Date: 10/13/09 12:15 am Title: {seven}
Ahaha, awwww. :3 Thank you for updating so quickly! Lovely Kaulitzcest muses. :D I may or may not have left a comment before, but if I haven't I apologize.. I started reading this and got addicted from the first chapter.. this is definitely going on my favorite stories list! :D
Lovely smutty chapter.. I'm excited to see what "tomorrow" brings. ;)
Author's Response: You did, and I thank you for both reviews! I'm really pleased you're enjoying this, and it's been quite something to write! "Tomorrow..." ah, the infamous morning after. ;D
Date: 10/13/09 12:06 am Title: {seven}
awwwww. they love each other but won't admit it!! it's so sad!! but i'm sure you'll make it work :) keep writing! please post soon
Author's Response: Hee hee. I'm not sayin' nothin'. We've still got a ways to go, with these two! And nothing can stop me now.
Date: 10/13/09 12:01 am Title: {seven}
They'd better talk about this, and soon, like before you leave!
Author's Response: Pfft. Talk? Boys? Come on... Well, we had SOMETHING before I left. *hides*
Date: 10/12/09 11:54 pm Title: {seven}
LOVE THIS
Author's Response: Thank you! =D
Date: 10/12/09 11:53 pm Title: {six}
Love the sexual tension...i'm hoping Tom is secretly in love with Bill and can't wait to see what happns in the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! And, we'll just have to find out...I can't spoil the surprises for you!
Date: 10/12/09 11:46 pm Title: {seven}
I think this might have broken my heart, just a little. I might have cried actual tears as well. Damnit--I need hugs now. *clings*
Author's Response: *hugs* These boys... they're really breaking my heart, hon. Sorry they made you cry, and I can't guarantee they won't do it again before the end! *more hugs*
Date: 10/12/09 11:31 pm Title: {seven}
I hold thumbs for Georg! Is there a poll? I need to vote this chapter the best sex scene ever. It was beautiful despite Bill's pessimism
Author's Response: Ahaha, you're looking forward to Georg? Poor Tom! Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Beautiful is definitely one of the things I aimed for.
Date: 10/12/09 11:22 pm Title: {seven}
UGH HOT. and UGH heartbreaking because i know bill's feeling SO well. i'm sure many of us do. even if he is oblivious.
Author's Response: So glad that it is both, and so intended! ...Just a little bit oblivious, yes. Thank you!
Date: 10/12/09 11:13 pm Title: {seven}
I think I believe Tom is in like/in love with Bill. Or I could be wrong.. Hahahaha..XD But if he did offering Bill Sex so bluntly is just... Bleeehhh..
Anyways, looking forward to the next update!!XD
Author's Response: Hmmm, I can't say! ;) We're going to have to make do with Bill's perspective. But Bill's picking up things even HE doesn't realize, of course. Thank you! The next one came quickly, I hope I can continue to write so fast!
Date: 10/12/09 11:08 pm Title: {seven}
Oh my god, I love you. This was such a beautiful, realistic first time. I almost cried. This hurts my heart so much but I love it. This has to go to my favorites now--it's just so beautiful.
Author's Response: ♥ ♥ ♥ It means the world to me that you said that. I'm over the moon that it came together like this and that it has touched so many people. Thank you! We've got more angst ahead but keep holding on!
Date: 10/12/09 11:00 pm Title: {seven}
T___T You made me cry. (That's a good thing by the way.) The sexing was sooo delicious and brilliant and HOT, and the emotions, especially towards the end, were just T___T. Oh Bill. Oh Tom.
I was a bit worried about how it would happen because of the way the Tom-character in the manga did things, but I'm so glad you twisted it this way. I think the unfolding story will be even more touching because of how you changed it.
I hope you are never cured of your Kaulitzcest possession, and I hope it gets you to post again quickly! XD
Author's Response: T_T Sorry! But...not sorry? :D Bittersweet and delicious, that's the way we like it. I'm really pleased you think this is an improvement over the manga in that respect... and we've got some other twists yet to come. ;) And damn but they were WITH me earlier this week! Thanks for your review!
