Date: 08/04/10 01:21 am Title: Delayed
aaaaaaaaw. that dreams part really got me...god this is so emotional, tom's pain...i can feel it, your writing is so skillfully vivid and intense, ahhh *worshippp*
Date: 08/03/10 08:20 pm Title: Preparation 2
I love how their connection got even stronger. They're still stinging but trying to stay positive and look forward, because what else can they do? Lovely chapter. :D
Date: 08/03/10 05:25 pm Title: Preparation 2
I'm can't believe how good you are as an author, seriously, every chap are so awesome, interesting and well written! I'm sad that it's nearly the end, I enjoy following this fic so much! Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 08/03/10 04:27 pm Title: Preparation 2
Poor Jost and his boat. That's horrible, but he's awesome enough to understand, I guess.
I can't believe this is ending soon! It's been such a crazy journey that I'm sad to see it end.
Date: 08/03/10 03:29 pm Title: Preparation 2
I want to cry. This is a beautiful story and even though it isn't completed I already miss it D:
Date: 08/03/10 10:00 am Title: Transience
ah its so vivid. poor babies, poor simone. i love her spunk tho, it mustve rubbed off on the twins
Date: 08/03/10 08:46 am Title: Departure
oh...my...god. *breathe* you.......need to write a book. omg its so believable and smooth and everything you do is just...magic. im freaking out right now because you have me so in the moment with this story, all the incredible details and believable characterization...gorgeous, just beautiful
Date: 08/03/10 07:53 am Title: Preparation 2
oh my goodness, that was absolutely incredible! No word can express how much i adore this fic, it's beyond perfect :) their bond is so powerful, and the way your write them make it so much stronger. I honestly feel my heart beating or them when i read this. You're unbeliveably talented. Wow, this is so wonderful.
Date: 08/03/10 07:02 am Title: Preparation 2
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH ;__;
I CAN FEEL THE LOVE
FEEL IT
Author's Response: SO MUCH TWINLOVE. ♥ And much love to you for sticking with this story for so long! We're in the home stretch!
Date: 08/03/10 03:54 am Title: Preparation 2
This is so lovely. It still makes me ache to think about those seven years, but I'm so happy they're together now!
The flashback is wonderful -- I love that Tom has to wake Bill up and coax him into getting dressed. That Bill had to change his morning routine is so sad. "You weren't with me." Sniff.
I love how Bill teases Tom that he'd be kissing his clothes if Tom had brought him Dior! Hee. It makes me so happy that Tom can tell him what he's thinking at the same time, and "adoring" is an absolutely marvellous word to describe how Bill feels about Tom!
Tom's dirty talk is so hot. *_* I love that he wouldn't do it if Bill didn't ask, and that Bill enjoys it so much. Tom's too modest though, I think he's very good at it! "Just wait in bed for me" -- now there's a thought! I wonder if it turns Bill on so much also because it turns Tom on (and he can feel it), which it must, who wouldn't like a Bill in their bed just waiting for sex?!
I love that they would never have made it if Natalie hadn't come for them! Bill letting Tom come all over his mouth and chin is just evil, it's so hot -- that he turns Tom on so much right when he's coming, it's like they have no other choice than a second round. *fans self*
I'm glad Natalie is so formal at first because that means she says "your Anchor" to Bill and it's lovely! Bill must enjoy it too. Bill musing that they're like celebrities made me think that maybe now they could form a rock band... *g* Maybe not in this universe, but they could still travel in space together, even if not as a Navigator and Anchor!
Aww, I really liked the moment when Alexei speaks his endearment to Grigori out loud, and Bill and Tom recognise it, both as an endearment and as a reflection of their own relationship. "Tomi" is the perfect endearment. It makes me so happy that they're together again!
Author's Response: Gah, just writing it as seven years nearly killed me. Poor babies. You have no idea how relieved I am that they're back together now. I swear, some of Tom's angst sprang from my own, when I had to separate the twins.
I'm not sure which I enjoyed writing more in this chapter, the teasing or the sex/dirty talk. Gotta admit, though, I like it when Tom has a chance to use that filthy mouth. Like a lot of what they do in this fic, it definitely does turn Bill on so much because it arouses Tom. Also, it's a good way for him to figure out what Tom would like to try in bed in the future, since Tom opens up and starts thinking and talking about his favorite fantasies. ^_~
Glad you picked up on Bill's comment about their being celebrities! That was a nod to the way they are in real life, obviously. :P We'll see what happens... anyway, thank you so much for the lovely review, and I'm thrilled that they're together again, too! ♥
Date: 08/03/10 03:23 am Title: Preparation 2
When I woke up this morning, I thought 'I hope Kishmet has updated one of her stories'...and you had! This was a lovely chapter...the twin bond is just so endearing in this story, so strong and sweet. And I'm glad to see they have a plan to get everyone home. I'll be sad to see this story end, but it's coming to such a lovely happy ending, that I can't be TOO sad.
