Date: 10/10/09 10:08 am Title: {six}
Oh. My. God. You have me practically shaking here. That shower scene and then Tom stopping Bill at the door. You have to get another part up before next Friday, you just HAVE to.
Author's Response: :D A little bit evil, y/y? It made for a good break, though, honestly. I knew the first sex was going to be a long and involved scene so I HAD to stop it there. And, TWO parts! Whoosh! Working on more already to update by the time I get back to internet access. ;) Thanks, Jen!
Date: 10/10/09 08:49 am Title: {six}
BWWWWAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!! *MEGAFLAIL*
First, sorry about calling you Rose in that last review. I had totally been skimming her LJ before I read that chapter and had it on my brain. I'm totally embarrassed. Dx
Second, omfgeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this chapter killed me dead. My heart was pounding and my nose was nearly touching my computer screen by the end. I didn't even realized it until I pulled back to breathe. lol
You know I can't wait for the next. And I'm loving all these updates. You rock.
Author's Response: Eeee, yay for causing a megaflail! No problem, I didn't mind. ;) I'm so thrilled that it was so intense for you! This is one of those fics that has just been writing itself, and I am soooo not complaining. (Although it kinda hurts other updates...) Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.
Date: 10/10/09 08:46 am Title: {six}
Holy hell. I need a cold, cold shower. I think this was so cute, sexy and very realistic. Whoa.
Author's Response: Woo woo! Thank you, I'm glad I did it right. The cute is just because...argh, Tom and Bill! Thank you for your review!
Date: 10/10/09 08:35 am Title: {five}
Ok sorry, great chapter and all, but I'm too built up to click to next chapter to leave a reasonable review. Sorry but you're just that good :)
Author's Response: Hee, sorry to get you wound up like that! ;) Thanks so much for your reviews, I'm really happy you're enjoying the story!
Date: 10/10/09 08:25 am Title: {four}
Ouch. Tom you dick. Well, thinking with his dick (thought not entirely). It's all so much fun and excitement, but still, I feel slightly bad for Bill - especially when Tom said that it's not that big of a deal, when that's exactly what it should be.
Author's Response: Eheh...well...yeah, Tom was thinking with his dick, and really, this Tom is not used to making the first move - he's seriously used to girls just throwing themselves at him. So when his subtle little moves aren't met with Bill, you know, flinging himself at Tom, he took more direct measures...and kinda...overshot the mark. =D And yeah, trying to tell Bill it wasn't a big deal was not the best way to go about convincing him!
Date: 10/10/09 08:24 am Title: {six}
Tom is sooo damn pushy.. but I like it..
Author's Response: Good thing. ;D He's gonna keep being pushy!
Date: 10/10/09 08:13 am Title: {three}
Mmm. This was such a sexy chapter, the chemistry between them, makes my heart flutter. Wow. You're really good at creating such a charged environment with a few subtle hints, and it's so good.
Author's Response: Thank you, your comments here really make me feel I've done my job right in portraying their chemistry. =) Definitely glad that the charged atmosphere is coming across. Thanks for your reviews!
Date: 10/10/09 07:35 am Title: {one}
Oh wow, just like that I'm very intriqued! College friendship AU's are not always my cup of tea, but this one has something really neat about it, I'm looking forward to indulging in this universe and seeing what happens :)
Author's Response: College AUs aren't usually my cuppa, either, so I'm still kind of surprised I started one! But very pleased with such an overwhelming positive response. I'm so glad you're reading, and enjoying it!
Date: 10/10/09 06:33 am Title: {six}
y...i dnt get y tom wants to do it with bill....it confuses me so. bill is ryt by keepin to avoid tomi, i luv the angst...nd i luv hw andi is always conviniently never there O_-
i wanna no wat toms intentions r
Author's Response: That's the challenge with the fic being limited to Bill's perspective! We don't get any insight directly from Tom. But, Bill has been observing certain cues that should be giving him hints and he's not reading them properly! ;D
Date: 10/10/09 04:58 am Title: {six}
I'm so excited about the next chapter. I think Bill should admit what he feels and tell Tom that it'd be more than just a sex for him.
Author's Response: Haha, me too! We've definitely been building up to it, right? Alas, they are both dense boys and it can't be that easy.
