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Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 06:33 pm Title: Still Broken

love this story!! please continue!! love this!! XD
kris is incredible!!! XD

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 05:17 pm Title: Still Broken

Aw, slowly but surely. I'm really glad you aren't making Bill's recovery insantaneous. Too many people do that, and damn it it's frustrating. Way to be realistic! :D

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 08:29 am Title: Still Broken

acceptance that you have a problem is a big step...and i hope the guys stick to him like glue...jason is such a douche...

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 07:34 am Title: Maybe

they have a good thing going...it's nice to find someone who loves you for you...and too bad jason isn't dead...

Reviewer: fuckmekaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 03:45 am Title: Afternoon

I love Eminem's Beautiful ^^

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 01:15 am Title: Still Broken

Man, I think I may have to kill Jason again. How could he have broken Bil like that? How do they even make people like that? What a loser! He makes me mad.

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 12:56 am Title: Still Broken

-Cuddles Tomi and Billie- You two are freaking ADORKABLE!! (lol) No srsly, you two are OSM!! -lets go and walks off, leaving two very confused and crinkled boys-

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 02:30 am Title: Maybe

Great chapter! Love this story more with each update!

Reviewer: freedom-reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/09 12:24 am Title: Maybe

Yay, I love it. Now it's Billa's turn to reveal some of his past. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/09 02:21 pm Title: Maybe

The self-exiled teen tried to go around the football but Justin just moved so he was still blocking the other blond's path.  <----- His name is Jason, not Justin. Thought you ought to know...

I thought I took care of Jason, lol. If I remember correctly, he's buried in an unmarked grave in some un-named tract of land... And I'll never tell.



Author's Response: danke liebling. fixed it. ^^

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/09 01:55 pm Title: Maybe

WOOT!!!! GO KRIS *dances* Ha Jason so deserved a snot in the nose!! That was very impressive, and then you topped it by confessions of falling in love

Reviewer: LilKim Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/09 01:27 pm Title: Maybe

Aww all kinds of warm fuzzies >_< ILD

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/09 01:10 pm Title: Maybe

-slacked jawed- HE SAID IT!!! OH MY GOD HE SAID IT!!!! -Squeals in pure delight and spins around- This is AWESOME!!! Like seriously AWESOME!!! -Grabs Bill and Kris and hugs tight- You two are insanely cute together!!

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/09 01:04 pm Title: Maybe

awwwww so cute!!!! love it!!!! XD
please continue!!!!!

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/09 11:10 am Title: Maybe

*coos* AWE.

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/09 08:11 am Title: Maybe

That song does really fit Bill and Jason in this fic, doesn't it? I like Keith Urban...Anyway, great chapter. I really like it.

Reviewer: Billa_Loves_Skittles Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/09 04:10 am Title: Maybe

AWWWWWWW!! -squealsfora looooong tim- OMG AWWWWWW thats all, now m off to bed though cause i need to

 

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/09 02:23 pm Title: Exhaustion

I love Tom being all big-brother-protector like that. I wouldn't mind if he wanted to protect me... *drools*

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/09 05:14 pm Title: Exhaustion

AWWWWWW .. Man I love those two -grabs Kris and Bill, squishing them till they turn blue- Ooops sorry - smooths the wrinkles in their clothes- There, good as new. -smiles wide-

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/09 03:25 pm Title: Exhaustion

I really love this chapter. I really want to read the next one. I'm a little confused as to why Bill CAN'T eat, but that's probably just my lack of understanding of eating disorders...

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