Date: 10/12/09 10:59 pm Title: {seven}
BILL YOU SILLY BOY
!!!!!!!!!!
Very hot! These boys need to actually say what they're thinking, and listen to the other person, and then there'd be less confusion and heartache, but that would be insanely unrealistic and then there'd be no story. :F
I am ready for the drama!
Author's Response: HE IS, HE IS. Oh man, if they said what they were thinking, would they really be BOYS though?? Even a sensitive boy like Bill is prone to making stupid assumptions and not, damn it, putting himself out there and ASKING in order to clear them up. Drama is UP, chapter eight posted! ;D
Date: 10/12/09 10:57 pm Title: {seven}
HOT.
And the way Bill kept thinking over how it was just a one night thing made my heart clench Poor Bill! And, if what I'm picking up about Tom is somewhat accurate, then poor Tom!
This is just so well done and BRILLIANT that I can't get over it. I really can't. I love it! :) Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I know, my poor Bill. ;_; And methinks you've got the right idea for Tom as well...it's like a train wreck! Thank you so much, I'm utterly glad you're continuing to enjoy it. And there's definitely more to come.
Date: 10/12/09 10:55 pm Title: {seven}
*hyperventalates*
OMG, okay, the sex was UGH, HOT, but OMG, the angst. . .poor boys. . .
Tom was so sweet and loving, and Bill's too innocent to know that. . . they so both have broken hearts right now :(
Ohhh, Georg? *rubs hands in anticipation*
Gah, what's with you and Gaja, giving me itchy fingers when I have work to do? (amythystmoon=amythystluna on lj, btw)
Author's Response: Awww. =D Glad the hotness and the heartbreak is coming through so clearly! And yes, there's Biorg on the horizon. ...Poor Tom. ;D Thanks for your review! Heyy, we just go where our muses take us, you know?
Date: 10/12/09 10:52 pm Title: {seven}
The sex scene was both unbelievably hot and totally heartbreaking. And even though it's probably integral to the plot, I'm so skittish about the Georg thing, mainly because I do love Tom's character and I know there's gonna be some heartbreak there (even though his inability to communicate makes me want to smack him...in fact, I want to smack Bill for his obliviousness as well...). Anywho, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: *happy sigh* So intended. Have faith! But yes, these boys aren't out of the angst pit yet, and I'm glad you can see that Bill's got his fair share of denseness contributing to the mess. Thank you for your review!
Date: 10/12/09 10:41 pm Title: {seven}
Okay, I absolutely love you. XD
I just really feel bad for Bill and all of his loneliness. I'm waiting for a break down in front of Tom. You actually read my mind because I was expecting Bill to scream "I love you!" or something like that. I'm just anticipating Bill's break down. I looove this. :D
Author's Response: Good, good. Oh my yes, poor Bill does appear headed for a breakdown, huh? He's pretty strong, though. Glad you're loving it, thanks for your review!
Date: 10/12/09 07:49 pm Title: {six}
So angry.
SO angry you didn't finish the sex.
I really could slap you. >:o
Author's Response: Well then, I hope the newly-posted chapter seven will not leave you unsatisfied. =D
Date: 10/12/09 02:40 am Title: {six}
Oh no--you can't leave me hanging right there!! You simply MUST post the next chapter before you leave! *pleads*
The angst is delightful. And I really loved the way you ended this chapter.
Author's Response: =D Awww, I'm not that sadistic. And these boys have really crawled in and made a home for themselves, I swear!
Thank you. Originally it was one long scene, but this really made for a logical break, considering how long the first sex turned out to be. ;D
Date: 10/11/09 06:36 pm Title: {six}
:D I'm loving this story.. their interactions and Bill's responses are amazing and adorable, respectively. :) I just spotted this story and you have me hooked!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad to hear it! This has been coming together really well for me. I hope the boys continue to be every bit as inspiring as they have been so far! And I hope you continue to enjoy.
Date: 10/11/09 05:33 pm Title: {six}
.:)))))).
Author's Response: =D!