Date: 10/28/09 09:40 pm Title: {thirteen}
Poor Tom and poor Bill. They're both such dumb boys. I can't wait to see how this ends up. :) Thanks for the fast updates!
Date: 10/28/09 09:39 pm Title: {thirteen}
Oh hell fucking NO! ;_________________________________;
This is so wrong!!
Date: 10/28/09 09:38 pm Title: {thirteen}
I'm bawling over here...
This whole story is so freaking real to me and hits so close to home.
OMG
Thank you for writing this.
Date: 10/28/09 09:33 pm Title: {thirteen}
My heart broke and shatter all over the floor!Poor Tom! Hes heart broken and Bill is too! I hope Gerog has good intentions! Update soon please!
Date: 10/28/09 09:31 pm Title: {thirteen}
You should totally put up chapter fourteen tonight!!
i have to know what happens next.. like now!
=]
Date: 10/28/09 09:30 pm Title: {twelve}
Oh god. It has been SUCH a long time since I've found a story that made me curl up in bed, turn on sappy love songs, and eat chocolate. This entire story is written so beautifully, it's just...unfffff. I think that the chapter 11 sex scene is one of the best sex scenes I've read in my entire life. I'm a sucker for AU and you do it perfectly...like, the college setting is SO accurate, I feel like I'm reading a day in the life of a real college student. Haha, this is really random, but one little thing stood out to me; Bill mentioned Tri-Delts! They're a sorority at my college too, though they're known as the sluts of campus. I think everyone's slogan for them is "Try Delta, everyone else has".
I am a little annoyed with the characters, though >.> Don't get me wrong, the story's going at a great pace, but can't Tom just admit that he loves Bill already? And can't Bill admit his crush? I mean, shouldn't he be more happy than heartbroken that he has this relationship with Tom, and Tom is so tender with him? Also, Andi is being a complete bastard. I suspect he's making up the whole Ariel thing because he and Tom had a fight over something...maybe Andi is in love with Bill and is jealous? Maybe...
Adding this to my favorites because I will die if I miss an update!
Date: 10/28/09 09:30 pm Title: {thirteen}
I cried...Georg fell for Bill but Bill and Tom love each other and they're oblivious and its breaking my heart and theirs ...I cried so so hard.
Date: 10/28/09 09:22 pm Title: {thirteen}
Bleh... They're both hurt now. Sheeeeesshhh... GEORG!!! I know the boys are hurting but I love Georg sooooo..XD
Obviously Tom was completely hurt too. The stupid boy just couldn't admit his feelings in a mooooreee.. Ehmmm... Normal(?) way lolz..XD I still bet that Ariel was doing some blackmailing to him hahahaha..XD
Well, I'm fine with some Biorg moments in the next ones ahahaha.. And if could rile Tom up then the better... Bahahaha!!!>:D Although that's one of the purpose, is it??XD
Date: 10/28/09 09:21 pm Title: {one}
omg,you updated!i was hoping you would like,the whole day!and i love this story so so much!!
the chapter was heartbreaking btw,please make it good!
Date: 10/28/09 09:18 pm Title: {thirteen}
I.....
"You're not going to take that away from me, too, are you?"
I just.....
Date: 10/28/09 09:14 pm Title: {thirteen}
OH MAH GAWD! I JUST WANNA SMACK THE EVER LOVING SHIT OUT OF ALL OF THEM! THEY ALL NEEDS TO BE KICKED IN THE ASS. FOR THE LVE OF EVERYTHING HOLY, SOMEONE HIT THEM, PLEASE!
Date: 10/28/09 09:12 pm Title: {thirteen}
I knew they'd fuck this up. I love it anyway:)
Date: 10/28/09 09:12 pm Title: {thirteen}
Make it better, make it better, make it better!
Date: 10/28/09 09:11 pm Title: {thirteen}
I think you did it. I think you actually managed to break my heart. I hurt so much for both of them. And oh god, for best friends, they really don't know each other very well or TALK. I...can't say anything else. I'm just stunned and sad. ;_;
Date: 10/28/09 09:10 pm Title: {thirteen}
Can't wait for next chapter. I swear I was straining myself from begging, but I lost the battle.
Date: 10/28/09 09:10 pm Title: {thirteen}
God you basically broke my heart woman! I have a feeling Tom was going to confess his love tonight. I love you for updating so fast for us :D
Date: 10/28/09 09:09 pm Title: {thirteen}
Well this is the second night in a row I have to go to bed with a broken heart. *sniffle* I don't think I can take much more lol.
Date: 10/28/09 09:05 pm Title: {thirteen}
This is so painful, so horribly painful, and I know it's ripping both Tom and Bill's hearts out too. ;__; I want to beat Bill over the head for being so dense, honestly, god. Reading a breakup like this is agonizing when I know they're bloody well in love with each other.
I'm waiting with bated breath for the next chapter. Love this, but ouch. OUCH.
Date: 10/28/09 09:04 pm Title: {thirteen}
alkfjsad;lkfja THAT HURT SO BAD! I'm feeling bad for Tom now, even though I don't know what this Ariel thing is about yet. *is glad you're a fast updater*