Date: 10/29/09 12:24 am Title: {thirteen}
okay I am crying. This is completely fucked and I just want them to be together WAAAAAAAH ):
Date: 10/29/09 12:18 am Title: {thirteen}
I've been checking THF like mad all day just to read more of this, so I'm so glad that you updated. :)
That was ...wow. I can't believe it. It's so sad, but beautiful at the same time. Bill's so in love with Tom, but at the same time, he doesn't want to destroy his friendship with Tom, and he values it and him so much that he's willing to sacrifice so much. And Tom is so gone for Bill that he doesn't even know what to do, and now they're both hurting, and.... wow. I teared up reading this. I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted.
I really hope that you CAN finish this fic before November 1-- I don't think I'll be able to wait a full month at this point. Once again, it was beautifully written, and oh so captivating. I'll be waiting patiently. :)
Date: 10/29/09 12:07 am Title: {thirteen}
I JUST REALLY WANT TO FUCKING HIT BILL FOR NOT TELLING TOM!
UGH! *YANKS HAIR OUT*
Date: 10/29/09 12:07 am Title: {thirteen}
Honestly tears, in my eyes, right at this very moment. Tom is trying so hard to let Bill know, and he's so shy, and he can't be the first to say it, and it hurts because, fucking aside, I see so much of myself in Bill. Just trying to close himself off so he won't get hurt when really it hurts so much more.
When he was describing the person, it was sort of Georg but a whole lotta Tom. I officially hate Andreas and I also hate Ariel for existing.
Date: 10/28/09 11:29 pm Title: {thirteen}
THIS STORY IS KILLING ME. *weeps* Tell me there's an end in sight?
Date: 10/28/09 11:22 pm Title: {thirteen}
So. I don't hate you, but I am going to beg you to make it better for these poor boys. >.< Really loving this story though!! Great couple chapters. I feel so bad for both of them.
Date: 10/28/09 11:15 pm Title: {thirteen}
I am so crying
OH my god.
Bill is so stupid....he should have realized that TOm likes him
It' so....
I want to read more more more
Date: 10/28/09 11:13 pm Title: {thirteen}
Even knowing what you're doing didn't stop my heart from breaking. Ugh, omigosh, it seriously feels like its tearing into little pieces. How do you do it? How, how, how?
Needless to say, moar. MOAR. <3 for this chapter, </3 for my poor heart.
Date: 10/28/09 11:03 pm Title: {thirteen}
*sniff, sniff* :(
I think I get why this had to happen, but my god, that hurt. . . .
*waits for you to fix it. . . you *are* gonna fix it, right? *insert teary-eyed stern look here*
Date: 10/28/09 10:49 pm Title: {thirteen}
Stupid Tom needs to open his mouth and say what he's obviously feeling D: and now Bill is being stupid too lol. But I admire his strength. And Georg made a rose
Date: 10/28/09 10:41 pm Title: {thirteen}
omg!!! poor tom!!! well guess i will have to wait till they are together again!! T___T
please continue!! XD
Date: 10/28/09 10:34 pm Title: {thirteen}
I just finished this entire thing (and the Two Against The World series) all together and these couple last chapters have killed me. D: You've made me cry so damn much! ;___; Especially during that last bit here. Damnit, Georg, where are you and your kleenex roses when I need you!
"We always have been, Bill," Tom said after a moment. "You're not going to take that away from me, too, are you?" This line was what broke me. OhmyGod. ;___;
The torture!
Date: 10/28/09 10:30 pm Title: {thirteen}
snife* keep it comin!
Date: 10/28/09 10:21 pm Title: {thirteen}
Fuck.....that really hurt. *goes to cry in corner*
Date: 10/28/09 10:20 pm Title: {thirteen}
no...
You have no idea how hard that was.
I cried.
Date: 10/28/09 10:12 pm Title: {thirteen}
oh my god. at the part where bill agreed to "go out" with georg my heart dropped a little, then all throughout this chapter it just kept dropping and now im pretty sure its in my left foot. halp! cant wait for the next installment... :)
Date: 10/28/09 10:01 pm Title: {thirteen}
I cried....I can't believe tom has been so blind to how bill feels about him.....ugh.....sometimes j hate guys (even fictional characters) and in this tom and bill were not my favorite people...can't wait for more
Date: 10/28/09 09:47 pm Title: {thirteen}
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
ajgakgja I hate break-ups ;_; With the burning rage of a thousand suns! How could you do this to us? HOW? Just...just...I need more chocolate. So much more. Like, I need a chocolate man. Okay, thinking of chocolate-covered Tom is cheering me up a little. But I will never be fully happy again until you update and Tom and Bill admit their love for each other and have another chapter-11-esque sex scene *_*