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Reviewer: Stardust27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/10 06:22 pm Title: Epilogue

I feel like I knew this was coming, today to be exact... I still wasn't ready though. I'm so proud of you bby, this fic has been completely amazing from beginning to end and I hope you're as happy with it as we all are. ♥Perfect♥

Reviewer: ky_lawrence Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/10 06:20 pm Title: Epilogue

Perfect ending to such an epic story. :) Thank so so much for sharing with us! I loved this story the whole way through, and I'm a bit sad to see it go. But it's a happy sad. :')

Reviewer: Krissi_Casa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/10 12:07 pm Title: Arrival

I am in tears that this is ending. This was the first fic I read on here and the first twc fic I read. I can honestly say that there is not one thing I would change about this. I fon't think I will ever forget it, either. Truly, you are an amazing writer.

Reviewer: Stardust27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/10 08:55 pm Title: Arrival

Took awhile, but I finally got the time to catch up on this latest chapter bby... I have so much to say... This entire story has been beautiful Kish, just brilliantly told and executed. Each memory of the past melded perfectly with the present, it was very seamless and beautiful to read. As for this chapter, I'd have to say my favorite part was where they laid on the bed and their hands combined formed the greatship shadow. That just... your writing is on a whole different level than almost anything in this fandom and I'm so happy you're sharing all of this with us. I can't wait to read the epilogue, though I know I'll feel completely destroyed after this is finally over. Love you, love this, so much ♥

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 05:15 am Title: Arrival

you're fucking gifted, pardon my french. god i think this is the best thing ive ever read. anywhere. it's just breathtaking how you weave the flashbacks in, and the love and the mind-link...its wonderful that they're together and found a way to keep going, but also stay together. their love for each other is so complete and all encompassing...it gets me all teary and put's a lump of emotion in my throat at just the little signs of their affection...their complete and utter in and out knowledge of one another. their history and their future.....its all perfect. bravo. this story will be sorely missed, and often recommended and re-read, i assure you

Reviewer: FishPanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/10 03:00 am Title: Arrival

I loved this! So worth the wait. Love this universe, love the charactization, love the fact that the don't want to retire but can't stand to be apart again.

Reviewer: ky_lawrence Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/10 08:00 pm Title: Arrival

The last sentence was perfect.

Reviewer: mikinyet Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/10 07:12 am Title: Arrival

Aww I am so glad that things have worked out for the twins. Trust the fleet to come out smelling of roses by indorsing Tom's rescue mission.

Reviewer: boypants8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/10 01:46 am Title: Arrival

my heart is full. it may seem silly but i want to cry, it was very emotional. i am so relieved and happy that it ended the way it did. fantastic job!

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/10 12:33 am Title: Arrival

Oh, where do I start? I've absolutely adored this story since I started reading it (I don't remember how far along it was at that point, but I know it's been a while). I do apologize for not reviewing sooner.

I'm so glad everything's turning out! You've had me on so many emotional ups and downs the whole time - it's nice to have a steady upward trend in the past few chapters, haha.

I'm looking forward to the epilogue, even though part of me wishes this would never end.

Reviewer: DeadBirds Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/10 09:18 pm Title: Arrival

I know I don´t ussualy review, but I feel compelled to tell You now that You are one the best writer I´ve come across in the wonderfull world of slashy fiction, and in general really, this particular story is one of my very favourites, the connection between the twins is so intense and so beautifully writen, from the begining and all through the story, I´m just speachless, in my opinion you are one of the rare ones that actually writes high quality fiction around here, from the way the characters are portraited, always consitent with themselves along the story; the originality of the stories, some of the stuff you write is a lot better than some of the fiction hollywood releases every year, imagine a story like this one, taken to the big screan, I know, wistful thinking, but still, I´m dreamer, so I´ll dream; and of course, your particular writing style, wich I really, really enjoy, is funny, intense, and I just love it.
Well, that was what I wnted so say, I´m sure the word don´t really express what I wanted to say, but I did try, hope You got the message though.
I´ll be waiting, eagerly, for the epilogue.
And thank You for this wonderfull fic.

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/10 07:47 pm Title: Arrival

God this story I love with all my heart!!! This story just made me cry out of saddness and happiness!! Literally! So i'm glad its dark in my side of the room or otherwise my roomate would be wondering why I have rivers of tears flowing down my face! But God this was just so fricken good!!! I couldn't stop reading! I read all 14 chapters today and I'm glad I held off for along time in not reading this fic! Cuz I'm a impatient person and wouldn't be happy in waiting for the next chapters xD But now its only the epilogue to go than its over ;_; Thats sooo sad since I hate it when somethings over that I don't want to end!!!! I fealt so sad for Tom when he hasn't seen his twin for months! I fealt even more heartbroken for Bill when he hasn't seen his twin in 7 years!!! I was also wondering in the beginning how you were gonna put that in the story! I'll tell you I wasn't expecting it to be where Bill was to go by faster than the time Tom was in! *not sure if that makes sense* Also when Bill was hiding something form Tom, I was wondering if Bill was sick or something, for some reason the game "Dead Space" kept coming into my head xD But God I just loved this!!!!

