO HEAL
I’M READY TO FEEL
… TAKE ME THERE!

 

Ther ei linked you to the lyrics for Wolrd behind my wall....i jsut got my itunes Humanoid album and this song it so fucking sad....

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/09 11:41 am Title: The Help

.... Where is the real fun ?? .... ..... .... Ohhh, you mean the review ... ... now I feel stupid.

Loved the chapter .. && YAY to Kris for (silently) admitting he liked Bill. :)

Reviewer: HyperActiveChick Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/09 02:05 am Title: The Help

uh oh. great great great

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/09 02:00 am Title: The Help

Oh. Hey. I really like Kris. That's really spiff of him. What a guy, huh?

And Tom is kinda funny. He's all like "GRRR! THAT'S MY LITTLE BROTHER YOU'RE HANGING AROUND! GRRR!" one second, and all like, "hey, that's really nice of you, helping my little brother like that." the next.

I want the real fun to start NOW! please?

Reviewer: Lrigrl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/05/09 12:42 am Title: The Help

Aw, that was sweet! And either Kris is a good liar, or Bill's kind of gullible. XD

I love this fic. I can't wait to read more! :)

Reviewer: freedom-reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 11:56 pm Title: The Help

Awww I love it. Some Tom and Kris bonding. I can't wait to read more.

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