Date: 10/19/09 04:27 am Title: Delayed
Awww I love this story -huges it tight- And that would be kinda cool to be in the same dream as someone and be able to talk to them :3
So will Tom and Bill be useing dreams to talk aswell now?
Please update soon! :3
Date: 10/17/09 10:10 pm Title: Delayed
The intensity is killing me and I think I spent most of this chapter with my stomach clenched and my eyes welling. This is so breaking my heart but I love it. You're just amazing.
Author's Response: Oh gosh, thank you so much. *blushes* Writing this absolutely kills me sometimes, too, because I'm used to happier stories! But I think it'll be worth it in the end.
Date: 10/17/09 04:31 pm Title: Delayed
Goodness, this is heart wrenching ;_; I'm so upset for them. I was also afraid of what could happen if they went to sleep, but I'm glad they could be together in their dreams ♥ It's still so scary to think about, though...
I absolutely adore this =)
Author's Response: I'm upset for them too, to be honest. I would hate to see the twins dragged apart like this. Glad you liked despite the angst, though! ♥
Date: 10/17/09 04:04 pm Title: Departure
;_____; THAT WAS NOT REASSURING IN THE LEAST! *pouts and gets all sniffly*
But yeah, I won't stop reading, even if you totally break my heart and theirs.
Date: 10/17/09 07:01 am Title: Delayed
Omg this is amazing! I actually didn't plan on reading this but then I read a couple of reviews and just had to! And pheww... I'm glad I did. This is so intense, so unique and I haven't read anything like this before. I can't wait to see what'll happen and how they'll manage to get through this - I really hope their gonna be allright. Your writing makes the story even better and I really love it already. I'm hooked! ^^
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm so happy you gave it a shot, and that you ended up liking it. :D Thank you so much, and I hope you'll keep reading!
Date: 10/17/09 06:55 am Title: Delayed
I'm beginning to think I'm a bad influence on you - this is unusually angst ridden for you dearest ♥ I am continuing to enjoy it though. Looking forward to the next installment!!
Author's Response: You are an absolutely terrible influence and you know it. ♥ The angst will get better, though! Probably. Sometime.
Date: 10/17/09 02:55 am Title: Delayed
awww. i think i cried throughout this entire chapter....at least until I saw the names Benji and Joel and tought of Good Charlotte xD
anyways, your chapters always pull at my heartstrings and I LOVED the imagery that went with slurring.
Author's Response: And that is exactly where I took those names from. XD Cookie for you! I think The Veronicas were also in their graduating class, amusingly enough. Anyway, hee, glad you liked the slurring bit! I had fun writing that, for obvious reasons.
Date: 10/17/09 02:54 am Title: Delayed
Oh god, if I could go in and bring Bill back to Tom, there would be no hesitation on my part. Small consolation, but at least they can still mentally communicate with each other.
I'm just afraid of when everything is gone and both are separated even mentally. That will most likely kill them.
I am not looking forward to that happening. Not at all. >.<
Author's Response: The twins are dreading that kind of separation even now. :( No way to tell how long it'll last, after all. Glad you're reading along despite the angst, though! That'll comfort me when I get all sniffly over later chapters.
Date: 10/17/09 01:06 am Title: Delayed
The chapter is so full of drama and fluff, it's almost too much for my poor heart to take. *_* Everything you write is so spot on, emotional...it's inspiring, really. Beautiful chapter. I'm dying (almost literally) for more.
Author's Response: The combo of drama and fluff is exactly the reason I enjoy writing this so much, I think. :D Thank you so much, and there will certainly be more of this before too long.
Date: 10/17/09 01:03 am Title: Delayed
The poor twins... They're so tired and yet if they disconnect they could loose eachother. That is such a scary thought even for me who does not have a twin. I would be terrified. It is good they can still feel eachother eventhough they are not at their post. The emotion from both is so real. It makes me feel frustrated as well. I want the council to see that it is more important to find Bill and the ship sooner rather than later just the same as Tom. This story is so well put together and the flash backs with the twin's ralationship are so clear. I love how careful they are with one another and how they are so clearly the same and yet so different. Bill being all upset about his makeup and Tom telling him he's beautiful anyway, it was so cute. I do really hope they find their way back to eachother soon. Tom will kill himself trying to get to Bill if this keeps up.
