Date: 10/01/09 11:44 pm Title: What I Want
Ok-that last sentence, made me melt....
Author's Response: :D that's good to know, it means I'm doing my job as a writer :)
Date: 10/01/09 10:33 pm Title: What I Want
Oh my gosh, this chapter is fantastic! So beautiful, so damn beautiful. Your chapter's always leave me in a happy mood, and give me inspiration to finish writing the many stories that i have started.
Author's Response: thank you very much :D that's very good to know! thanks for telling me, it makes me so happy that I'm an inspiration :) keep writing, and let me know if you post anything new, so I can go check it out! :D thanks for adding me on AIM, by the way :) we should chat if you're ever online at the same time as I am...we might be in different time zones though
Date: 10/01/09 10:20 pm Title: What I Want
this chap = AWESOMEsauce
loved it xD
Author's Response: thanks so much :D and OMG i say awesomesauce too! xD
Date: 10/01/09 10:20 pm Title: What I Want
aww soso cute=]=]
Author's Response: thanks :D
Date: 10/01/09 10:01 pm Title: What I Want
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Author's Response: ;D
Date: 10/01/09 09:33 pm Title: What I Want
awee this was so cute. :D i loved it!
Author's Response: thank you :D glad you liked it :)
Date: 10/01/09 09:17 pm Title: What I Want
Aww this was really cute I'm glad tom isn't pressuring him into doing anything. And poor bill barely having any energy...can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: thanks :D yeah, I didn't want Tom to hurt him anymore, Bill's been through enough. And yeah, poor Bill :( I talked at length to Tokio Jax about comatose people and found out that they have little energy after waking up, and need lots of rehab just to regain use of their muscles...:(
Date: 10/01/09 04:44 pm Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
It's kind of a cliffhanger xD So you get brownie points for that. BUT I DEMAND A BETTER ONE NEXT TIME. Juuuust kidding xD You can do whatever you want. I think Bill should continue with his seducing thing because otherwise it's just kind of dragging on :P That's just my thoughts and if you can make it better then go ahead and knock yourself out :]
Author's Response: thanks xD lmao i don't know if I can do that, there's not that much of the story left...but feel free to read the others i'm working on ;) ;) thanks for sharing your thoughts :D i think bill should continue as well, and i hope you like the chapter i just posted :D
Date: 09/30/09 12:24 pm Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
Ahhh! yay! im still in love with this story! i kinda feel sorry for tom now, lol. I want bill to forgive him!!!! even though he doesnt deserve it! >
Author's Response: goody :D lol, me too, but I also want Bill to forgive him at some point. So we'll see what happens later today when I update :)
Date: 09/30/09 02:12 am Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
*I think...* that whatever Bill wants, he should get, even if it's a guilt trip. That boy has been to hell and back thru this story. Just sayin...lol.
Author's Response: Hmm...well, that's definitely true, he deserves to get anything and everything he wants from Tom, after what Tom did...we'll see what happens when I update again today :D
Date: 09/30/09 12:33 am Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
This story is seriously amazing. Very realistic; in real life, I doubt any one would forgive someone that quickly, and you did a nice job portraying that in your fic. :)
Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D Yeah, I thought of other stories I read where the characters were forgiven much too easily, and I thought it wasn't realistic at all, so I decided not to do that in my own stories. And thanks again :D I'm updating today :)
Date: 09/30/09 12:28 am Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
hee hee, i like the bill hasn't forgiven him yet, but is still giving him a chance. its the way it should be. tom should not be forgiven easily.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it :D and thanks for reviewing my other story (i forget if it was "Es War Der Schrei" or "Off The Edge" but thanks all the same!) you're right, Tom needs to grovel for forgiveness.....I think so anyway ;)
Date: 09/30/09 12:06 am Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
Wonder what it's going to take for Bill to forgive Tom? I'm always ready for a new chapter...
Author's Response: :D i'll update today :D
Date: 09/29/09 10:45 pm Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
thank you!!
Author's Response: no problemo ;)`
Date: 09/29/09 10:13 pm Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
this is soso cute=]=]
Author's Response: thank you :D
Date: 09/29/09 09:55 pm Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
ahhhhhhhh I love this i soo should have been studying for my Geometry test but i couldnt stop reading..and then you leave me with this cliff hanger..shame shame shame. I am going to track you down xD HEHE jK. Much love
Author's Response: :D well, study for your test, I don't want your grades to slip! sorry about the cliffhanger ;) lmao now I'm scared...*hides behind Bill* ;)
Date: 09/29/09 09:48 pm Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
hmm for me, i just wanna see bill and tom beat the crap out of the kids at school who bullied them... and more seducing. :D hahah, but you asked me about my day yesterday. :p i mostly upset because my best friend has to put her cat down. :( especially since i was there when she was born, and helped my friend pick out which kitten she wanted. :p
Author's Response: that might be unrealistic though...and lol. oh, I'm sorry :( I hate saying I know how people feel, cause no one really does know how you feel, but in this case I do know...to an extent. The same thing happened to me a while back, and I was pretty upset too, but it wasn't my cat either, it was my cousin's...anyway, RIP *insert cat's name here*
Date: 09/29/09 09:14 pm Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
you can let Bill tease Tom but dont take too much longer before all is forgiven?
Author's Response: hmm...we shall see in the next chapter :D
Date: 09/29/09 08:44 pm Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
*gives cupcake*
hmm.
I want the sex, but that would be unrealistic.
So, I think Tom should wait.
:D
Author's Response: *accepts cupcake* thank you! :D lol, but you're right, it would be unrealistic, wouldn't it? specially cause bill just got out of a coma and all that. we shall see...when i post the next chapter ;)
Date: 09/29/09 08:28 pm Title: I Don't Forgive You Yet
Aw! Thank-you for dedicating this to me, :]!
I read your chapter end notes, and i, well im not excatly to sure about what you would call it (i only signed up to this website a couple of days ago), but, i clicked on the 'feature a fic' link and featured yours :]
Uhm, i think.. Tom and Bill should continue with what's happening right now (;
I love this chapter! :D
Author's Response: you are very welcome :D you deserved it - you reviewed EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER! Do you know how happy that made me? Well, I'll tell you, cause you probably don't. I did a happy dance! :D OMG thank you thank you thank you!!! that makes me SO happy, you have no idea! This fic means a lot to me, and I'm thinking about trying to self-publish it and make it a book, if I change the names and all that. So THANK YOU once again! :D and lol, we'll see....*cue evil laugher* ;)