Date: 10/31/09 04:25 am Title: {fifteen}
ohhh i love the way it turn out
i hope that they'll have sex...or make love...or whatever
Tom is so obvious...only Bill can't see
post more hun please
Date: 10/31/09 04:20 am Title: {fifteen}
This chapter was so sad I felt so bad for georg but bill and tom will always belong together I'm so sad this story is gonna come to an end but nov 1st is gonna be my favorite day first it's my driver liscense day and I finally get to see how this incredibly awesome story ends
Date: 10/31/09 03:35 am Title: {fifteen}
thanks love it$!!!!!!! Please continue!!!
Date: 10/31/09 02:58 am Title: {fifteen}
That was so... wow. I'm wondering what was up with Geo kissing Bill like that, when he knew that Bill was in love with Tom. WAS it to prove a point?
And... wow. It's bittersweet; sweet because Bill and Tom are at least on speaking (and more *wink*) terms. But bitter, in that they're not able to admit what they feel for each other and keep skirting around it. Oh, those poor boys! I can only imagine how hurt they must both feel. This is lovely, darling! Update soon, please? )
Date: 10/31/09 02:30 am Title: {seven}
Hi, Talya.
Just wanted to thank you for the only positive thing I've had today. I'm sorry I haven't left comments on every chapter.
This was perfect, even the missed signs. *hugs you, and the story*
Author's Response: *hugs back* I'm so glad I was able to give that to you. No worries; any comment, to me, is precious.
Date: 10/31/09 02:11 am Title: {fifteen}
I'm really loving this story! Been meaning to review, but haven't b/c I'm a lazy bum. :X
I love your Bill in this story! I don't know if it's b/c he's based off of a manga character or not, but he's so innocent and sweet and girly and adorable! And Tom is so sexy!
Ok, the thing that I don't get about this chapter is that it's revealed that Ariel forced Tom to go out w/ her b/c she heard him call out Bill's name during sex. But Tom is already so straightforward about his attraction to Bill from the beginning. Telling Bill he thinks of his face when he comes. So why would Ariel telling Bill be a threat at all? It's not like Bill doesn't know that Tom is attracted to him. Is there more to this plot that have not yet been revealed? Otherwise, Tom was kinda stupid and should have told Ariel to go f*** herself.
Date: 10/31/09 02:09 am Title: {fifteen}
Take my breath away and make my words fail me. Georg is such a darling, I though he'd be more pushy towards Bill, and gosh, I really really hope Tom holds Bill the next morning, finally.
Date: 10/31/09 02:05 am Title: {fifteen}
Ohh mee gee.
cant wait for chapter 16.
Date: 10/31/09 02:05 am Title: {fifteen}
You don't have a boyfriend Bill! Tell him! lol. Loving this so much.
So seriously, you just sit down and write these long amazing chapters in one day? And you make it look easy!!! You must be wonder woman, girl :)
Date: 10/31/09 01:44 am Title: {fifteen}
I'm pretty much dying of the flu and strep throat, laying on my couch unable to get up, but thank god i have an iphone and was able to read this OMG *_* this totally makes up for me not being able to go out for halloween tomorrow. I smell bill/tom legit lovin progresssss..
Date: 10/31/09 01:41 am Title: {fifteen}
WTF? You can't keep yanking my chain like this! They need to get together and stay together! Bill's gotta tell Tom! NOW
Date: 10/31/09 01:31 am Title: {fifteen}
Oh Holy Gustav! Why didn't he say anything about him and Geo? I'm all confusalled... It was all clear as day until he didn't say it. I guess because I was all like "Oh Gustav. Oh Gustav. Oh Gustav." and then it was all HOPE PHAIL... Idk... paragraphical mind fuck O.O
Anyway... Geo is so sweet!!! And Billa and Tomi are so adorable. I'm a sucker for sexy ear talk xD
...dances... I can't wait for more!!!
Me and my Crystal can't even sit still right now..
I'm dancing with myself... I'm dancing with myself
Date: 10/31/09 01:24 am Title: {fifteen}
BLESS YOU. Woman, I was seriously getting water-logged with those last couple chapters. We needed this so, so much. I realize they aren't quite there yet but...still, they're in each others arms right now and I can deal with that for the moment.
And I love Georg. :D
Date: 10/31/09 01:22 am Title: {fifteen}
*dances* I was wondering how you'd work in the observatory scene, but you did so WONDERFULLY.
and I love how everything worked out, even the rain scene where Bill and Tom talked it over...and just yea, I told you that you'd make it work ^_^
Date: 10/31/09 01:19 am Title: {fifteen}
*sigh* I don't know what it is, but I've always had a thing about the rain. I love scenes in the rain, adn you did a great job of making me love them even more.
These boys REALLY need to get their shit together. They're all over the place, and it drives me crazy to know that they know they belong together.
Date: 10/31/09 01:13 am Title: {fifteen}
this is so good.
Date: 10/31/09 01:10 am Title: {fifteen}
I have seriously been sitting here all night waiting for this to update--I was starting to worry a little!
omg Tay...when Bill is running down the sidewalk in the rain, yelling for Tom and then crashes into his arms I had goosebumps all up and down my arms! I LOVED it!!
Date: 10/31/09 01:04 am Title: {one}
Man, I love this story - every bit of it! And, I have to laugh at the way you keep saying in the author notes that the story keeps changing on you. Bill and Tom obviously have a plan, so you might as well stand back an let it happen, because you're not going to be able to change their minds. You're ONLY the author, you know - LOL.
Date: 10/31/09 01:00 am Title: {fifteen}
bittersweet, finally. the light. <3