Date: 10/10/09 04:49 am Title: {six}
OMG. cruel. but amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you. =)
Date: 10/10/09 03:29 am Title: {six}
*BRAINMELT* Need. Next. Chapter. Pleeeaasssee.
Author's Response: =D =D =D *delivers it* Yay for brainmelty!
Date: 10/10/09 03:26 am Title: {six}
Oh good GOD, woman. My husband was hovering over me, wanting attention, wanting to chatter at me and there was no way I could even care what he was babbling about. All I could do was read this chapter and try to breathe. TRY to breathe. THAT was intense.
Bill let Tom jerk him off but was gonna bail after? Rude, sir, that is rude! I'm glad Tom was able to stop him. And the bit by the door was ... Idek, but you write some damn good porn. UNF!
Can you get another chapter up by next Friday? Oh, I SO hope so! :D
Author's Response: Ooh, I got your attention to the exclusion of the spouse?? I am honored, deeply! :D Seriously - it means a lot to me that the chapter riveted you that much.rn
I don't think he was going to bail completely; he just needed some space then he was going to try to lay down expectations (we touch each other's 'areas' but don't kiss, etc.) when Tom kind of...laid waste to the rules. Ahh, glad to hear it! And, I posted another chapter, tonight. ;) Last one for now, I swear.
Date: 10/10/09 03:11 am Title: {six}
OH
MY
GOD
*combusts*
How can something PG-13 rated be so freaking hot? The next part is going to end me, I know. This is fdsgjsdkgjsdkgjsdkgjsd.
Author's Response: :D :D :D I had to sneakily change the rating, I think that chapter was somewhere between R and NC-17. And the next part...yeah. *sheepish* HURRAH FOR KEYBOARD MASH, THOUGH.
Date: 10/10/09 03:08 am Title: {six}
HOT.
Just want to get that one out there. ;)
And, I loved it, as usual! I'm glad that Bill hasn't suddenly thown caution th wind, that he hasn't forgotten his hesitation and his fears; it just makes it so realistic! I mean... I.. it... I'm just speechless! lol.
The balance between Bill's fears and his desires is just amazingly well done. And the fact that Tom's not entirely confident about it, despite the fact that he initiated it, only makes everything seem so much more real.
And on top of that, everything was just so staggeringly hot. ;)
Can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: Good, good! Oh, nope, Bill is still very much trying to protect his heart, but so unable to resist the lure of Tom's sexy. ;) I'm very pleased it's coming across so realistically. And even more pleased that, despite it being solely Bill's POV, Tom seems to be pretty transparent to you all. :D Thank you, thank you! More after the break. I really appreciate your reviews, it's so helpful to me to see what you think.
Date: 10/10/09 02:22 am Title: {five}
You know the only person Bill would find qualified enough to do him is Tom. He'd better cop to that unequivocally, or risk reenacting The 40 Year Old Virgin.
Author's Response: It's true, it's so damned true. Well, he's trying not to fool himself anymore, I think. But he doesn't want to get his heart done broke!
Date: 10/09/09 04:49 pm Title: {five}
ugh, cliffhanger! poor Bill... :(
fabulous fic, off to track!
Author's Response: Yes indeed, it always seems the best place to leave off! ;D Thank you! And chapter six is up.
Date: 10/09/09 11:23 am Title: {five}
I can't wait to see the clash XD
Author's Response: It sure is something. XD Thanks for your review and I hope you like chapter six! ;D
Date: 10/09/09 12:09 am Title: {five}
:O i'm glad bill's giving in, but i'm worried now hahaha xD gah, so excited for more xo
Author's Response: It's good to be worried for him. ;) He's risking a lot! Thanks for your review, I hope you like the next chapter - it's up!
Date: 10/08/09 11:46 pm Title: {five}
I love how Bill totally talked himself into it. Hello justification. But his thought process made sense in the end...for someone smitten. I have to wonder if he wouldn't have found any way he could to talk himself into it.
"Because I pay attention to you," Tom whispered back.
Uh huh. I think Bill's not the only one with a crush. Can't wait for more. :D
Author's Response: He did, he totally did. Like someone else noted, Tom's really the only person Bill is going to "find" qualified to do him, eheh. He'll just keep turning down other contenders...
Glad that's coming through to people, I definitely definitely didn't want Tom coming across as an unfeeling asshole.