Date: 10/11/09 03:55 pm Title: {six}
As hot as this is, I kind of feel bad for Bill =/. And a part of me doesn't want him to go through with it D:
Butttttttt I can't wait to see what happens either way x]
Author's Response: I think most of us feel bad for Bill, poor baby. Still, he is a boy with a functioning sex drive, so....yeah. And we're definitely gonna see what happens!
Date: 10/11/09 02:11 pm Title: {six}
:D
Author's Response: =D
Date: 10/11/09 08:35 am Title: {six}
NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! WHY? WHY? WHY? WHY? WWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?????????
I LOVED it!!!! So tense and sexual, grrr. God, you know how to put all the right details in this story.
UPDATE QUICKLY!!!!
Author's Response: Heh heh. Thank you! And hey, this one's been getting updated pretty quickly. ;) Glad you enjoyed, even if it made you a bit frustrated!
Date: 10/11/09 04:32 am Title: {six}
this is so good!! and i'm glad there is more angst. because its highly unlikely they would have sex and tom will suddenly see the light and realize he is in love with bill. more angst will ensure first. great story so far, i really like it. i love this shy timid bill and how gentle tom is trying to be. they have a great relationship. keep up the fabulous work, i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Oh yes, more angst. Definitely. On both sides. ;) I'm really glad you're enjoying the story and I hope to post lots more in the near future!
Date: 10/11/09 12:30 am Title: {six}
Dear God this is good >< And I can't believe it just ended like that! Aaaaaaah!
Author's Response: Thank you, so much. ♥ Hey, it happened to be a logical chapter break. ;D Sadism had NOTHING to do with it. *innocent*
Date: 10/10/09 11:58 pm Title: {six}
damn hot. :) this is really nice. I'm sure there will be more angst and drama, but I'm ready for the next chapter for sure!!! :)
Author's Response: Excellent! Oh yes, more angst and drama for sure. ;D Even in the next chapter! Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying.
Date: 10/10/09 11:38 pm Title: {six}
This fic is so adorably sexy (^_^)
Author's Response: Thank you, that makes me sooo glad. ^_^
Date: 10/10/09 08:55 pm Title: {six}
Omg, need the next button!!
Author's Response: ...Duplicate? =O This came several hours later, weird.
Date: 10/10/09 07:29 pm Title: {six}
i wonder .. why reading your story turns me on xDD
Author's Response: *snicker* Thank you!
Date: 10/10/09 06:10 pm Title: {six}
:O oh. my. god. LOVE. Fmddjdjdjdnsjsj O_O
Author's Response: This seems to be inspiring a lot of keyboard mashing! =D Thank you!rn
Date: 10/10/09 05:52 pm Title: {six}
OMFG! YOu left me hanging! keep it comin!
Author's Response: Hey, it was a natural chapter break! :D Thanks, glad you're still enjoying.
Date: 10/10/09 05:32 pm Title: {six}
You DEFINTILY need to get up another chapter before you leave, right now preferably, but I'll settle for ASAP (you know like...tomorrow) as well ;) come on, we NEED it!
Author's Response: I definitely had to! And of course, the angst marches on.. ;D Thanks for your review!
Date: 10/10/09 02:47 pm Title: {six}
Well, I thought Bill knew what Tom wanted, he seemed a little, daft? though. So now are they really gonna do it? But Bill's terrified
Author's Response: Billi's dennnnnnnse. Such a dense boy. Daft in love. Yup, and Tom will handle him, of course! ;D
Date: 10/10/09 01:56 pm Title: {six}
*has this feeling low in my gut that reminds me of arousal*
Damn, the manga wasn't HALF as hot as this xD
I....okay, before I start fangirling over the pre-smut smut, the angst is PERFECT. I can totally imagine myself as Bill, nervous as fucking, YEARNING to do this, but knowing that it could fuck things up SO BADLY.
Gah, I need more of that. Don't even mind that the angst is gonna pile up later because your writing style is amazing.
I'm super excited.
and now onto the smut review. *fans self* THAT WAS OBNOXIOUSLY YET NECESSARILY HOT DAMMIT. I heart you muchly for writing that xD
Author's Response: I like to think I've made certain improvements. :D And where Ryoji was really kind of...businesslike, truly?...Tom is definitely taking his sweet time exploring Bill's body. ;D But my poor baby Bill, he's having a bad time of it! He's going to throw us for a loop soon, though.
Thank you thank you thank you! "Obnoxiously yet necessarily hot" may be my favoritest comment ever regarding a smut scene I've written. ♥
Date: 10/10/09 01:47 pm Title: {four}
LOL. (guilty of Coldplay looping).
Haha, I've never read Bill so...reluctant to be with Tom, even though he does like him, so odd! I love this :D
Author's Response: It totally helped the scene-setting. *nod* Hey, this Bill is quite virginal, and he has...er...had aspirations. Glad you love it; hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 10/10/09 01:32 pm Title: {six}
Yes! It's really gonna happen! And I love how caring you made Tom. I knew he wasn't going to be a jerk about all of it, but it was nice to see him so sweet. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yes it is! And Tom's definitely sweet on Bill. ;) Thank you!
Date: 10/10/09 01:24 pm Title: {six}
I just re-read the manga (again) last night in anticipation of reading this chapter today, and I must say, you always take the best scenes and make them even better. The shower was amazingly hot, and I do believe my head is going to spontaneously combust if the next chapter is even steamier. Guh.
Author's Response: :D That makes me so, so happy to hear. I really love your reviews, and parallelheartz's, and crayonskies' and Eiri's and Dailanche's, because you've all read the manga and I really like to hear whether my changes are working. I like to think Tom is more sympathetic (and waaaay less ambiguous) than Ryoji. And I've still got some twists coming up for y'all.
Date: 10/10/09 12:50 pm Title: {six}
this chapter was so cute!
the moment when tom went into the shower...bill's reaction was priceless..lol..
i weally weally ;) hope bill doesn't run in the next chapter...can't wait!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Priceless and in character for this Bill; half scandalized, half so turned on he couldn't move. XD And Bill didn't run, woohoo! Glad you're still enjoying.
Date: 10/10/09 12:44 pm Title: {six}
I feel like I might explode. Geebus!! <3333
Author's Response: I like to build up a good anticipation for the main event. =D
Date: 10/10/09 12:42 pm Title: {six}
Omg, need the next button!!
Author's Response: Heh heh, should be there now! ;D But you already knew that.