Date: 10/08/09 11:05 pm Title: {five}
Okay, I think I just have to add you to my list of "authors to read anything and everything from." This is so intriguing, and hilarious, and I LOVE the characterizations. Bill's so wonderfully virginal and cautious, and Tom's an awesome awkward mix of cocky, infatuated, and best-friend. It brings me back to college days with the whole tone, as well, it's fabulous.
Heh, I can't wait to see what happens back at the apartment; I hope we get an update before you go and enjoy the heck outta your cruise!
Author's Response: XD I am so incredibly flattered by that! Thank you! And what a lovely review, I'm very glad you're getting all of that out of the characterizations - so intended! I appreciate hearing your impressions, it lets me know the story is coming along the way I intend. Thanks so much for your review. =) Next chaper is up - I really hope you like it! And I am surely going to enjoy the heck out of my cruise. (Hopefully after I post one more chapter.)
Date: 10/08/09 10:57 pm Title: {five}
I WANT MORE GRRRRRR
so good :D
Author's Response: More is totally up, I hope you like it! ;) Thank you!
Date: 10/08/09 09:23 pm Title: {one}
Omygosh (I can't put OMG, it irritates the shit out of me) If you gonna put Tom does Bill but goes out with another girl in the next chapter, I'm gonna Kill you. No, I'm gonna PULVERIZE you. I love this chapter, it clearly states why Bill choose to wait but Tom challenges that statement.
Author's Response: You're gonna have to trust the author on this one. =) Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Date: 10/08/09 08:56 pm Title: {five}
I like it. I'm a little scared for Bill, but I like it.
Author's Response: It's smart to be scared for Bill. ;) Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: 10/08/09 07:32 pm Title: {five}
Damn eet, it ate the rest of my review. Uhhh anyway, the bit quoted in the last one utterly melted my heart, and this chapter is just as good as... ahem. What we thought it would be. This provides no incentive to leave off bullying you, by the way. Apparently it's effective. ;D
Author's Response: Hee hee, soooo intended. ♥ And I'm so very glad you continue to enjoy it. I must admit, it was an unholy amount of fun to write. :D
Date: 10/08/09 07:25 pm Title: {five}
"Because I pay attention to you," Tom whispered back. He squeezed Bill's pinky finger, looking down at their twined digits, and there was an obscure little smile on his lips. "It's a promise."
Author's Response: Ahaha, I could tell you were having trouble with this review. ;D
Date: 10/08/09 06:16 pm Title: {five}
Ths is tha mst twìstd ive eva come across a non-relatd ting....can i tel u im dyin nt hvin maw to read T.T gosh its jst so amazin...cnt wait to read da nxt pitch! O.O
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. =)
Date: 10/08/09 06:14 pm Title: {five}
If they had just fallen into bed I would be disappointed in the story. All the hideing and the murse attack - perfect.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yup, there was no way they could just fall into bed. Even at the crucial moment, Bill continues to hesitate! I appreciate your review. =)
Date: 10/08/09 04:05 pm Title: {five}
This was perfect! Again, I have to say how much I love that they're not rushing into it; Bill's hesitating, and Tom is having to actually do some chasing.
I love their friendship; it's so realistic, and all of the little quirks, like horsing around, and pinky promises, make it feel like you're reading about your own best friend. (Well, with the exception of them wanting to have sex with you. XD)
I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'm blushing, thank you so much! Yes, it's as real and awkward as I can make it, with those glimpses of their friendship peeking through. ;) I'm really happy to hear those things, it totally makes me feel I'm doing my job right as an author. I really appreciate your reviews! ♥
Date: 10/08/09 03:46 pm Title: {five}
Ok I have never read a story like this...you have me on my toes lol keep it comin!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy that you're enjoying it, and I hope you like the next part! ;) It's up. Thanks for your review!
Date: 10/08/09 03:40 pm Title: {five}
.:).
Author's Response: =D
Date: 10/08/09 02:11 pm Title: {one}
*pushes barometer up* definetly continue asap! i love it already, you describe perfectly how an unwanted crush feels!
Author's Response: =) Thank you! This one's managed to soar up on my priorities list. ;) The story itself really got to me. I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 10/08/09 12:18 pm Title: {five}
eh eh bill running from tom was really funny...lets see how this works out..can't wait to see!!!;)
Author's Response: I know, it's hard to imagine Bill running away, right? We'll see how it goes! Thanks so much for your review. =)
Date: 10/08/09 12:18 pm Title: {five}
Oh you better not abandon me before they do it, I'm in love w/ this story and personally would like to hold you captive until you're done (then you can leave) but I'll suffer through... somehow.
Author's Response: Eheheh, we're...halfway there? I have to get some other projects done but I'll do my level best to not leave anyone hanging TOO much before I go on the cruise. ;D
Date: 10/08/09 12:06 pm Title: {five}
okay just started reading this now I'm like OMG NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE and freaking out and stuff, you know how it is.
ANYWAYS. I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Hee, awesome. Glad I've got you hooked! Next chapter is up and I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: 10/08/09 11:37 am Title: {five}
♥_♥
I have was supposed to be gone for lunch, but I could NOT resist reading this update =) Gosh, this is sooo good. And I REALLY like Tom in this :D
I hope you have fun on your cruise! =]
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad to hear it! ♥ I just love seeing peoples' excitement over this story, it definitely gets me hyped to work on more. And yay for people liking Tom! Next chapter is up, I hope you like it - and thanks for your good wishes! I know I'm going to have a blast. =D
Date: 10/08/09 11:18 am Title: {five}
Excited much? dammit!!! I think this story is one of the hardest to figure out..
I kinda have a hobby of predicting what should happen next and most often than not I'm right but with this.. its 3-0.. I'm zero..-pouts- well that keeps it exciting doesn't it? more?
Author's Response: Hee hee, such was my intention.
Really, I've been surprising?? Good! I hope to keep you surprised as we go forward. There's quite a bit left. ;)
Date: 10/08/09 09:30 am Title: {five}
I love your Tom in this! :) Don't back down Tom! And I hope you have a great time on your cruise. :D
Author's Response: I am SO glad you love Tom in this, it's been an interesting balance to walk. I don't want him to come across as an asshole, and yet he's definitely going to be pushy to get what he wants. As to his motives... :D Thanks, I'm REALLY looking forward to my cruise!
Date: 10/08/09 05:35 am Title: {five}
I sincerely hope you manage to get anouther chapter done before you leave. Otherwise I'll cry, pout, and threaten to kick your ass the entire time you're gone. Well, maybe not the entire time.
I reallllllllly like this, and I have to be up in like ...... 5 hours, so I'm reading this while i should be sleeping!
Author's Response: Oh, I managed! ;) It's up, but I don't think it left anyone at a better stopping point. :D Sorry to make you lose sleep! I hope you enjoy chapter six, and thank you for your review.
Date: 10/08/09 04:31 am Title: {five}
adorable! can't wait for more, and have a great trip away!
Author's Response: Awesome, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for your review. Next chapter is up, and oh, I am REALLY looking forward to my trip. =D