Author's Response: Haha, I have good timing. No, actually, I usually reach a point where I realize 'hey, I haven't updated anything in awhile...' and last night was definitely that! Anyway. I'll be sad to end this story, too, but you hit the nail on the head: our boys will be together and happy, so it won't be too painful. Thank you so much, and I'm glad you're still enjoying it!
Date: 08/03/10 02:15 am Title: Preparation 2
Gah! *combusts with happiness*
That's so sad about Jost's ship though :/
Author's Response: Hee! And yeah, I feel bad for doing that to poor Jost. :( I'll try to make it up to him before the end!
Date: 07/18/10 10:35 pm Title: Juxtaposition
God, I think that this was the most erothic and beautiful smut chapter I've read in a long time...
Date: 07/18/10 12:58 pm Title: Juxtaposition
*hugs everything within reach* This is just GORGEOUS.
Date: 07/15/10 07:52 pm Title: Juxtaposition
oh wow i can't tell you how happy i was to see this had been updated! I really adore this fic, it's stunningly beautifu. the emotions you generate through your characters are SO powerful. Their connection is so potent, shocking almost but nonetheless gorgeous. I'm definitely looking forward to the next part ^^
Date: 07/15/10 07:00 pm Title: Juxtaposition
*melts*
That was fantastic ♥
Date: 07/15/10 02:24 pm Title: Juxtaposition
Omg, the previous chapter completely broke me -- I'm all ;_; about it still. Seven years! I thought Tom's three months were bad, I thought it was almost unbearable, and then the shock of learning that Bill spent seven years without Tom! And now he's seven years older than Tom, which bothers me inexplicably.
Anyway, this chapter made me feel a lot better. (Even though my heart is still broken. Sniff.) I love how they communicate both by speaking and telepathically. I love the echo of their first time -- the differences and similarities are fascinating.
I love how you describe Bill! "Both pliant and demanding" is just marvellous, and Bill craving domination. *_* It's perfect -- especially because it's a side of him that he won't let others see, only Tom! Oh and I so approve of comparing Bill to a cat. The image of him having just come home, needy and restless, not sure what to focus on and arching up against Tom is really vivid.
Saying that the other is gorgeous at the same time made me smile. Lovely! And they are so, so gorgeous. Tom's muscles and Bill's nipples. Mmmm. You've chosen some quality details here! *g*
The feedback loop between them is wonderful, and you write it amazingly -- especially in the bit where Tom sucks nipple and is turned on by how acutely Bill feels it, and rubs against the sheets which turns Bill on even more... it's just so hot!
I love how full of emotions present!Tom and Bill are, and how well Tom knows his Bill! He's surprised that Bill seems so docile, yet catches Bill's inner monologue because they're so close -- I love that Bill keeps it in, by the way, and that his thoughts betray him still! He can read Bill's expression, too, something a telepathic bond doesn't help him with: "anxiety, as though he worried Tom couldn't or wouldn't do what he was asking" -- aww! Poor Bill. Was he really worried that Tom wouldn't do it? When would Tom not do something Bill asks?
I love how surprised they both are, and how it reminds them of their first time. It's lovely how stunned they're then, too, not sure if it's good or bad or just strange at first. They're so deliciously young in the flashback, I'd love to know more about that time: obviously they were together and doing things until then, just not this. Now I want to go back and read all the flashbacks, especially my favourite, the one about kisses... *g*
The ending is absolutely marvellous! Bill's "Stay" in both of them, and especially the moment when they're one. "Tom was Bill and Bill was Tom" -- perfect. *sighs happily* This is such a wonderful universe because that can happen! I'm so glad you wrote it.
Date: 07/14/10 02:19 pm Title: Juxtaposition
So so beautiful, love this story more than words can describe.
Date: 07/14/10 01:32 pm Title: Juxtaposition
I almost cried, that was so beautiful. So amazing ;_;
Date: 07/14/10 01:07 pm Title: Juxtaposition
I was over excited waiting for phantomrider (I love that fic so much that I seriously lost count of times I've read both parts) but this was a more than enought suprise xD smut is never enough, the whole chapter was so hot, these two deserved it.
I will miss this fic but it's so refreshing to see them together again :) and Tom sounds HOT.