Date: 10/16/09 03:55 pm Title: {eight}
I absolutely love it :)
Date: 10/15/09 10:31 pm Title: {eight}
oh toms so stupid thinking bill and georg damn it..fix it plz=]
Date: 10/15/09 10:10 pm Title: {eight}
Oh my god, I didn't know you'd updated again! You really did. *dances* Tom in this one, by the way, is the sweetest and most adorable playboy ever. What a cutie. And is that a touch of jealousy I spy in him...? Eagerly awaiting the next chapter, in any case, even if it ends horribly. I can always bully you into writing more on twitter, heh.
Date: 10/15/09 04:40 pm Title: {one}
Girl, you are now officially my
f a v o u r i t e author on this site!
I am addicted to this story - it is amazing. I can't wait for next chapter (love angst)
Have fun on your cruise!! (:
Author's Response: *blush* Now that's an accolade I'm not sure I deserve! But I really appreciate the compliments. More fic to come, when I return! Thank you, I intend to have LOTS of fun. And now I'm (mostly) caught up, and here I go!
Date: 10/15/09 09:37 am Title: {eight}
the next chpt is gnna be a heell-of-a-intarestin!!! dude can i tell u dat the last chapt excited me to no end...the passion dn the love and lust...fuk it was amazing, u hv the best writing skills i've come across in such a lng time.......WHHOOOOOOP WHOOOOOOP WHHOOOOOOOPPPPPIIIEE!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!1!1!1!
Date: 10/15/09 08:28 am Title: {eight}
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa i missed this story soooooooooooo much
my internet didn't work for one week
the sex scene was hot hot hot hot
is it me or Tom has feelings for Bill?
ohhh i like the angst but not too much please
Date: 10/15/09 08:16 am Title: {eight}
I'm very glad Tom re-discovers persistence, a little jealousy is usually good for that. =) keep up the great work, I adore this story!
Date: 10/15/09 08:05 am Title: {seven}
wow, this was incredible!! they are such stupid boys though. They obviously need to talk. I think even Tom knows that but Bill is so difficult. I'm so glad I still have another chapter to read!
Author's Response: Definitely being boys about it. What? Talking!? Preposterous! Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying the fic!
Date: 10/14/09 11:17 pm Title: {eight}
Ohhh, seniors with snickerdoodles, the plot thickens!
Tom was adorable--heh, nice touch, having him be all first-aid-y :)
Bill and his mom cracked me up soooooo much
Date: 10/14/09 09:31 pm Title: {eight}
We'll be right here waiting impatiently for updates (^_^) Have fun on your cruise!!! I haven't had any vacation more fun than on a giant boat.
Date: 10/14/09 08:55 pm Title: {eight}
I can't tell you how happy I was to see this update. It made my day.
Date: 10/14/09 08:33 pm Title: {eight}
WHAT???? IS THIS SOME KIND OF PUNISHMENT BECAUSE I DIDN'T REVIEW THE LAST CHAPTER??? I SWEAR IT WASN'T INTENTIONAL!!! MY SISTER WAS BEING A COMPUTER HOG AND I COULDN'T PLAY IT!!! You don't have to believe me, it's true. Review for last chapter:
It was too beautiful. Why Bill is blind, believing that Tom doesn't love him??? I'm tearing up right now because it's painful to imagine to love someone and knowing that they don't love you back. When you describe how Bill was crying thru it, not because of the pain, but of the heartache, believing that he was giving something away to the person he loved and knowing he didn't return the love, it broke my heart. I hate when misunderstandings happen.
Review for this chapter:
I LOVE his mom already.
"Oh, Billy!" she exclaimed excitedly. "Was it...you're not happy about it, are you?" Her voice dropped a register, going from glee to serious in a single sentence.
"No," Bill faltered, then sat down on the edge of his unmade bed with a thump. He winced, one hand going to his tailbone. "Yes. Kind of? It was...good. And I love him, but..."
"You had sex with Tom?" his mother screeched
HOW DO MOM'S DO THAT??? That freak weird 6 sense.
Georg again with his smartass comments. I LOVE THEM!!!!
I was thinking about when you were going to put a scene where Tom see Bill together with Georg when that scene came out. Bea-u-tiful. I loved it. That should teach Tom not to mess with Bill's feelings. I fear a LOT of angst coming up ahead. I ain't too much of a fan of angst stories. Seriously, I try to read them, and I end up abondoning the story. They tend to leave me jumpy. But I'll read, no matter how much angst there is. Only for you ;)
Date: 10/14/09 05:33 pm Title: {eight}
*Sighs and misses you.*
Date: 10/14/09 05:24 pm Title: {eight}
*smells a jealous Tom*
Uh-oh...<333
Date: 10/14/09 04:31 pm Title: {eight}
Tom at the end of this chapter makes me want to punch something.:).
I hope that was the point.
Date: 10/14/09 01:29 pm Title: {eight}
waaaaaaah! No update until after Oct. 25th? I'll diiiiiiiiiiieeee.
This story is great. Enjoy your cruise!
Date: 10/14/09 12:28 pm Title: {eight}
I dunno if I can wait that long o.O
Date: 10/14/09 10:29 am Title: {eight}
NOOOO!!!!! Don't leave me! Not when Tom's blowing Bill off like that, whay can't he just tell Bill he loves him and vice versa?
Date: 10/14/09 09:40 am Title: {eight}
I just started reading this today and I love it. I love how Tom is obviously jealous. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Also I love the fact that at the end of your chapter you give a little preview of the next chapter.
Date: 10/14/09 09:36 am Title: {eight}
Waiting until the 25th for the next chapter will be almost as bad as waiting for the star trek dvd to come out. *pouting* You people take all the fun out of life. Another nice chapter though, Tom seems like he wants to do it again, but Bill's convinced things have to go back to normal or stop entirely. Hopefully Tom's persistence in the next chapter gets Bill to change his mind. :)