Date: 10/02/09 12:34 am Title: {three}
Yep, he does quite well at his own cockblocking. Dammit! lol But goodness, I love me some heavy UST. You do it so well, too. And that look of Tom's, the one when he's playing. I could definitely see it. Very nicely done! I'm excited for the next chapter. :D
Author's Response: Dismayingly good at cockblocking himself! ;) I think Bill is kind of lolling in the UST right now, he's scared of what RST means. ♥ I am so glad you're enjoying this fic! It's definitely a pleasure to write, and cooperating nicely so far (even if it appears the boys are not). Thank you so much for your support!
Date: 10/02/09 12:02 am Title: {one}
Lord-the sexual tension is gonna kill me! Tom playing guitar for Bill makes me think that he truely cares for Bill and it's not just "experimenting" or "trying to get some" . *sits and waits for next chapter*
Author's Response: Yup, plenty of unresolved sexual tension in this so far! ;) I'm glad it makes you think that. ♥ Sit tight for next week! (I can't promise sooner.)
Date: 10/01/09 11:57 pm Title: {three}
lol.
just LOL.
Bill is cockblocking himself SO MUCH that i'm literally falling over in giggles.
i like how sweet they are.but also how Tom is OBVIOUSLY tryna get some and Bill is all 'ummmmmmm'
xD
Author's Response: Bill's VERY GOOD at cockblocking himself. ...And the trend continues. Next part is up. ;)
Tom is SO obviously trying to get some; I mean, it's obvious to you and me. But not Bill. And Tom is really not used to people not throwing themselves at him, so he had to figure out what to DO.
Date: 10/01/09 11:51 pm Title: {three}
WOOOT, go Bill.:).
Author's Response: He's doing his best! For a cute lil' sophomore virgin.
Date: 10/01/09 11:41 pm Title: {three}
COCKBLOCKED.
No, but seriously, I'm getting even more into this, if that's even possible! I love the fact that they're already close, as friends, and you illustrate that while bringing across the (sort of) newfound sexual tension between them. Also love that Tom only plays his guitar for Bill - it's a nice hint that there might be something more than lust contributing to Tom's interest.
...yes, I've read the manga, so I may be cheating. Heh. Cannot wait to see Bill's reaction to this startling proposition of Tom's!
Author's Response: COCKBLOCKED CONCLUSIVELY, my friend. =D Bill's VERY good at cockblocking himself! I'm so glad you noticed all of those things, the friendship and the tension and the hints that Tom is not just lusting over Bill. ;) Definitely a different direction compared to Ryoji.
Was Bill's reaction everything you expected? HEE HEE. I mean. Thank you for your lovely review, and I hope you continue to enjoy. ...The cockblocking. XD
Date: 10/01/09 11:23 pm Title: {three}
*dies* I have to wait to see what happens next?! I might not be able to make it till then!! *jiggles around*
Author's Response: I updated pretty quickly this time! I bet it didn't leave you in any better of a place than you were before, though. *snicker* Thanks for reviewing, I'm so pleased you're still...uh, enjoying the suspense? ;)
Date: 09/28/09 10:46 pm Title: {two}
Hmm...
Could it be that Tom knows that Bill likes him and he is trying to give Bill hints that he likes him too. Or he doesn't know but is still trying to drop hints of his interest in Bill.
Just some thoughts.
Author's Response: Tom doesn't realize Bill likes him in that way, no; though he's hoping Bill is attracted enough to be receptive to his advances. ;) Definitely trying to make his interest clear to Bill. Thanks for your review! Next chapter is up.
Date: 09/28/09 05:57 pm Title: {two}
Aw, Bill! *sighs*
I don't even know what to tell you here, if Tomi boy won't even OPEN HIS MOUTH in the first place.
Author's Response: Yeah, "aw, Bill" is a pretty good summation. ;) And Tom takes it for granted that the people he's interested in will do all the work for him...he thinks he's made a pretty straightforward declaration of interest and he's probably like, "...why isn't Bill dropping his pants?"
Date: 09/27/09 03:48 am Title: {two}
Oh, I absolutely LOVE this!
Bill's reaction was priceless, and I have to thank you for not having Bill and Tom immediately go at it after Tom's confession; lots of authors would've done something like that, so I always appreciate it when an author makes the characters take their time. It makes it SO much more realistic, and it definitely makes for a more quality story.
Poor Bill... it's so cute how selfless he's being about the entire thing; he likes Tom, but at the same time, he's convinced himself that there's no way that Tom's interested in him.
And Tom... well, lol. He's just... he... XD Well, he's blunt, that's for sure, haha! I like their personalities in this fic; they're both so quirky, but very believable at the same time!
You're an excellent writer, and I'm tracking this story. I can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ♥ Oh, I definitely couldn't have them moving too fast...Bill's too innocent, and Tom's used to the ladies coming onto him and doing all the work for him. I really appreciate your comments! I hope you continue to enjoy the story - next part is up!
Date: 09/26/09 11:03 am Title: {two}
Haha! Love this!
The original is awesome, but this is even more awesome because it's the boys =D
I just re-read a bit the additional episode in it lol!Ok,ok no spoiler but lol.
You talk about death though...Possibly.How're you going to twist the story?So instead of art we have music(obviously) and Tom's sport?(hope it's the same cause swimmers are hot!But with his haircut I don't know...)
