Date: 09/29/09 08:26 pm Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
Omg....I didn't think bill would do that...and well at least tom knows he's not completely forgiven yet. and well yeah I like this chapter and can't wait for the next one to come
Author's Response: yeah, bill's not holding back anymore...at least not in this chapter ;) we'll see what happens in the next one, and thank you :D it makes me happy that people are excited to know what happens next :)
Date: 09/29/09 06:56 pm Title: Bleed It Out
I really like the idea. I can identify with the basic concept of bullies which makes it enjoyable to read. Cannot wait to read the other chapters.
Author's Response: thanks :) It's good to know that you're enjoying the story.
Date: 09/29/09 06:39 pm Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
That was an awesome chapter. Glad I could help you out with it. You did an awesome job.
For the future, if a person is lucky to fully recover from a coma, they will have minor moments of impairment until they're fully recovered...if they ever do. I've seen him forget what he was doing in the middle of doing it, he'd lose things he just had in his hands, he'd have moments of weakness where he would be unable to stand or hold something, he had wicked mood swings (he could be a serious bitch!), suffered from episodes of fear (that it might happen again), and frustration that he was not the same.
All these episodes and things lessoned with time passing, but what people who need to know who loves someone that's been in a coma is that they are not the same people they once were. Just accept them and help ease them through whatever difficulty they're having at the time. It will definitely get better though...
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) Okay. Thank you again!!! By the way, you just gave me an idea for the next chapter! So thank you once more. This is definitely helpful, not just for the next chapter but for the rest of the story. I owe you big time. If you ever need anything for a story or anything like that, feel free to ask (I have personal experience with depression and panic attacks if you ever write something about that and need a person's POV on that). Just saying :) I am forever grateful for all the help you've given me. At this point you could pretty much be a cowriter of this story! So thank you yet again :D
Date: 09/29/09 05:52 pm Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
Ah I love how fast you update!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!! Yay Billa's ok :)
Author's Response: thank you so much :D what do you think? should tom make bill wait until he's ready to forgive tom, or say whatever and continue what they've started in the clearing?
Date: 09/29/09 05:41 pm Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
second option. Tom must wait. Definitely.
Author's Response: thank you for voting :) let's see what the other reviewers say, and next chapter will be written and posted ASAP.
Date: 09/29/09 03:01 pm Title: Confession
Yay! LOVE it! write more soon! I beg u! lol x
Author's Response: :D I'm posting another chapter today :D
Date: 09/29/09 02:52 pm Title: Confession
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: :D I'm updating today :)
Date: 09/29/09 10:52 am Title: Confession
This is amazing. I cried; i cant believe what's happened in the story. You're writing a story which happens to be one of my favourite genre's, maybe that's why im so hooked on this story. Your'e truly an amazing writer; and i cant wait to read the next chapter. Thank you for giving us the opportuntiy to read something so special :D x
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) Oh, well that would make sense ;] Thanks again :D And you're welcome :) I'll post the next chapter today.
Date: 09/29/09 10:40 am Title: Wake
He woke up! Omg
Author's Response: yup :D
Date: 09/29/09 10:38 am Title: This Coma
I dont know what to say; it's just amazing.
Author's Response: thanks so much :D
Date: 09/29/09 10:29 am Title: The Little Things Give You Away
Ah, im crying again. This is so sad, but intresting ):
Author's Response: sorry to have made you cry :( but thanks for thinking this is interesting...
Date: 09/29/09 10:24 am Title: Shadow Of The Day
I love this story
Author's Response: thank you :D
Date: 09/29/09 10:18 am Title: No More Sorrow
I cried, and still crying. Bill fell in love with Tom!? Did i read this right?. Oh my god, this story is absouetley fantastic
Author's Response: yeah, he fell in love with Tom...sometimes love is something that happens despite how irrational it may seem, and there's nothing you can do about it....and thanks :D
Date: 09/29/09 10:11 am Title: What I've Done
OMG. Getting so good; haha, sorry, ive commented on every single chapter. I want to know why Tom is reading. Off to read the next chapter (;
Author's Response: thanks :D don't apologize, i absolutely LOVE getting reviews, so this makes you my favorite reviewer :D
Date: 09/29/09 10:06 am Title: Hands Held High
I'm hooked. Lol, even though it's a story im glad Bill yelled at Tom, lol. (:
Author's Response: that's good to hear :D and lol yeah, i thought Bill deserved the upper hand for once
Date: 09/29/09 09:59 am Title: Given Up
Ah! Tom's finally seeing what he's done
Author's Response: yup :]
Date: 09/29/09 09:55 am Title: Leave Out All The Rest
Lol. I dont think any deserves to be kicked. :|
Poor Bill. Poor Bill
Author's Response: yeah, i just put that up there cause so many people asked me to in their reviews...and yes, poor bill is right :[
Date: 09/29/09 09:48 am Title: In Pieces
This so so good
Author's Response: thanks :D
Date: 09/29/09 09:44 am Title: Valentine's Day
Oh my. I know Tom would never do this, and something like this would never happen; but i can never imagine Tom doing something like this. And Bill. Oh, ive stopped myself from crying so many times.
Author's Response: yeah, i don't believe either of the boys would ever do anything like this, but it makes for an interesting story...i think so, anyway...and sorry to have made you cry, unless you mean that because the story was so emotional, in which case that means i did my job ;]
Date: 09/29/09 09:36 am Title: In Between
Oh my. Poor Bill! ): This is really intresting (:
Author's Response: yeah....thanks :D