Date: 11/01/09 01:06 am Title: {sixteen}
OMG how hottttttt!!!!! So so happy they pulled their head's out and admitted their feelings to each other-I've really loved and enjoyed this story...
Date: 11/01/09 01:06 am Title: {sixteen}
You're complaining about slow updates? I haven't even gotten to review the last chapter yet!! LOL
I can't believe this is almost over. Its making me sad! I love this, I love this, I love this!! <33
Date: 11/01/09 01:04 am Title: {sixteen}
Oh whew! That was lovely and ... okay, I have this thing about that move that Tom did, pulling Bill up with his back against Tom's chest. It has always struck me as hot and just as intimate as face to face. You writing that in there, Tom doing that, honestly made my chest tight from just how loved Bill must feel. And then you wrote that, too. Thank you for that!
This is such an amazing story and you've broken our hearts and mended them. I'm happily looking forward to the epilogue. :D
Date: 11/01/09 12:55 am Title: {sixteen}
*swoons*
That was so perfect ♥_♥ I don't even know what to say...
*sniffles*
Date: 11/01/09 12:52 am Title: {sixteen}
;___________;
I love happy endings. *sobs hysterically*
I thought no sex could possibly get better than Chapter 11 but this was so unbelievably intense and heart-wrenching and PERFECT. You are amazing. Good lord.
Date: 11/01/09 12:49 am Title: {sixteen}
oh this is wonderful. i'm so excited.
Date: 11/01/09 12:48 am Title: {sixteen}
OH MY GOTT!!! I AM TEARING UP. THANK YOU!! THEY FINALLY CLEARED UP THEIR FEELINGS FOR EACH OTHER!!! AND I WAS LISTENING TO "DOWN ON YOU" SO THAT WAS A EMOTIONAL ENDING.
Date: 10/31/09 11:30 pm Title: {fifteen}
*sputters*
Omg, Georg is such a sweetheart! And I'm glad Tom went ahead and spit everything out while he had the chance to. Ahh, can't wait for more!
Date: 10/31/09 10:50 pm Title: {fifteen}
w-wait a second...!!!!
*splutters* what is going on??!!!
seriously though, I wish I could keep this Georg to myself. That was so cute. Wasted on Bill, but cute.
I was mad at Bill when he broke it off with Tom, but I'm secretly happy he's not telling Tom Geo is not his boyfriend. Even if he wasn't fucking Ariel he should have told Bill the truth >D
Sorry for the rambly review, you've toyed with my emotions so much today, Talya, I'm barely coherent. *hugs tight* Thank you for such a wonderful story, can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 10/31/09 09:26 pm Title: {fourteen}
well i really really hope you finish the story, im fan, i mean tom looks so in love and Bill is so dense... keep writing, you are pretty good at this!!!
Date: 10/31/09 06:27 pm Title: {fifteen}
Just perfect *-* I love this so much!
I love it how Georg is still supportive over Bill, and Im glad things are little bit clearer for Bill about Tom and Ariel!
Im looking forward for the next chapter!
Date: 10/31/09 04:22 pm Title: {fifteen}
oh god oh god!!!
thank god bill went to tom...i think i might be out of words for this..since i'm nearly crying...
Date: 10/31/09 03:51 pm Title: {fifteen}
I love this story!
amm..how many chapters left?
:)
Date: 10/31/09 03:49 pm Title: {fifteen}
eeeeep!!! i wanna know what the song said!!! lol. you should definately write the lyrics, or if ud rather, i could help you write the lyrics. im a lyricist so id love to help this amazing, lovely, ultrainteresting fic!! lovelovelovelovelove!!!! *dances in anticipation for the next chapter*
Date: 10/31/09 02:41 pm Title: {fifteen}
PRAISE THE LORD AND LADY! *kisses ground and you*
OMG, these boys are DUMB, but THANK YOU TOM, FOR OPENING YOUR MOUTH WHEN BILL WAS RIGHT THERE!
One last time...it can't be the last time!
IT'S THE FIRST DAY OF FOREVER!
Date: 10/31/09 02:29 pm Title: {fifteen}
Agghhhghgh, Bill needs to tell him!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. This is so good. :)
Date: 10/31/09 02:05 pm Title: {fifteen}
This is such a heartbreakingly beautiful piece of writing. It's so cute.
Date: 10/31/09 01:45 pm Title: {fifteen}
:D This makes my day every time I read it.
Date: 10/31/09 01:25 pm Title: {fifteen}
I hate you.
I hate you because your story makes my heart ache so much. Because it made me cry a couple of times over the chapters...
And I love you.
I love you because your fiction is amazing and it kept me busy all the afternoon, i simply couldnt stop reading.
It's.. fuah...I just dont have the words... bubu ιθ
And I want to slap Tom in the face because he LOVES Bill, but he dont tell him because he's a coward and an idiot! I also want to slap Bill because he's soooo blind uurgh .__.
Thank you for writing such a awesome story!
Date: 10/31/09 01:16 pm Title: {fifteen}
Loved it, as usual. :) The part where Bill runs to Tom was so sweet.