Date: 10/13/09 07:45 pm Title: {seven}
oh gawwwd...that was hot and sexy!
and bill ran away...hunf...want to see them together!!!
awesomeeeeeee fic
Author's Response: Thanks! Yup, Bill is running again...poor baby. We've got a ways to go! Glad you're enjoying.
Date: 10/13/09 05:42 pm Title: {seven}
AMAZING CHAPPIE! WRITE MOREE
Author's Response: Thank you! More is posted, more to come!
Date: 10/13/09 05:14 pm Title: {seven}
a-awe.
I can feel Bill's heart break.
Author's Response: It did, it definitely did. Poor Billy.
Date: 10/13/09 04:17 pm Title: {seven}
Simply amazing, I regret not reading this story before, but when Steinsgrrl talked about this I had to read it. I'm so glad I did.
You write so intense and outstanding. This chapter was almost too hot for me.. *fans self*
I hope you update soon :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're giving it a chance now! And blushing from your lovely compliments, thank you. Chapter eight is up, and more to come when I return!
Date: 10/13/09 03:58 pm Title: {seven}
Holy shit. That was well written, lol. Not just the sex part (giggles) but the emotion behind it; it was perfect. God damn, that was a good chapter lol. I definitely can't wait to see the next one.
Author's Response: =) Thank you on both counts! I'm really pleased with how it came out, and all of your responses make me happy that I achieved what I was aiming for. More is posted; more to come!
Date: 10/13/09 03:14 pm Title: {seven}
Congrats, you just pulled off sexy angsty cute sweet perfect all at the same time. I love, absolutely love this story. And I really want to see what a thoroughly done Bill looks like. Omnomnom. Tom finding out stuff before, to not hurt Bill, was the cutest thing ever. Ah, I'm so deeply happy now. (Except I'm not, I want to read twelve more chapters in one go.)
Author's Response: It came together so well! *still in shock* I'm really glad that the chapter seems to have conveyed exactly what I wanted it to. ...I wanna see thoroughly-done Bill doo. :D I imagine it looks SOMEWHAT like he does after a good long concert. *rumples him* More chapters to come, though I dunno if it's twelve exactly!
Date: 10/13/09 12:54 pm Title: {seven}
D= NO. aweeee poor tomi and billa.
Author's Response: I know, poor boys. ;_;
Date: 10/13/09 10:32 am Title: {seven}
god this is amazing! of course it's hot, but I love how heartfelt and loving it was and how sweet and caring Tom was being (even though Bill doesn't really see it). Bill's heartache makes my heart twinge for him, but the entire ending of this chapter also made me ache for Tom's sake as well. More more mooore please :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad all of that is coming through, because Tom is definitely being all of those things, even if he's not SAYING what Bill wants to hear. And Bill, poor baby. He's being more than a little dense for such a sensitive young man. More delivered; more to come!
Date: 10/13/09 07:47 am Title: {seven}
This is only getting better and better. Bill struggling not to get his heart broken is so realistic. Thank you for the quick updates.
Author's Response: Thank you! He's trying but Tom is making it awfully difficult for him! I was pleased I was able to make such quick updates. =)
Date: 10/13/09 07:33 am Title: {seven}
Oh that actually hurt my heart. A lot. For both of them. They are so blind and it just makes me sad. Itwasstillhotthough.
Author's Response: I know, my poor babies. I just want to sit them down and make them have a talk. Such BOYS they are. Thank you! (Glad it was hot too.) ;D
Date: 10/13/09 07:26 am Title: {seven}
its a chilly autumn day here too and a perfect one for enjoying your fic with a mug of tea. It was a wonderful chapter - they are both so love sick it aches
Author's Response: Love sick...yes, good way to put it. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, thank you!
Date: 10/13/09 06:27 am Title: {seven}
O____O fuuuhh that was SO hot ugh. I just really hope it's not a one time thing. Poor Bill, it breaks my heart that he's so sad D:
Author's Response: Thank you thank you! We'll have to wait and see, right? I know, my poor Billy!
