Date: 10/29/09 10:44 am Title: {thirteen}
*Takes deep shaking breath* God. That was painful. What the hell's up with Tom and that chick anyways?
Date: 10/29/09 10:16 am Title: {thirteen}
"You're not going to take that away from me, too, are you?"
That line just broke my heart.
As usual, though it was sad, that was a fantastic chapter. I'm continually amazed that you've been updating this quickly and the quality never goes down, which is what usually happens when things are updated so often.
I look forward to the next chapter. :)
Date: 10/29/09 09:32 am Title: {thirteen}
I cried too! You're killing us here.
Bill, do you think you could like me? - Bill you're so dense. You don't ask someone that kind of question if you're not interested! Can't wait for next chapter. This is so good.
Date: 10/29/09 09:20 am Title: {thirteen}
ohhhh stupid boys
i love the angst
my heart broke at this line : "Do you think...Bill, do you think you could like me?"
thanks for the quick updates
can't wait for more
Date: 10/29/09 08:36 am Title: {thirteen}
Ok, I'll admit I've not read this before - side pairings scare me off really quickly, lol.
But it was rec'd to me, so I've read it in one go. And it's soooo good. But completely heart breaking!
Open your eyes Bill! Jeez! It's so obvious Tom loves you, you idiot! And wtf are you going along with this Georg thing for? Bad idea. Bad. Stupid!
I really, really, really don't want Bill to start liking Georg that way. :( Bu I think it's gonna happen. *is sad*
Date: 10/29/09 08:35 am Title: {thirteen}
ge-org.. I love you and I hate you at the same time.. ugh.. -headdesk-
Date: 10/29/09 08:21 am Title: {thirteen}
Bwah :( Oh gosh, this was so heart-breaking to read. In a way, I hope Bill wouldn't have done it by phone, but then again I don't think I could've handled (me or Bill, or Tom) a face-to-face counter. And when Bill was describing Tom, sorry Georg (loved what you did there!), I just.. Yeah, bohoo :(
Date: 10/29/09 05:54 am Title: {thirteen}
I'm about to cry.
Gah you're so mean, why did you do this? T__T
I thought tom was going to say he loved bill and I was excited about it and then, puff. Bill says he's got someone. Damn Georg and his stupid theories T__T
maybe it's for the best but i'm still sad,i need some love in here XD
oh well, need the rest *-*
Cat**
Date: 10/29/09 04:46 am Title: {thirteen}
My mouth literally dropped......omg. D:
Date: 10/29/09 04:20 am Title: {thirteen}
no no no no
Im crying
this is all a misunderstandning
Ive got it figured out...Tom loves Bill now, but Bill cant see it. And I dont believe for one second that Tom and Ariel are actually dating. That was probably a misunderstandning on Andreas part.
Blööh...
And now Georg, whats he gonna get up to?
Im nervous.
Date: 10/29/09 03:59 am Title: {thirteen}
Bill!! Tom asked you if you could like him, why didnt you say yes?!? gah, heartbreaking! your rate of updates is astounding and I can only hope you continue this fast, because i am heartbroken with bill and am dying to see things start to turn around the other way. keep up the great work!
Date: 10/29/09 03:26 am Title: {thirteen}
Oh my God I've just sobbed my eyes out. It reminded me of a situation that was very painful! I love this story so much and can't wait for the next bit...don't keep us hanging on for long =D xxx
Date: 10/29/09 02:27 am Title: {thirteen}
I love that Georg smells like hair product. =D
Especially now that you have dozens of broken hearts in the wake of this chapter =D, I'm really glad that you'll possibly finish this by November. Very well-written angst; somehow the way you wrote and described Tom's responses, even coming through Bill's perception, hurt just as much as reading Bill's thoughts, maybe even more. Thank you so much for updating so quickly and trying to finish the story for your hordes of avid readers. Can hardly wait for the next chapters!
Date: 10/29/09 02:22 am Title: {thirteen}
damn, that was so hard to get through.
i just wanted bill not to be stupid the whole time and listen to what tom had to tell him.
it was wonderful! even though my heart hurts and im practically crying.
i cant wait for more!
Date: 10/29/09 02:11 am Title: {thirteen}
That was so sad. When Tom and Bill were talking on the phone you could just tell how they are both hurting.
After they hung up and Bill said "Bye, Tom. I love you" I started crying. I thought that part was so sad.
Date: 10/29/09 01:34 am Title: {thirteen}
You have no idea how much this hurt. Or maybe you do, since you know, you wrote it. I'm so SAD right now, and I know it will take a while for this to be fixed, IF it'll ever be fixed.
oh my God what if they don't get together in the end? oh oh oh please don't do that I'll die of a broken heart T.T
I wish you could just finish the story right now! I know this sounds greedy and you update daily and your chapters are huge and I can't say how amazing that is but I feel so hurt right now and I need to see them together ;__; It's breaking my heart soooo much, and you're already updating so frequently! I can't imagine what it would be like if you updated like, once a week. God I'd die.
I can't wait for your update, and for the next one and for the one after that and yeah, actually I can't wait to see them back together, no matter when that will happen. Thank you so much for writing this story, I haven't felt such love for something lately, apart from "Through His Eyes". Those are my two favorite stories right now, the ones that make my heart beat fast and my cheeks wet from all the crying D:
I love love love this story and I love you for writing it. You're so amazing. I've read all your other stories too, but this is the first time I'm leaving a review. I guess that's bad? I just never thought my opinion matters that much, I'm not a good author or a good reviewer and that automatically makes my opinion unworthy to me. But this story is so fantastic, I just had to say it, no matter if it's important to you or not.
Can't wait for the update. Thank you again, you make me wait for something other than work, work, work. *blows kiss* :)
Date: 10/29/09 01:18 am Title: {thirteen}
O_O you know why these past couple chapters have made me speechless. but still - wonderful heartbreak.
Date: 10/29/09 01:11 am Title: {thirteen}
-sniffles- You're lucky I love this story so much, otherwise I'd stop erading it. j/k Anouther great, if gloomy chapter
Date: 10/29/09 12:30 am Title: {thirteen}
*tears up*
Fix it woman.
/ominous