*can't wait to read more*
Thank you!
Author's Response: Hurrah, I'm so glad it's "even more awesome!" *very pleased* ...What additional episode? I'm not sure what you mean about death. Yeah, instead of art, Bill does music; instead of swimming, Tom does track. Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/26/09 10:41 am Title: {two}
Finished reading chapter one! And I see in your author's note that it was indeed desire. *wants a cookie anyway* lol
It's really fun to read this with Tom and Bill and Andy. Somehow, more glamorous images BUT Toru and Ryoji are perfect too *_* esecially the former.He's so cute!
Author's Response: Woohoo! Yep, it's Desire! ;) Sorry, Kishmet gets the cookie. I'm glad you're enjoying it! Toru's adorable, but Bill can definitely give him a run for his money in the cuteness category, I think.
Date: 09/26/09 10:14 am Title: {one}
I knew it! I just read the first paragraph after my first review but I know that manga too well *dances*
It's desire! I LOVE that manga(like the rest of the yaoi stuff on my shelf *_*) I knew there was a reason I loved all your writing so much.You have different influences in your writing, not only the books or movies out there *_*
*goes back reading* This is sooo going to be interesting!
Author's Response: I have shelves and shelves of manga. And so many eclectic books in my collection. ;) Glad you're enjoying it! Thank you again for the lovely comments.
Date: 09/26/09 10:09 am Title: {one}
WOW! How come I didn't see this? Talya,I'll read everything you write even the weirdest you'll come up with in the future XD.
I didn't begin to read this yet, but from the summary,and the title and the author's note, I'll say this is based from "Desire" by Maki Kazumi and Yukine Honami. I have it on my shelf and read it from time to time so...It made me think about this. Now I'll read.If I'm wrong well...At least I tried ^_^
Author's Response: I have some pretty weird things in my ideas file; hope you can stick to that promise. ;D And you nailed "Desire" too! It's one of my faves.
Date: 09/25/09 04:39 pm Title: {two}
i think andreas should cancel...;)..it would be just bill and tom...
i'm already liking this very much!
Author's Response: Definitely managed to detain Andreas! Bill and Tom got their alone time, but it's gonna take a bit more than just that. ;) Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 09/25/09 12:53 am Title: {two}
OMG, Desire! I've read the last three chapters of that. Wow, this is going to be sooo good, with the storyline, and Bill and Tom, and you writing it (it's fantastic already, really). I really hope you see this through to the end. =D
Author's Response: Yup, it's Desire! =D It was a spur of the moment idea to adapt it, but I found myself unable to resist. Thank you so much for the compliments, I'm blushing! Next part is up, don't miss it! I really appreciate your reviews.
Date: 09/25/09 12:38 am Title: {two}
Andi eats some bad sushi and *gasp*, can't make Friday night. Shucks! He could even be kidnapped by aliens. It could happen! And you know, then Bill and Tom will have to be alone. Sure, it would be weird at first, it would be awkward, but I think they could find a way to pass the time eventually.^^
And by the way, I freaking love this story. :D
Author's Response: LOL, everyone wants to off or otherwise get rid of poor Andi! You know if he was sick he'd be moaning in his room, not exactly a seduction-worthy backdrop. ;D But Bill and Tom definitely got their alone time.
I am SO SO glad you freaking love this story. That makes my week.
Date: 09/24/09 11:39 pm Title: {two}
Aha, this is the perfect fun thing to read after a long day at school! Love the way Tom and Bill fit perfectly into the roles from the manga while still being so thoroughly themselves.
I'll be Looking forward to those Friday night shenanigans, especially if Andreas does wind up backing out, as per the suggestions given. *peers down at other reviews* I think we all have filthy minds here.
Author's Response: Hurrah, I'm glad to hear it! And that's especially pleasing to hear, because you know the original and I'm heartened to think I'm doing a decent job with the adaptation. Friday night shenanigans...well, you know by now how that went. ;D And everyone does have filthy minds, but you're in good company with Tom. Who definitely wanted to get some. *nod* He has Bill's +500 Purity Shield to contend with, though.
Date: 09/24/09 10:08 pm Title: {two}
Eeeee! I'm so impatient, I wanted Bill to go hang out with Tom after classes so bad. They need to get alone together, soon. *pokes you* >:D I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: *grins* But I wanna draw out the UST... ;D Next chapter is up, and they definitely get some alone time together. Thank you for your review, and the poking! =D
Date: 09/24/09 08:22 pm Title: {one}
Sorry, when I meant "He", it's my dad.
Author's Response: No worries. =)
Date: 09/24/09 08:20 pm Title: {two}
I LOVE, LOVE, LLLLLLLUUUUUUUUUUUVVVVVVV, the part of Georg assuming Bill had a "Crush" on him. I bursted out laughing, I'm surprise that he didn't scold me for he hates whenever I just start laughing out loud our of no where. Then again, he was in the bathroom. Seriously, I ENVY you writers. You guys have a talent to capture the feelings and setings in a story. Please, PLEASE, don't stop uploading this story. I was HOOKED, and I mean HOOKED when I first read it. SO good,
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! Oh, I'm definitely into this story now; it tried to edge out one of my other WIPs but I'm determined to stay on track. I'm happy to hear that you're hooked! More next week. ;)