Date: 09/24/09 07:36 pm Title: {two}
Depending on how long you plan on stretching this fic, I'd suggest different things, but if it's planned to be short, then Andi should definitely end sick in bed, or in bed...with some dude/girl, at his date's house.
Author's Response: I'm thinking about fourteen chapters but it depends on how the breaks go for some of the longer stretches. We'll see! And the UST continues; next chapter is up. ;) Thanks for your suggestions!
Date: 09/24/09 05:01 pm Title: {two}
God, this is great already. And it's only been 2 chapters! :D
*flails* So adorable. I love how Bill's over-thinking everything, now. And how Tom is like, messing with him xD Just...awesome ♥
Author's Response: Thank you so much! =D Next part is up. Oh, Bill is definitely over-thinking. And Tom doesn't think he's messing with him...he honestly thinks he is flirting, or...something. Glad you're enjoying!
Date: 09/24/09 04:43 pm Title: {two}
Oh, why are boys so stupid? LOL <3333
Author's Response: It's an affliction. ;D They're lucky we love them anyhow.
Date: 09/24/09 04:02 pm Title: {two}
Oh! And I second the idea of Andreas having to pull out of Friday night for whatever reason and Bill being forced to be alone with little Tomi. :D
Author's Response: I think I definitely managed to get Bill alone with Tomi. }:D Alas, that wasn't enough...
Date: 09/24/09 04:00 pm Title: {two}
Ahhhh, I love this. The Tom character is totally doing it for me. He's this adorable mix of cocky and bashful, just like the real Tom. :F
Author's Response: Yay! :B Oh man, this Tom is so used to having women throw themselves at him, he has no idea what to do to get Bill to do the same. ;D A mix of cocky and bashful is definitely how I'd describe it. Thanks, I'm so glad you're reading and enjoying!
Date: 09/24/09 03:59 pm Title: {two}
awe.:).
Author's Response: Yeah... =)
Date: 09/24/09 01:53 pm Title: {one}
Well...this suggestion is so obvious, but what the hell...I think Andi should suddenly develop an illness, which, while not serious, keeps him from attending the Friday night movie/pizza event, leaving Tom and Bill all alone. Muahahahahahahaha!!!!
Author's Response: *laughs* It's amazing how many people are rooting for Andi's bad health all of a sudden. ;D Thanks for your comment!
Date: 09/24/09 01:04 pm Title: {one}
Oh the tension come Friday night! Can't wait to see what developes...
Author's Response: Yup yup! Things should be interesting. Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/24/09 12:10 pm Title: {two}
This was great, Bill is so adorably confused, Tom's really messing w/ his head w/o even knowing it!
Author's Response: Bill is definitely confused, and Tom is definitely messing with his head. ;) Next part is up, thanks for your review!
Date: 09/24/09 12:02 pm Title: {one}
Wow, I guess Tom likes Bill more than Bill thought he did. Nice! This is a fantastic first chapter, perfect mix of entertaintment w/ sexual tension.
Author's Response: ...Something, right?? Thanks! I'm really glad it came across so well. ♥ More to come!
Date: 09/24/09 11:38 am Title: {two}
bad,bad Tom for making Bill so confused
and u should write more and post soon
Author's Response: Heh, definitely naughty Tom. He didn't really think through his approach. Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/24/09 11:37 am Title: {two}
uhhh MORE!?!!??? I love it.
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Author's Response: Thank you! More is up. ;)
Date: 09/24/09 10:38 am Title: {two}
This story is adorable :) I really like the character interactions. Bill seems like such a sweetheart, and the poor kid is so confused. And poor Tom, too, Bill just doesn't get it!
I liked both chapters! Andreas seems fun and I really like Georg, too. He seems like a good friend. The interactions between the characters were great, and I'll be sitting here hoping for an update :D
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so pleased to hear you like the character interactions. That's definitely one of my favorite parts of writing. Bill is definitely confused...and scared of a change in their relationship, I think. ;) Glad you're enjoying the fic, thanks for your encouragement and your review!
Date: 09/24/09 10:06 am Title: {two}
Argh Georg! You didn't help at all! Grrr. Come on Bill...it's only 2 chapters and I'm already frustrated, LOL.
Author's Response: Yup, Georg was...not as helpful as he could have been. ;) Aw, go easy on poor Bill, he's a 19-year old virgin! Good to know the UST is effective. XD
Date: 09/24/09 09:57 am Title: {two}
Awesome developments! Poor Tom trying to hint at his interest and poor Bill misinterpreting everything...can't wait for chapter three!
Author's Response: And even more developments now! Chapter three is up. ;) Tom is not used to courting, really; he's pretty much used to girls throwing themselves at him. And Bill is willfully misinterpreting, I think. Thanks for your review, I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 09/22/09 11:23 pm Title: {one}
Love it...so far
lol j/k, I've been watching the Simpson's Movie. Stupid twin for putting it in the DVD player
Author's Response: Thanks! ;) Hope you continue to enjoy; next part is up.
Date: 09/22/09 07:07 am Title: {one}
i want to read the rest of this story!!!
carry on posting... fur mich?
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you're this interested! Next part is up. =)
Date: 09/19/09 01:11 pm Title: {one}
Whoa. WHOA. If you don't continue this I'll hunt you down. Period. XD
Author's Response: No, not the hunting! *continues* There will be more. =) Thanks!
Date: 09/18/09 11:49 pm Title: {one}
I know you believe this one was going to 'die on the vine' but I kind of like it and I do hope you continue. I think Bill's kind of a darling in this one and I'd really like to see where you take it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I've been absolutely blown away by the responses to this. And it's kind of pushed itself up in my queue of priorities. Next part is up and I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 09/16/09 08:21 pm Title: {one}
This is oh-so awesome, I'm already hooked. I really hope you update soon, I can already tell I'm going to LOVE this story. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad! Next part is up, and I really hope you continue to enjoy. =)