Reviewer: candiesweet16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/10 06:19 pm Title: Arrival

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH YOU HAVE NO IDEA. :) The way you ended the whole journey was perfect - completely believable and not rushed at all. In fact, the pacing of this entire fic has been just right, lingering on the best parts but never skipping through anything too quickly. I especially love the flashbacks and how they don't just stand alone - they actually add to what is happening in the "present" of the story. Ahh it's just so epic I don't understand why it hasn't been made a movie yet! ;) I can't wait for the epilogue - even though I'll be really sad to see this fic end since it's definitely one of my favorites. :')

Reviewer: Burntsienna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/10 06:14 pm Title: Departure

Silly box lopped off my long train of hearts and more squeeing following the word "amazing." Anyway. MUCH LOVE.

Reviewer: Burntsienna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/10 06:13 pm Title: Arrival

Amazing.

Reviewer: Billa_Loves_Skittles Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/10 04:17 pm Title: Arrival

gyha!  no words, its just amazing, and wonderful to read about them being together again! YaY for Tom and Alexei and Grigori and everyone that helped Tom do what he had to.

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/10 03:11 pm Title: Arrival

Oh my Goodness, where on earth do I even begin?! This fic is unbelieveably fantastic! And this chapter, wow, I need a moment *__* It was full of so much brilliance, so many emotions and WOW so powerful! It was such a wonderful surprise to see this updated, it was a really fabulous chapter!

I loved their arrival! The line that really got me was when Admiral (*squee*) Jost said "Nor," he added solemnly, "are the lives of the greatest Navigator and Anchor pair I've ever been privileged to know." That really did make me tear up *__* and then the end, well that had the tears rolling down! I can't tell you how unbelievably incredible this chapter was, this whole fic was! I can't believe it's nearly over. Thank you for such an utteraly mindblowingly perfect update :)

Author's Response: Ah, you're so sweet! I flailed and blushed all over the place when I read this review. I'm so glad this chapter got you emotional; I know the rest of the fic has been pretty intense, and I really wanted to match that here, even though it's basically their happy ending. So thank you! ♥

Got to admit, I can't believe it's nearly over, either. I'll miss it, but there'll probably be some side stories in future, so watch out for those. ;) Thank you so much for sticking with this fic all the way to its almost-end!

Reviewer: marydee Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/10 03:04 pm Title: Arrival

This was so worth the wait!

Author's Response: I was so hoping it would be! Thank you. ♥

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/10 03:04 pm Title: Arrival

*hearts, hearts and more hearts*

I still would like to know what they're going to do about Bill's age. I'm well aware that in the grand scheme of things that doesn't matter in the slightest, but I suppose they're going to next celebrate Tom's 26(?)th birthday and Bill's 33(?)rd birthday? Ah well. (I completely forget their ages)

I also feel the need to confess that at first I really didn't like the frequent flashbacks in each chapter; I found it very jarring. But then I saw how it's not jarring, it fits with what's being discussed. And now I love how it makes the story multi-dimensional :)

Author's Response: *hearts back!* Hm, well, Bill's age is going to be tough for Tom to come to terms with, because he thinks it means he might outlive Bill, and he really couldn't handle that. But Bill will remind him whenever he's angsting that they go together, no matter what, and will then tease him about being the older brother now. :P

I appreciate your honesty! And I appreciate the fact that you stuck with the fic regardless, and it makes me all flaily to know you've come to like the style! That's high praise indeed. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/10 02:04 pm Title: Arrival

I was so excited to see an update on this fic ! This last chapter was amazing. It’s the perfect last chapter for this beautiful story. I especially like the ending scene, when they decide to be a Greatship pair. It really brings the story full circle. Bill was so right; they really are the greatest twin pair of all time.

I’m sad to see this fic ends because I had so much fun reading it, it was an incredible journey! In my opinion, this is one of the best fic in term of picturing the soulmate/twin bond/true love between the twins. Their relationship is so pure, intense and beautiful in this story, I truly enjoyed following it and I can’t thank you enough for sharing this amazing fic with us. I’m looking forward to the epilogue and to any new story you’ll post =)

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much. ♥ I'd been hedging on this chapter because I wanted to make it worthy of their story, so it means more than I can say that you think it's a fitting last section.

To tell you the truth, I'll be sad to see it over with, too. The twin bond is exactly what drew me to this fandom to begin with, and I feel like I got to explore it more in this fic than in any of my others! I'm so glad you've been enjoying this story and have stuck with it to the end. I'll try my best to do just as well with the epilogue and any future stories! :D ♥

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