Author's Response: It's a scary thought for me, too, and I'm not a twin either. They have such a close bond that losing it would be, basically, losing everything. :( Thank you so much, by the way; I'm glad you like the format! The angst would be too much even for me if I didn't get to write their sweet little flashbacks.
Date: 10/17/09 12:19 am Title: Delayed
Wow. I can't even articulate how much I love this! I'm sure I've said that before, but seriously. You have such a gift, and I love that you share it with us.
Author's Response: Thank you! You are so sweet. *blushing* I'm just glad people are still reading along, despite the mega-angst. I really do love this story.
Date: 10/17/09 12:15 am Title: Delayed
Love this, love this, love this. With each new part you up the stakes and wrench at my heartstrings that much more. Love Bill's incentive to Tom to control the slurring, of course. ;D This is so, so good! It continues to be everything I ever wanted out of that prompt and so much more. ♥
Author's Response: So glad you're still liking it! I know right now it's terribly angst-tastic, but the situation does improve before, um, getting even worse. I'm so happy to be doing your prompt even a tiny bit of justice. ♥ Thank you!
Date: 10/05/09 04:26 am Title: Transience
Wow i cried alot lolz my nose is stoped up. But it was worth it its a great story i cant wait till you update! :3
Date: 10/03/09 06:58 am Title: Transience
I can't help keeping thinking of the prompt and 'reunited for the first time in seven years'. It kind of terrifies me. I adore this though, very emotive ♥
Date: 09/30/09 03:02 pm Title: Transience
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this. I´m so much into science fiction and Bill and Tom....thank you.
It´s a very good way of showing how strong their bond is...even when seperated so much. And Simone is just perfect. :-)
Date: 09/28/09 04:22 am Title: Transience
im glad you updated however im starting to see the vegue clouds of writters block approaching and i hope they dont touch you. your plot is deffinatly interesting but the last turn makes me wonder if i will be seeing updates any time soon.
Author's Response: Funny you should say that, because I did hit writer's block here when I was first working on this. But I figured out how to get past it, so no worries. ;) Had to do something different from what I originally intended, but I think it works!
Date: 09/28/09 04:19 am Title: Transience
Oh god, this despair is KILLING ME and that's not even saying what it's doing to Tom. Oh god...if Bill's awareness totally disappears, Tom is just going to stop, period. He's gonna go insane.
Author's Response: Very true. Being so thoroughly without Bill even for brief periods of time is causing Tom a lot of pain. Fair warning, though: they haven't even seen the worst of it yet.
Date: 09/28/09 03:48 am Title: Transience
Oh dude! I can't wait until you update! This world is so awesome.
Author's Response: Hey, thank you! You should see another update pretty soon, so keep an eye out.
Date: 09/28/09 01:42 am Title: Transience
Holy crap, I think this is amazing. I can't even really express myself adequately to tell you how I feel about this. Amazing. PLEASE continue this as soon as possible.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm having a great time writing it and I have large portions finished already, so you should see another chapter soon.
Date: 09/28/09 01:40 am Title: Transience
OhGod. I'm in a really emotional mood tonight so this chapter pretty much made me cry bby.
I don't really understand the differences between realspace and out of real space things. Is Bill fading in and out of known reality (never to be seen again if the connection breaks)? Or is he just really really far away (but he's still like, rescue-able)?
Author's Response: I know the feeling. A fic a friend is writing does the same to me every time. And oh, right, realspace and jumpspace! Basically, yes, Bill is fading in and out of known reality. Jumpspace (as I've written it) is something like an alternate universe where time doesn't function the same way, hence covering long distances by jumping through it. Hope that helps! :)