Date: 10/29/09 11:13 pm Title: {fourteen}
I have to say, I get really really excited to see this story updated, it's probably my favorite fic going on now.
This chapter was really good, Georg is such a sweetheart, but I let out a very long "awwwwwwwwwwwww" when Tom brought Bill the umbrella.
Really good job!
Date: 10/29/09 11:09 pm Title: {fourteen}
I
LOVE
BILL right now.
What a bitch XD Amazing!
Date: 10/29/09 11:08 pm Title: {fourteen}
I hope you realize I'm practically living for this story now! So you'd better finish it, epilogue and all before you run off somewhere to work on something else or I swear, I will send death threats every day until you finish it!
I feel terrible for both of them btw.
Date: 10/29/09 11:06 pm Title: {fourteen}
*grins* I think I see where you're talking about the curve ball....am getting flashes of the manga i my head, but I don't think it's screwing your story over....As someone who FREQUENTLY likes to convert manga/asiandramas/anime into thf-stuff, I know the feeling of JASDFJDFJADS;JFDFNANFADJF (think: the trip to Ibiza in Princess Cafe -- major curveball, and I'm JUST now getting over it), but you're an AMAZING author, and this came out heartbreakingly painful (as in Tom and Bill being asshats when they OBVIOUSLY like/love each other), but it was still amazing, and I think the ending will work out PERFECTLY. *huggles*
Date: 10/29/09 11:05 pm Title: {fourteen}
When I read the notes at the beginning and I saw Ariel's name, I busted out "I hate that bitch" really loud xD not really good to do when everyone's sleeping... But anyway, this is so beautiful. Even though I'd like to slap them both with taco shells... I practically scream at my computer screen while reading this... It's bad. I'm just like "OUT WITH IT ALREADY!!!" but they never say anything... So then I must scream more.
Anyway. I love you still...
Five stars and peanut butter jars ;)
Date: 10/29/09 11:04 pm Title: {fourteen}
Meep! I can't believe Ariel said that! I was still half-disbelieving Tom was fucking around. And now I'm pissed at him...gah, I want these boys to work it out. Keep going!
Date: 10/29/09 11:03 pm Title: {fourteen}
I'm getting kind of frustrated. Don't get me wrong, I love the story and I'm dying to find out what happens, but I feel like...every time Bill and Tom get close to having a meaningful conversation, one of them punks out and leaves D: And I also feel like, even if Tom admitted his very obvious love for Bill, Bill would dismiss him and say like "No, you're straight, I love you but I won't let you love me!"
But...you've showed that you're a great writer so I'm pretty sure you'll tie it all together in the end. I guess I'm gonna have to cry my heart out until the happy ending :p
Date: 10/29/09 10:56 pm Title: {fourteen}
I soooooo love this story. xoxoxoxoxo I want them to hurry up and get back together!!!! waaaaaaaahhhhhh!!! Bill, can't you see? Tom loves you! *shakes Bill*
Date: 10/29/09 10:39 pm Title: {thirteen}
Oh god that was so painful! Poor Bill, he just broke his own heart, and Tom whose heart was also broken. Why couldn't he have admitted he liked Bill as more than just a friend?
Date: 10/29/09 08:56 pm Title: {thirteen}
You're making me cry! That was so sad and I have a feeling what I knew tom wanted to tell Bill and it's so frustrating that bill can't see it. Please make this turn out good, I don't think I'll be able to stand it if it doesn't. Looking forward to the next chapter as usual!
Date: 10/29/09 08:11 pm Title: {thirteen}
oh,, wow! my heart hurt reading this. i cant wait for the next chapter, but i kinda dont like the idea of georg and bill... something seems oddd with georg, unless thats just me xD
Date: 10/29/09 07:15 pm Title: {thirteen}
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii cant wait until next chappie !
Date: 10/29/09 03:54 pm Title: {thirteen}
DEAR GOD
Such an INTENSE chapter lol
Keep 'em coming! x]
Date: 10/29/09 03:45 pm Title: {thirteen}
WAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10/29/09 03:15 pm Title: {thirteen}
After three nights of reading this you go and break my heart?
Damn you, woman .__.
Date: 10/29/09 01:43 pm Title: {thirteen}
Oh. My. God Oo
I swear, this is the first - the first time ever! - I've got tears in my eyes after finishing a chapter of a fan fiction! ;__; I always thought I'd never cry just because of something I read but this is... It's sooo sad!
I just know Tom loves him too and it's freaking painful to watch Bill being so ignorant. Please, please be nice and make them get together very soon! *puppy eyes*
I'm way too sad to write a long and nice review now :/ I'll go hide in my bed and cry until you update this one! (;b)
Date: 10/29/09 12:07 pm Title: {thirteen}
I hate you :'(
Date: 10/29/09 11:56 am Title: {thirteen}
OMG I SO cried reading this!!! And I was at the fucking Mc Donald's for God sakes! I feel awfull for both of them cause I know what it is to end it up with someone cause the person doesn't feel the same as you do and Tom...he was ready to confess his love to Bill I'm sure and now he tells him there's someone else..
So awfull...
I need a happier chapter to make it up for this one now :'(
Date: 10/29/09 11:31 am Title: {thirteen}
Ah! That's heartbreaking *sob*
So many subtle (or not) signs by both of them that they just don't see!! This is a brilliant fic and I'm very much looking forward to more. Thankyou
Date: 10/29/09 10:56 am Title: {thirteen}
damn girl it broke my heart. why can't they already admit they're in love with each other? shit it was so painful and soulful. I'm about to cry myself. thanks <333