Date: 10/13/09 06:18 am Title: {seven}
Cold autumn? Where do you live? because here it's everything but cold.
On a second note, man...I love this story, I loved the sex and I love just how silly Bill can be. If Tom was ready to have sex with him, then he's not as straight as they all thought, and I was always told that if you want something, fight for it.
Anyway, with how tender and loving Tom was being, I'd think that Tom has a crush on Bill, but then again, I've met a load of men that are lovely when fucking you, but they only like you as a friend, so...meh. Keep it coming (no pun intended), because I'm hooked. Oh, and it was really hot :)
Author's Response: Oregon, and we had a bit of a chilly spell. It started to warm up right before I left, of course.
I'm glad, I'm so glad! Bill's just...adorably dense. And all too willing to believe the worst, rather than hope for the best. And I think Tom's tenderness has been extending to more than the bedroom. ;) Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 10/13/09 04:44 am Title: {seven}
Had to check for a pulse. Shit, son.
Author's Response: Woohoo! Success, my job here is done.
Date: 10/13/09 03:20 am Title: {seven}
*awws and growls with rage simultaneously*
I loved this chapter sooo much but it made my heart ache as well. For Bill and Tom. Tom so clearly wanted him to stay, and I may be being hopeful here, but wanted more later. I definitely think there's something under Tom's skin that he wants to get out and I hope it comes to the surface soon. D: My heart aches for Bill's aching heart as well. When he started crying during 'the deed' I had to bite my lip from crying too. Ugh!
So much love for this. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I'm glad to provoke such a wide variety of reactions! And I don't think it's too much of a spoiler to say you're on to something with Tom. ;) And poor Bill just doesn't, won't see it. Thank you! More up and more to come, and this roller-coaster isn't over...
Date: 10/13/09 02:27 am Title: {one}
So... I'll admit. I've cheated by having read 'Desire' and although I have a pretty good idea how the story will continue, I still feel very excited when I see an update.
I think you do a wonderful job to stay true to the story but keep it fresh and new at the same time!
Preparing myself now for the Georg move (wriggles eyebrows) and the angst!
Author's Response: I'm glad it excites you! I'm definitely changing things as we go along, and you're going to see a few twists. ;) And Georg is fun to write! Thanks so much for the compliments.
Date: 10/13/09 01:52 am Title: {seven}
You know, this blinking cursor does nothing for my broken brain. Or my broken heart. Okay, it's not broken, just bleeding a little. That was incredibly intense and amazing. Your cruise is going to seem outrageously long.
Author's Response: *sniffle* I couldn't help it, that's just how it had to be! You think that was bad, wait until chapter nine. *shrivel* Intense and amazing makes me very happy to hear. And rest assured, I WILL be writing during the cruise! Wanna come back with updates for everything. My poor boys.
Date: 10/13/09 01:33 am Title: {seven}
LOL
They're both such a mess. Bless them.
*pets the twins*
Author's Response: Definitely a mess, these boys. =) Thank you!
Date: 10/13/09 12:40 am Title: {seven}
-sniffle- Poor Billy! Great chapter though!
Author's Response: He's been getting that a lot, this chapter. This fic. ;) Thank you!
Date: 10/13/09 12:31 am Title: {seven}
*grins*
i totally blushed the entire way through this, AND my brain kept giving me flashbacks of the manga asI read this it was a interesting parallel, tbh.
I loved this, and not just because it was sex, but you managed to put angst in all the right places *nodnod*
I can't wait for the next chapter OR for the Biorg/Tom-Jealousy to start.
Author's Response: Woohoo, blushing! Am so pleased. Yep, bittersweet angsty sex, it was my first time too. XD ...Or maybe it wasn't; I've written a lot of fic. Oh yes, stay tuned for that Biorg/Tom jealousy! Boy needs a kick in the pants, and mebbe that'll do it!