Date: 10/30/09 08:12 am Title: {fourteen}
you make it hurt so damn good. and i want to yell at bill and tom for being so blind, argh, so frustrating.
Date: 10/30/09 07:55 am Title: {fourteen}
I love this so so much. I loved the part where Bill and Ariel talked, that was awesome.
Bill is so blind, Tom obviously likes him. I can't wait to see how things are going to go down and find out what is up with Andreas.
Date: 10/30/09 07:54 am Title: {fourteen}
I love this so so much. I loved the part where Bill and Ariel talked, that was awesome.
Bill is so blind, Tom obviously likes him. I can't wait to see how things are going to go down and find out what is up with Andreas.
Date: 10/30/09 06:23 am Title: {fourteen}
I was directed to you by my best friend who spastically loves your work. I have been hearing about your stories for weeks--months even--and I finally had to check you out.
I am so glad that I did.
I started reading your latest fic first and I am utterly hooked. Blue is so beautifully written, the characters so real, that I couldn't ask for anything more in a story. Tom and Bill make it hurt so good and I find myself screaming at my computer screen for them to both stop being so blind.
Why do people who are in love never see what is right in front of them? But then again, the saying goes that the course of true love doesn't run smooth.
Boy, ain't that the truth.
I have faith that you will fix this in due time, but I'm worried that we'll have to wait until December for you to do your other writing project. Just know that if you do this, many of your readers will probably end up in the hospital from heart failure and/or depression. LOL.
And I get the feeling that Ariel wasn't too happy about Tom calling out Bill's name during their little sex session--and that she out for revenge.
And possibly blackmailing Tom somehow.
But I could be wrong about that. We shall see.
I will now go and read chapter 14. I was so overcome with the first 13 chapters after reading it all in one sitting that I couldn't believe me eyes when I refreshed the page and saw that you had updated! I wanted to wait until I read the new chappie, but I really wanted to review first, so forgive me if I'm still speculating about stuff that you may or may not have already answered in this new chapter. :)
Please don't ever go away. You are one of the bright lights in this fandom. Fucking awesome you are.
I'll be following the rest of your stuff from now on. :D
Date: 10/30/09 05:29 am Title: {fourteen}
I LOVE IT!!!!! Bill insulting Ariel is the HIGHLIGHT of my day!!!!!
"By the way, you realize we're in college now, right? Try reading Cosmo instead of Seventeen for those fashion tips."
How awesome is that? Finally, he Puts her in her place. I love how Georg is so sweet to Bill. I'm also getting sick and tired of Tom having the last word. When it will it be Bill's chance?
END BY NOV. 1? Are you out of your FUCKING mind? Epilogue?....No comment
Date: 10/30/09 05:26 am Title: {fourteen}
please continue!!! Love it!!
Date: 10/30/09 03:52 am Title: {fourteen}
And yet again, ouch my heart. Gosh you really mixed things with this chapter, I think. I still think Ariel is blackmailing Tom, probably with what he just told Bill (and Bill! Did you not think at all with your reply??). I just don't get how Tom isn't denying it, or what it's all about.
Seems Bill has a never-ending dosage of dumb-pills.
Date: 10/30/09 03:46 am Title: {fourteen}
I love this chapter ! I knew Ariel was black mailing tom with the info of him screaming bills name while doing the nasty! That little hoho! It breaks my heart seeing how akward they are with eachother. Anyways love your amazing updating skills lol
Date: 10/30/09 03:29 am Title: {fourteen}
yay!! i love the idea of bill putting it all into a song! i suspected ariel was blackmailing tom in some way. i love that tom is still so sweet to bring bill an umbrella. god if they would just talk, if either of them would finish a thought...sigh. boys. keep up the great work!!!
Date: 10/30/09 03:23 am Title: {fourteen}
This Ariel business is getting curiouser and curiouser. And this: "Don't be so dense, Tom." Ohhhh, the irony, Bill. =p I'm sending you lots of positive wrangling vibes so you can wrangle the chapter out the soonest!
Date: 10/30/09 02:14 am Title: {fourteen}
My goodness, this makes my day everytime I see that it's updated.
I applaud you on your ability to keep things realistic and consistent. Most authors would have, by the time they got to the part about Bill ending things with Tom, had the two of them make up and reveal their love and get together and be peachy keen and dandy by the next chapter. I appreciate the fact that things are awkward and painful between them, because even though it's sad for them, it's realistic, and makes the story more enjoyable in the long run. I love how you include even the little details, the things that bring a story to life, like how Bill would pick at the cheese on his pizza, and how not all of the dialogue pertains directly to the plot. (Like, Georg telling Bill not to fall and break his ankle, and Bill responding with a "Don't joke, I would do something like that".) It all makes it something solid and real, and I absolutely adore this story.
I'm stuck in bed with the swine flu, so while I wait for the next chapter, I'm going to reread this whole thing over again, because I'm so in love with this fic that it's not even funny. :)
Date: 10/30/09 01:21 am Title: {fourteen}
ooof. it hurts so good.
Date: 10/30/09 12:43 am Title: {fourteen}
DONE BY NOV.1ST? WHATS GONNA HAPPEN?!?!?!!?
Date: 10/30/09 12:37 am Title: {fourteen}
I'm thinking that Tom actually LIKES Bill and wants him more than he can stand, but of course there IS the reputation to think about, even though it's not important when it comes to matters of the heart.
WHY ARE BOYS SO STUPID?!?!?
I'd smack them all if I could.
But really, I love this.
Date: 10/30/09 12:36 am Title: {fourteen}
Is it bad that I really want to kill Ariel?? XD and for the whole bill/tom thing...well....*needs more*
Date: 10/30/09 12:30 am Title: {fourteen}
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
I LOVE THISSSSSSSSSSSS
ITS DELICIOUS
Date: 10/29/09 11:46 pm Title: {fourteen}
That's right I say kill Andreas and kill him dead.
Haha Bill is awesome when he tells Ariel off. I mean seriously,what was she gonna gain by telling him that?
What the heck was it that made Tom go out with Ariel? 'Cuz I have a feeling that he didn't want to do it willingly.
Ooh I wanna know what song Bill's gonna write.
I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Date: 10/29/09 11:29 pm Title: {fourteen}
The hurt and the awkward, still killing me. Bill's pain is so real and the scene with Bill and Tom was so uncomfortable. LOVED the little bit with Ariel! lol Perfect. I really cannot wait until the next chapter, so this is me, working to wrangle another chapter out of you. :D
Date: 10/29/09 11:26 pm Title: {one}
You killed me with Tom and the two umbrellas he was trying to hide behind his back, you know. Poor woobie *pets him*
Still heartbreaking, but I wanna see what you do with Andreas and Ariel. . . I kinda hope it's vaguely painful . . . okay, maybe lots painful in Ariel's case, she's a strait-up b*tch
Date: 10/29/09 11:25 pm Title: {fourteen}
Bill's little chat with Ariel was priceless! lol My heart still aches for Bill & Tom--I'm disappointed that it appears Tom really did lie to Bill about Ariel, but I feel a flutter of hope after reading this chapter. I can't wait to find out about the song Bill is going to write.
And poor Georg--such a sweetheart! Tom should really take some lessons.
Great chapter, hon! :D