Date: 11/01/09 01:55 am Title: {sixteen}
OH thank god! I thought they would never get to that point! You better update tomorrow.
Date: 11/01/09 01:43 am Title: {sixteen}
*squeals and claps*
My grin is so big right now, you have no idea *is insanely happy*
Date: 11/01/09 01:23 am Title: {sixteen}
... *bursts into happy tears* *pulls out tissues* WAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! *sniff* that was so... *sniff* ADORABLE!
*sigh*
So, now that the deliriously happy sobbing is out of the way, I shall continue with the real review...
Hi, I'm a new reader and I fell in love with this story moment I started reading the first chapter... And seeing as how it was written by YOU, it's no wonder I was hooked since the first paragraph!
Throughout the story, I've cried, I've laughed, and (more often then not) I've been slamming my fist against the nearest surface and suppressing the urge to slam my head against the wall at Tom and Bill idiocy (and inability to make up their minds!)
I have no critism, this was just amazing... the only bad thing about this is that I didn't start reading when you first posted!
So yes, this was wonderful, fantasmigorical! and I can't wait for the epilogue... (and also want to cry at the prospect of this being over...)
Thank you for this amazing story and i'm thoroughly looking forward to more of your work!
Date: 11/01/09 01:21 am Title: {sixteen}
KHFDFHJNFFB. right before reading this, i was crying about missing my puppy that my mom gave away this past summer. You just cheered me up SO much. You have no idea. Oh god. SO CUTE. *squeeeee* :DDD
Date: 11/01/09 01:59 am Title: {sixteen}
Amazing amazing amazing. OMG this chapter made me so happy. When Bill finally confessed that the song is about Tom, that Tom is the one he wants; I was grinning like a maniac and when Tom didn't even let him finish his sentence and kissed him followed by "I love you" I lost it... I so squealed.
I have enjoyed this story so so much, I'm kinda sad to know the next chapter is the epilogue but all good things come to an end. This is definitely a favorite and once it's all done I'll be reading it all over again.
Date: 11/01/09 01:58 am Title: {sixteen}
See, I knew this story would have an awesome ending! I really do love this story. It's one of the best ones I've read! I can't wait for the epilogue!
Date: 11/01/09 01:56 am Title: {sixteen}
Jesus Christ, it's a TRACK TEAM. True love wins over the TRACK TEAM. Boys are stupid.
Date: 11/01/09 01:52 am Title: {sixteen}
YAY!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYY! For some reason, this story has been tormenting me to death! I couldn't wait for them to get their collective shit together! Fabulous work!
Date: 11/01/09 01:46 am Title: {one}
Also I apologize to Tom for ganging up on him earlier. He had good reason for not being clear with Bill. I'm just surprised he didn't explain properly to Andi. :3
And, oh Bill, finally on his knees. I like that idea more than I probably should.
Date: 11/01/09 01:41 am Title: {one}
awww the sweet little coalas!they're finally a couple!! i loved this chapter!!
Date: 11/01/09 01:40 am Title: {sixteen}
I LOVE YOU.I LOVE YOU.
I LOVE YOU.I LOVE YOU.
I LOVE YOU.I LOVE YOU.
I LOVE YOU.I LOVE YOU.
I LOVE YOU.I LOVE YOU.
I LOVE YOU.I LOVE YOU.
I LOVE YOU.I LOVE YOU.
I LOVE YOU.I LOVE YOU.
I LOVE YOU.I LOVE YOU.
I LOVE YOU.I LOVE YOU.
I LOVE YOU.I LOVE YOU.
Date: 11/01/09 01:38 am Title: {sixteen}
WELL IT'S ABOUT GOD DAMNED TIME!
They certainly took their time getting around to it, didn't they? But I loved the story, I think it's classic.
Date: 11/01/09 01:28 am Title: {sixteen}
*grins* I'm glad to see this work out as planned....sorta. I'm sad to see this endig, but I'm glad it came outso beautifully (although I expected othig less).
oh and YAY BLOWJOB SCENE. you give me that, right before I give the you new chapter of Princess Cafe, so were like even LOL
Date: 11/01/09 01:26 am Title: {sixteen}
yay...stupid boys became unstupid and used their words..lol if only they'd done that along time ago.
and Im still not 100% sure why Tom is mad at Andi..but thats ok...Bill and Tom are now together!!
Date: 11/01/09 01:20 am Title: {sixteen}
I am very satisfied. :) I love this so much. I knew Tom loved him - it was so apparent. *sighs* love love love :)
Date: 11/01/09 01:15 am Title: {sixteen}
Yes, YES! o/ Thank you!!! I know this is from Bill's pov but I really felt Tom's anxiety in this chapter. This was simply wonderful. So much love! *glomps you*
Date: 11/01/09 01:11 am Title: {sixteen}
Well, I was way off with my theory about Ariel but what's new?
Also, this was above and beyond what I expected. It was so hot and sweet and there was a perfect balance of the two.
Great job. :)
Date: 11/01/09 01:09 am Title: {sixteen}
i love you <3
"all you had o do was ask." UGH
Date: 11/01/09 01:07 am Title: {fifteen}
I love that you dedicated the cockblock chapter to me. That is a sign of love right there. Does Georg seriously hate himself or what? He had to have known it was futile.
Date: 11/01/09 01:07 am Title: {sixteen}
FINALLY! Boys are so clueless *facepalm*
That was so adorable. Just, I could imagine this so well. Beautiful!