Date: 11/01/09 01:39 pm Title: {sixteen}
Oh, I'm so happy now Tay! This was so perfect! The sex was amazing and the confession was so sweet. *happy sigh* I love this story. :)
Date: 11/01/09 01:14 pm Title: {sixteen}
I knew I was right to trust you to make it all better! Oh my god I'm still flailing too hard to make any particularly coherent remarks. This was perfect, better than I ever could've imagined this scene to be and eeee.
The whole chapter was incredibly emotional, by the way, but I think this line was the most heartwrenching for me: "Bill?" Tom was thrashing upright in bed, sounding a little crazed. "Bill!?" Just, I don't know, the idea that he would be so upset by the idea that Bill wasn't there, even when he was halfway asleep, was indescribably sweet. It's such a simple line, but it feels perfect.
Date: 11/01/09 01:06 pm Title: {sixteen}
I always told myself I'd get to this story,
But since I'm always on my phone I only bothered with the stories I was already reading
But yesterday I finally told myself I would tackle it and... Oh boy ><
I nearly cried thinking of how much I missed out on.
I wish I could find you and smother you with hugs and kisses because this story is just too amazing
Every detail, every characterization, every dialogue: perfect.
Bill's pain was so pure and raw, I lost track of how many times I cried.
The words you choose flow so well, they're so descriptive, yet not overwhelming.
Every character's behavior is so real, so unlike the movies. Sometimes awkward, sometimes smooth, sometimes random...
The little things they did, Bill's anticipation for Tom's texts, his jerkiness after their first time
Tom's gentle behavior during sex was just ahh, beautiful. And the sex itself was so hot.
I also adore your Georg; he's so compassionate, attentive and giving. Everyone needs one of him.
Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing this masterpiece.
I don't think I'll ever be able to get it out of my mind
I really do think it'll stick with me forever.
I have so much respect for you it's crazy. And probably creepy, so, sorry :)
Just, gah.... Thank you. And I can't wait for the epilogue.
Date: 11/01/09 12:58 pm Title: {sixteen}
*sighs*
About damn time, boys.
Date: 11/01/09 12:55 pm Title: {sixteen}
Definitely great. Best. Osm... Wicked! Hell yeah. I love it soooo much! I got me eyes glued on my laptop for heaps of hours just because I don't wanna leave myself hanging!
So amazing! :D better make the last chapter as good as this! :P
Date: 11/01/09 12:53 pm Title: {sixteen}
awww, yay!!!! god you write their emotions so well. you can feel the desperation and the tenderness, wonderful job, thank you so much!
Date: 11/01/09 12:49 pm Title: {sixteen}
Man, this made me cry. I'm not sure why, might be the fact that I'm going through some emotional moments in my life or whatever, but this brought tears to my eyes.
I love this story. So sad to know it's ending, yet so relieved that things are working out.
Date: 11/01/09 12:47 pm Title: {sixteen}
FINALLY!!!
I was wondering when they'd finally get together!!!
Date: 11/01/09 12:43 pm Title: {sixteen}
Okay before the epilogue is posted so I can say I reviewed while the story was still going: YOU. ARE. AWESOME. I read the manga first before starting this and I was a bit dissapointed in it. I thought the story would be like it but thank god it wasn't. To me Tom seems so much more kind and...thoughtful than the other guy (who's name I have forgotten :P) I can honestly say the only sad part of this story is seeing it end :( I think you did an awesome job following the manga but keeping the story original. I just LOVED it in general and LOVED it more than the manga! I'm sick right now so reading your story has helped me feel a bit better :3 I can't wait for the epilogue! X3 Such an awesome story!! ^^v
Date: 11/01/09 12:19 pm Title: {sixteen}
Beautiful! I don't know how you'll top this story, but I look forward to your next one anyway XD omg... this chapter though... so emotionally in-depth. I don't know how you do it.
Date: 11/01/09 12:07 pm Title: {sixteen}
omgomgomgomg!!!!!!! amazing!!! lovelovelovelove!!!!! *waits impatiently for epilogue* omg!!!! *is incoherent* idk what to say its so well developed, with the characters so well portrayed, omg!!!
Date: 11/01/09 11:55 am Title: {sixteen}
omg. i absolutely loved it and i cant wait for the epilogue and you are god and this was just. ugh. wonderful. thank you :)
Date: 11/01/09 11:11 am Title: {sixteen}
awwww...finally!!!!
i'm crying...can't help it...so so so sweet!!
cant't believe its almost over!beautiful awesome...
sequel????XD
Date: 11/01/09 10:57 am Title: {sixteen}
A little late as I am, reviewing the pretty much last chapter... Damn.
Well. I love this story. I loved, love and will love forever. Honestly, I just read the fic from the beginning, and I must tell you that it's one of the best fics I've EVER read! And I'm not joking here.
Now I really CAN'T wait for the epilogue. And of course the sequel. *innocent smile*
Ah that fic is just so good, I think I'll read it again later. xD
Date: 11/01/09 10:36 am Title: {sixteen}
I loved this story from beginning to the end, it was so angst-ridden and had elements of everything I like in a story. Thanks so much!!!
Date: 11/01/09 10:09 am Title: {sixteen}
oh my god
FINALLY!!
this is what i hoped for
thanks
Date: 11/01/09 10:00 am Title: {sixteen}
aww -tear- my favorite story coming to an end. i usually lurk because i never feel like writing reviews but i love this story so i'm saying im going to miss it
Date: 11/01/09 09:53 am Title: {sixteen}
Omg they finally said it....I can't believe it.....and what ariel was doing to tom is wrong she's a bitch....poor tom having to quite track because of it.....but yeah bill and tom are together -dances-
Date: 11/01/09 09:15 am Title: {sixteen}
Ah. I got up with a hangover just to read this. (^_^) I can't wait for the epilogue. the warm fuzzies generated by this fic could light up NY City for a month, quite possibly two. And best of luck with NaNoWriMo.