Date: 01/02/10 05:26 am Title: {eight}
"You had sex with Tom?" his mother screeched. – lol everyone knows you’re in love with Tom and you can’t even figure out that Tom’s in love with you.
None from Tom. – poor Tom can’t do anything right.
The problem was that Bill was an idiot, and he'd let Tom fuck him. Now nothing would be the same again. – *sigh* it’s just going to get worse isn’t it?!
"...I'm not doing so well in Statistics," Tom admitted at last. "The T.A. kept me after class to talk about my performance on all the tests we've had lately." – oh lame, I hope he knows someone good in stats who can help.
“It was...incredible.” – I didn’t think Bill could be that honest in that moment.
AWE Tom taking care of Bill’s hurt finger, so cute!
cn i c u l8r? aftr track.- I wish people would text in real words *eye roll*
“Snickerdoodle?”
For a moment, Bill thought that Georg was calling him a pet name and he gaped, about to shriek with laughter. – LMFAO!!!
Their eyes met. Tom's expression was dark, unreadable. As Bill raised his hand to wave, Tom took a hard right and ambled off, head bent low. – awe you broke Tom! Awe and yourself too!
Date: 01/02/10 04:42 am Title: {seven}
Awe I really wanted Bill to lick the tip and Tom got all ‘I need to take control’ and Bill didn’t get the chance to lick it.
Tom's eyes were drowning in pupil- very cool description.
"Okay?" Bill repeated, a little outraged that Tom had given up so easily. This was what he wanted, wasn't it? "Wait, you're just...it's fine?" – LMFAO dude you say no and he follows your instructions and you get all indignant?
"We're not talking about me right now," he said too quickly. – OMG you have!
"Let's try it anyhow," – *giggles* so cute
"It feels...like a finger in my butt; God, Tom," Bill said, flushing all over. – LMFAO!!!!!!
He took his sweet time about it, massaging Bill with his fingers until Bill was the one shoving himself onto Tom and demanding more. - *giggles* love the role reversal!
Tom looked down at him with such powerful emotion etched on his face that Bill couldn't understand it. – Clearly!!!!!!!! And stupid Tom can’t say it either. *rolls eyes*
It was utterly hopeless but he was giving his virginity to Tom because he asked for it, because Bill loved him, even if Tom couldn't love him back in that way. – You both are hopeless!!!
This was fucking, and it was amazing, and he could forget for the moment that it would leave his heart hollow. – awe pooh-bear!
Bad enough to make you take up smoking again? – awe Bill! I want to smack you.
"Yeah," Bill said, all nonchalance. "I have homework, you know." – crappiest excuse ever Bill!
One-Night Knockout. No one got a second turn. – awe!
Date: 01/02/10 04:00 am Title: {six}
maybe Tom was even...nervous? – lol but Tom’s just doing this to experiment and for Bill to get some practice in *wink* why would he be nervous?
Bill's first walk of shame.- awe Billy?!
"Because if I go to shower, you might probably just leave." – lol the moment Tom suggested a shower I thought Bill might bolt lol
"Y-You're naked," - um well yes in the shower you tend to be naked lol
"No-o-o," Bill lied, even though it was true he hadn't let himself masturbate in ages. He'd been kind of afraid that if he started, he wouldn't leave his apartment for a week or until his dick fell off after giving up the fight to chafing. – LMFAO to all of this. He just “admitted” to being a 2 minute wonder and trapping himself in his apartment so he could wack off for a week lol!!!
Damn Georg and his locker-room handjobs talk, anyhow. Somehow Bill had convinced himself that was all Tom was expecting from this encounter. – how could “I want to have sex with you” translate to handjob? Lol
I guess the fight or flight instinct goes out the window when lust is involved and we just fold lol.
Date: 01/02/10 03:38 am Title: {five}
He cared about Tom, but if he had sex with Tom, knowing that his best friend was thinking of it as 'practice,' how could he stand it? – yeah, just practice what a dick thing to say.
This wasn't like him. Bill didn't believe in backing down from a problem. His style was to tackle things head-on, and flounder through whatever mistakes that he made in the process. – yeah but the problem with Tom is that Bill will get himself into more trouble before he flounders out of it all.
To fuck Tom or not to fuck Tom that is the question.
Awe Tom is stalking him, lol, waiting for him after class.
“It lets you put people off. You don't let people in, Bill. Meanwhile you've built sex up into this sacred experience, making it more than it is.” – true but girls do it all the time, so what’s the difference with Bill doing it too?
Bill frowned, then he got it. Tom meant Bill's whole 'looking for the One' thing. It was another pinprick burst in the dream-bubble impression that this could be anything other than what it was. – poor Bill! You’re right he’s a master at cock blocking himself!
