Date: 10/04/09 03:35 pm Title: {three}
OHHH
Author's Response: I have no idea what the "oh" is for, but thanks for reading? :D
Date: 10/04/09 09:49 am Title: {three}
I just found this story and I really love it so far. Can't wait for an update to see if Tom's going to hit on Bill, which of course I hope he does ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love working on it and I'm so happy everyone is enjoying it so much, you all are really encouraging me. =) And of course Tom just can't help hitting on Bill. Next chapter is up, and I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 10/03/09 10:43 am Title: {one}
Too true, too true. They're lucky we need them to keep from dying out, lol
Author's Response: I've often thought this, myself!
Date: 10/03/09 06:24 am Title: {one}
Hi!What I meant by "death" in my previous review was your first author's note or chapters note o_O.You talked about possibly writing one (character death),ne?Hope it's not this story XD
Author's Response: Oh. OH. I said "I haven't outlined it to death" meaning that I hadn't obsessively and exhaustively outlined everything that was going to happen in the story. That's all! No, I'll be loosely following the manga, but there will be some twists. ;)
Date: 10/03/09 02:58 am Title: {three}
I LOVE this! Bill's hesitation, Tom's sudden bouts of shyness, their friendly banter, it's all so well written and realistic! It's sooo cute, and the way that Bill and Tom are with each other, best friends one moments, and awkwardlly questioning things the next, and it leaves you on the edge of your seat, holding your breath, wondering what'll happen next!
I can't wait to read more of this story; it's simply wonderful! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! Tom's not used to being the wooer, I think. Plus this would be the first time he's ever come onto someone he genuinely LIKES. I really appreciate the compliments, you and everyone are definitely encouraging me to write faster! =) Next chapter is up - I hope you continue to enjoy the story! =)
Date: 10/02/09 11:30 pm Title: {three}
I enjoy that Bill's household expenses rank as important as skinny jeans. Winner.
Author's Response: Bill has his priorities, you know. Next part is up if you're enjoying! :D
Date: 10/02/09 11:02 pm Title: {three}
I like it a lot!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hope you continue to enjoy; the next part is up. =)
Date: 10/02/09 08:55 pm Title: {three}
It could be one or two things. It could be Flyleaf or Paramore. No, I don't listen to them, my sister does. And I LOVED it!!!!! YOU MUST CONTINUE WRITING!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've updated, I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Date: 10/02/09 05:59 pm Title: {three}
Lolll, cockblocking. I lol'd hard at that, especially after reading it. It's the truth.
But anyway, another great chapter. I really like this story, the characters are adorable. Tom's leaving it pretty open but Bill is SO naive! XD Well, hopefully he gets the hint. Nice job with this, I'll be waiting for more!
Author's Response: It's so the truth. Thanks so much! I'm enjoying writing it, and all of your reviews are definitely encouraging me to write faster. ;) Bill is more than just naive...he's trying to protect himself, he doesn't want to get his heart broken. More is up, and I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 10/02/09 03:57 pm Title: {three}
i like this
i like cocky Tom
and Bill's still a virgin?
Tom really wants to say smth,i hope that they won't be interrupted...
update soon please
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad! Cocky Tom is amazingly fun to write. Especially when not from his POV. Bill is, indeed, still a virgin - and very much acting like it! Thanks for your review. =)
Date: 10/02/09 02:35 pm Title: {three}
Aw! so much sexual tension! I love it! thank you for the update :)
Author's Response: SO much. And Bill's taking COLD showers, the fool. Thank you for your review! Next chapter's up. ;)
Date: 10/02/09 01:52 pm Title: {three}
I'm loving this. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! More is up, and I hope you continue to enjoy it! ♥
Date: 10/02/09 10:10 am Title: {three}
Hey. Your story is amazing!!
Please post more soon?
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and the next part is up. ;) Hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 10/02/09 07:52 am Title: {three}
noooooo...damn door..i'm gonna kill the pizza guy...moooooore update soon!!!
Author's Response: That pizza guy has good timing! I mean bad. Very bad. Yes. ...I updated sooner than last time! :D Thanks for your review.
Date: 10/02/09 07:51 am Title: {three}
I love love love it! Sometimes I want to slap Bill for interupting what Tom is trying to say, but ofcourse that's just makes it twice as exiting ;) Mooore!
Oh and what he listens to.. hm I don't know. Fix you with Coldplay maybe? Or maybe that's too obvious or cheesy ;)
Author's Response: I'm so happy you love it! ♥ Oh, Bill thinks he knows - and he's sure he doesn't want to. More is up! And Coldplay turned out to be the winner. Thanks for the suggestion!
Date: 10/02/09 06:51 am Title: {three}
Ok Bill, seriously, wake up dude! He's practically spelling it out for you! *slaps forehead*
Author's Response: Tom is TOTALLY spelling it out for him...but he's not used to having to be the one making the moves. Seriously. Usually girls put the make on him; no effort on his part. ...Oh, Bill. ;) Thanks for your review! So happy you're still enjoying.
Date: 10/02/09 05:30 am Title: {three}
uhm... greenday? boulevard of broken dreams or 21 guns?
and more please? soon?
Author's Response: More is up, and thanks for the suggestions. ;)
Date: 10/02/09 04:45 am Title: {three}
Oh man, everytime I see that this has been updated, I do a little dance in my chair. I hold my breath whenever Bill and Tom speak; sometimes I want to skip to the bottom of the page to see what the outcome of the chapter is XD I have no idea what Bill would listen to when he's emo. I try listen to songs with stories in them when I'm feeling a bit down, mostly little love stories or the type where a singer sings about meeting a girl in a club or something. Lol Akon's somewhat new song is a good candidate for me. Erm, hell if I know what its called. Digressing from the point! I love this story and I wish it was finished so that I didnt have to wait. I look forward to the next chapter. Would incentive encourage you to update faster? Name the price!!
Stacey
Author's Response: I'm so very glad to hear that! I'm so, so thrilled at the positive response to this story; still kind of blown away. =) Thank you so much for letting me know you're enjoying it. I'm working on it pretty quickly, I hope to not make you all wait very long between updates. ;) And I cranked the next chapter out faster than last time, so...we'll see how it goes! Thanks for your review.
Date: 10/02/09 01:55 am Title: {three}
UGH the build up is killing me. in a delicious way. great job :) i think he listens to coldplay, duh!
Author's Response: BB, the build-up is the best part! ;D Thank you! ...And Coldplay turned out to be a winner.
Date: 10/02/09 12:49 am Title: {three}
Oh my god the..........
UNRESOLVED SEXUAL TENSION
So hot. UST is always the best part, even better than the RST. Well, sometimes. I mean, you write smut like a pro, so your RST sort of blows the UST out of the water but WHATEVER. I'm not making sense anymore.
I love the simple storyline in this fic and the top notch writing, of course. I like how even your tone has a sort of college feel to it, like you've shaped, very subtly, your syntax to be a bit more laid back and youthful.
Maybe Bill listens to some Fiona Apple when he's emo. I know I do, and gay guys love her.
Author's Response: HE LOVES IT, YOU KNOW HE MUST LOVE IT. Why else would he give himself blue balls?
I'm having so much fun with this UST, you guys don't even know. ;D Virginal Bill is...amazing. RST is going to be fun, too, but...not just yet. *shifty*
Thank you so, so much. I am so incredibly thrilled at your compliments, you totally made my day. ♥ And this fic is kind of happily making me relive my college days.
I like to think he'd listen to "Never is a Promise," but was coaxed into Coldplay.