Date: 09/22/09 12:58 am Title: In Pieces
Oh so I see now tom is gay as well hehehe I'm so slow but I sooo think bill should make tom his bitch!! Lol
Author's Response: hehe yeah, that was his little secret...and still is, shh! but it won't be for long. LOL haha xD
Date: 09/22/09 12:53 am Title: In Pieces
Was this a flashback or the present? I didn't get it.
Author's Response: this was the present, sorry that it was unclear. i edited it a little to clarify.
Date: 09/22/09 12:05 am Title: In Pieces
bill seems like he's having panic attacks or anxiety attacks. but that kiss seemed so real I was starting to think Tom was showing his true feelings but I guess I was fooled like Bill. poor Bill. And Tom needs to be outed so he can feel what Bill goes through.
Author's Response: you're catching on :) the answer is panic attacks, i'll explain it in the next chapter or the one after that. as for the rest of your comment - you're really catching on! :) the next chapter will be dedicated to you.
Date: 09/21/09 11:40 pm Title: In Between
How bout Track 10: "In Between"?
Author's Response: thank you sososo much! feel free to keep suggesting names if i don't name a chapter!
Date: 09/21/09 10:02 pm Title: In Pieces
i like weird chapters. muy intersante
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 09/21/09 07:09 pm Title: In Pieces
well, i'm very curious to see where this is going, so keep up the good work please! =)
Author's Response: wow, thanks :)
Date: 09/21/09 10:27 am Title: Bleed It Out
Hmmm...what could it be that bill knows??
Author's Response: :) you'll find out soon enough...or you can take a guess, if you want.
Date: 09/21/09 04:07 am Title: Valentine's Day
Bill knows Toms secret and I want more!!!!!! I love this!!! Give me more soon!!!
Author's Response: wow, thanks so much :) i'll do my best to post chapter 4 sometime today.
Date: 09/21/09 03:29 am Title: Valentine's Day
great story, a lil bit fast, but still enjoyable. keep it up :)
Author's Response: thanks :) i'll drag it out a little more...i don't know what direction exactly it's going in, but we'll see.
Date: 09/21/09 03:08 am Title: Valentine's Day
Oh Oh oh! Now I'm curious!
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 09/20/09 11:25 pm Title: In Between
It looks pretty interesting, a bit of a cliché, 'cause Bill is almost always the freak u.u
Author's Response: thanks :) yeah, i know. but in this case he has a secret weapon...and not to worry, there'll be someone joining him very soon. unlike in most cases, bill actually gains the upper hand in this story, rather than staying the pitiful outcast.
Date: 09/19/09 11:22 pm Title: Bleed It Out
So can you like kill luke off ;) I will give you cupcakes =] but so far so good
Author's Response: um...haha yeah, i don't know if i can do that...thanks for the cupcake offer though =] but i don't think i'll kill anyone in this story. but thanks :) i'll udate sometime today.
Date: 09/19/09 05:36 pm Title: Bleed It Out
I liked it!!!! The only bad thing is now I'm all anxious for the next chapter!!! Update soon pleaseee.... :D
Date: 09/19/09 05:35 pm Title: Bleed It Out
I liked it!!!! The only bad thing is now I'm all anxious for the next chapter!!! Update soon pleaseee.... :D
Author's Response: wow, thanks :D i will post another chapter sometime today.
Date: 09/19/09 04:31 pm Title: Bleed It Out
it was good so far, i'd love to see where it goes =]
Author's Response: thanks very much :) i'll post another chapter sometime today.
Date: 09/19/09 03:40 pm Title: Bleed It Out
interesting start...pleeeease continue!
suggestion for chapter name?? either Bleed It Out or In Peices :)
loved it! :D fern xx
Author's Response: thanks :) and thank you so much for the chapter name suggestion! i named it "bleed it out". feel free to continue suggesting names if i don't name a chapter right away. and there should be another chapter posted sometime today.
Date: 09/19/09 02:47 pm Title: Bleed It Out
im liking this already! Tom an ass so far! luke needs to die! update soon!
Author's Response: thanks :) yeah, i know...there should be another chapter up sometime today.
Date: 09/19/09 02:33 pm Title: Bleed It Out
OMG! this sounds awesome please update soon i can't wait.
Author's Response: thanks :) there should be another chapter posted today.
Date: 09/19/09 02:19 pm Title: Bleed It Out
MORE!! Soon please!
Author's Response: there should be another chapter up sometime today :)