'oh my god, you've really never been turned down, have you?' - *cackles*
"Because I pay attention to you," Tom whispered back. – does Tom know he might be in love with Bill? lol
Date: 01/02/10 03:02 am Title: {four}
He thinks about you when he's screwing his date - all of them? Hum?! Ok well that sounds like he might actually be interested rather then just curious. *shrug*
"I...kind of heard him yelling your name. Near the end. So, yeah. I'd say he's definitely thinking about you when he comes." – lol no wonder the girls only last for one fuck ha ha ha
“I'm fine,” Bill said, reaching up to grip his backpack strap as though it could provide him with moral support. – it will don’t worry!
His heart was doing that warning squeeze again, the one that told him bolting right now wouldn't be an unwise decision. Better than staying and getting hurt. – awe poor Bill so afraid to loose a friendship and get his heart torn out.
“I think we should have sex.” – lol knowing how Bill is looking for “the one” you think he’s just going to have sex with you?
"I already do regret it," Bill said, too softly for Tom to hear. – Tom sucks!
Date: 01/02/10 02:02 am Title: {three}
"Do we really need beer?"
"Yes," Tom and Andreas answered simultaneously. - Can’t survive without beer huh?! Lol
All these in appropriate questions from Tom and Bill doesn’t seem to get that he might actually be interested…huh?!
This was such a bad idea.
Not because Bill cared. Because Tom didn't. - *sigh* yeah!
Date: 01/02/10 01:40 am Title: {two}
Tom is acting all nervous and anxious like he’s almost asking Bill out or something. What’s going on?
I can totally understand why Bill isn’t jumping on this opportunity if Tom is a wham-bam-thank you ma’ma then it would just kind of destroy poor Bill when it was over.
Bill’s little speech to Georg is adorable lol
Awe and yes I would also chalk it up to experimentation as well.
Date: 01/02/10 01:17 am Title: {one}
What an up and down and up and down hour. OMG poor Bill. What are you supposed to do when someone you are attacted to asks a question like that? And then Tom just goes right back to girls like he never said anything to poor Bill. And Andreas? OMG I'm not sure if it's a good thing or a bad thing that he has no idea how to keep a secret. Oi what a stressful day for Bill.
Date: 12/31/09 02:47 am Title: {epilogue}
hi. there are no words to describe how much i loved this. absolutely going into my favorites, and then im heading straight to your profile to check out your other stories! oh wait, its quarter to 4 in the morning.. oops, look what you did! haha i just stopped by a friends site and got recced here, set up the page to read in the morning and got hooked on the first chapter. you made me cry, laugh and tugged on all my heartstrings.. and maybe turned me on a whole lot. bill and tom are sexy, no doubt about that. shiiiit gurl put me through the wringer! lovelovelove. apologies if this makes no sense, i am rather sleepy ahah. GOODNIGHT!
Date: 12/25/09 05:51 pm Title: {epilogue}
i've just re-read your story in one run and it's the same awesomeness as before))
Date: 12/22/09 06:27 pm Title: {one}
OMFG!!!! THIS STORY WAS AMAZING!!!!
Date: 12/18/09 04:11 pm Title: {epilogue}
One word... Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettttttt
Date: 12/15/09 09:43 pm Title: {epilogue}
That was a wonderful story!! You know I have read more than 300 fics and the half of it are twincest.Then I began to think that have seen the most of it, even go back to het . But there you are with incredible love story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so very glad that you enjoyed this story. ♥
Date: 12/15/09 08:41 pm Title: {sixteen}
SO KNEW IT!!! Wonderful!!
Date: 12/15/09 07:02 pm Title: {fourteen}
Bill said to Ariel in the middle of a crowded cafeteria that he'd been fucked by Tom!!
Date: 12/15/09 06:25 pm Title: {thirteen}
That's so sad! I feel for both of them! It's ok, Bill did what's good for him even if it's hard. So reminding me of my presistent ex.
Date: 12/15/09 06:01 pm Title: {twelve}
Tom is a fucking bastard. How does he dare to do something like that? I so understand Bill, I had been a situation like that and it's hard to end up things. You can do it, Bill!! You're stronger than that!!
Date: 12/15/09 05:13 pm Title: {eleven}
Poor Andi!! Traumatized for life for sure.
Date: 12/15/09 04:18 pm Title: {ten}
Tom is so jealous!!It's so sweet, but he's hiding something.
Date: 12/15/09 03:31 pm Title: {nine}
Tom is suposed to be straight, right. I think he's hiding something. This addiction to Bill isn't just due to his hotness. He said it, it different because he's a boy.