Date: 11/01/09 08:51 am Title: {sixteen}
Holy hell. Wow. Whoa. OMG. This chapter, amazingly perfect. So hot, so sweet. I have so much love and respect for you for being able to update so fast, the quality never wavering, which often happens in chaptered fics towards the end - I guess the writers become bored and want to start something new already or something. But not you, this has seriously been one of my favourite fics ever in this fandom, pure perfect from first chapter to the last. I like how you explained the whole Ariel thing, not making Tom a bad guy in any way but with him even quitting track, which I thought was sad but really sweet. And I hope Bill, after realising the gentle gesture Tom made with touching his cheek, now goes back and realizes how much gentleness there always was in all the ways Tom touched him. And I absolutely love that Tom asked him to spend the night and held him, just like I was hoping for in my last review. I love this so so much, thank you for writing this :)
Date: 11/01/09 08:32 am Title: {sixteen}
AHHHH!!! HE SAID IT HE SAID IT HE SAID- *falls off chair*
Date: 11/01/09 08:24 am Title: {sixteen}
Hectic life meant I couldn't review the last couple of chapters, but now I can! All of the drama and sadness was killer, but it's really helped me appreciate this chapter more. It's been such a great story and I'll be sad to see it go. Thanks for this happy (and sexy) ending!
Date: 11/01/09 07:32 am Title: {sixteen}
Thank GOD for that!
My heart can remain in one piece, now :3
Date: 11/01/09 07:11 am Title: {sixteen}
FINALLY!!! FINALLY!!!!
Seeeeeee..XD Sometimes the "Actions are better than words" do fail lol..XD I'm glad they were able to say it - thru words..!XD Sometimes words are needed toooooo... HeeeeeeXDXD
I iz so happy... But sad this is going to end.. Aaaawww... Can't wait for the epilogue then..XD
Date: 11/01/09 06:07 am Title: {sixteen}
*sighs very happily* So so sooooo worth staying up late to catch up with. Finally, those two /finally/ figure things out. Aah, it's been wonderful~ Wonderful wonderful wonderful~
Date: 11/01/09 05:44 am Title: {sixteen}
My heart is beating in my throat. Gorgeous chapter, beautiful twins, HOT sex. Love it
Date: 11/01/09 05:31 am Title: {sixteen}
Oh God, I've been waiting for this for so long!
This seems to turn me into a river of tears with every chapter recently.
Date: 11/01/09 05:28 am Title: {sixteen}
Arg noooo! No, no, no!
Yes! Yaaaaay! :D They finally did it, wee they confessed their love! *hugs them* But it makes me so sad that the epilouge is the only chapter left. I want more of this story, it should keep on going like forever! I've never read a story that got me hooked quite as much as this one; every time you updated I was nearly jumping with joy or some shit like that xD The plot was so interesting and I loved not being able to predict anything though it sometimes almost made me go insane when they didn't tell each other what they really felt though it was so obvious. Stupid boys *shakes head*
"I can't," Tom said, looking down and shaking his head. "I just...I can't. I can't accompany you on this song, Bill."
"Why not?" Bill demanded, his heart in his throat.
"So, the guy you wrote that about...you must really love him, yeah?"
^That part was fantastic. I had a movie playing in my head, showing that scene 'cause it was so easy to feel and imagine it - to hear their voices and see their faces. Amazing! Truly amazing. I must say I think you're on of the best authors on this side! :D
Date: 11/01/09 05:17 am Title: {sixteen}
OH MY GOOOOOOD!! YEEEEES, FINALLY, THEY DID IT!
The sex was so so good and agaaa *cant speak*
Aaaah this chapter is so good, it's such a pleasure to read it *__*
THANK YOUUU
Date: 11/01/09 04:52 am Title: {sixteen}
Hot start and a very romantic end. I don't see the need for an epilogue but I'll definitely welcome one. :)This story is so going into my favourites and so are you. Can't wait to read more from you :)
Date: 11/01/09 04:50 am Title: {sixteen}
eeeeeeeee..... -melts in an ungraceful puddle of goo-
-wiggles as goo- I fucking love it!!!
Date: 11/01/09 04:48 am Title: {sixteen}
This is so fantastic, words can not describe. I absolutly love the song lyrics, so beautiful.
Thank you so much for sharing your art.
Date: 11/01/09 04:30 am Title: {sixteen}
ohhh my....
i'm so happy right now
THANK U for this wonderful chapter and story
i'm sad that it'll end ...but i'm sure that u'll write another fantastic story like this one
Date: 11/01/09 04:28 am Title: {sixteen}
After reviewing I'm gonna go straight up and happy dance, even though I can't dance at all!
I love, love, LOVE this story and I'm sure I could read it over and over and over again! I could print it out and hang in on my bedroom wall, or just send it to all my friends and have them to read as well.
Oh, and good luck with that... NaNoWriMo or whatever it was called. (:
Date: 11/01/09 03:50 am Title: {sixteen}
Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh OH!!!!!
*heart flutters too damn fast*
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL.
Oh god, Bill and Tom, next time stop being so oblivious and you could have saved yourselves weeks worth of pain. But FINALLY you both speak the truth in your hearts and DOESN'T IT FEEL WONDERFUL?? To stop pretending, lying, avoiding or whatever the hell was that you were both doing.
Tom, Bill sings you his song of love and I'm glad you played his music, because that song is meant to match your heart's music.
It's the most beautiful music created, if you ask me!
Date: 11/01/09 03:34 am Title: {sixteen}
I have tears of happiness running down my face, this makes me so delirously happy. I have no coherent thoughts right now, other than I love it!!
Date: 11/01/09 03:23 am Title: {sixteen}
Haleluyah(sp) I'm so happy they finally confessed their feelings for eachother! Im sad this story is coming to an end I'm going go be selfish because I just love this story so much it was one of the things I looked forward to so thank you for making some of my kore crappier days better by being awesome and updating :)
Date: 11/01/09 03:16 am Title: {sixteen}
This was the cutesy, sweetest thing I've read in a long time. I absolutely loved it, enough so I was willing to type this out on my iPod while deathly tired and deathly sick.
Date: 11/01/09 02:08 am Title: {sixteen}
I read the chapter pretty much as soon as it was put up, but I can only review now because apparently, brain can melt twice: first with the HOTNESS, and then the sweetness of it all. I love it so much, but at the same time I have a feeling of nooooo, I don't want it to ever end!, but I guess I will have to get over that after you post the epilogue real soon (you are posting it real soon, right? =D ) Thank you so much for giving us this wonderful story.