Date: 12/28/19 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!
Date: 06/08/11 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cute ending, lol. This was pretty damn sexy!! I gotta say though, that I kept waiting for Bill to get fucked by Tom while Christine rode Bill, or for them to DP her. That's just what my mind was foreshadowing, but it didn't happen. Oh well. Maybe next time? :)
You write smut very well I think. The times the twins kiss eachother and all the other super hot moments are punctuated and visual and it's great! I also love the way the twins interact and look at eachother. Very very sexy. Well done.
Date: 10/24/10 02:46 am Title: Chapter 1
This is probably the best threesome scene i've ever read.
Author's Response: oh my goodness,.. thank you!!! :)
Date: 07/30/10 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! This is some really hot smut! :D
Date: 10/09/09 01:01 am Title: Chapter 1
super, super hot! Great het sex, and a bit of slash too. Really creative. :)
Date: 09/29/09 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh god....that was HOTT !
*is speechless and in need of a cold shower*
Well done!
Date: 09/16/09 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked it. The level of writing was great. Usually the groupie is demeaned somehow, in favor of the twin's relationship. But you created a great dynamic that allowed all three to be connected (no pun intended)
Author's Response: thank you so much. and yeah i did notice that the groupie was usually just used like a whore but basically ignored in most stories of this kind, but i wanted to steer away from that. good to know i did the job!
Date: 09/16/09 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1
you guys are freaking awesome!!! and i think i can muster up a round two for you. lol ;)
Date: 09/16/09 08:47 am Title: Chapter 1
I second that about round two even though round one was really really hot - well I'm barely coherent, sorry :O)
Uh, and I love your threesome smut... and you!!!
Date: 09/16/09 08:17 am Title: Chapter 1
well..*gulps*..hmm
it was REALLY HOT!!!
maybe you can write about round two?;)