Date: 09/14/09 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Instead of writing the story exactly like the movie, just switching up the characters...I think you should take the plot-line and make the conversations your own and add a little diversity to the plot. I love this movie, but I'd really like to see you make this story something more..inspired-like than an almost exact copy of the movie.
Date: 09/13/09 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
i'm pretty sure i've seen a movie with the same plot. and there was keanu reeves in it. i totally adore him))
Date: 09/13/09 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! But i don't think I can imagine Bill, Tom and Andreas as 50 years old XD. But is this really the end?
Date: 09/13/09 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
loved it, I wish for more. XOXOXOXOXO
Date: 09/13/09 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
a perfectly manicured eyebrow. How can an eyebrow be manicured ?
Anyway I like it
I'm gonna trck that story
Date: 09/13/09 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW!
I don't know if I should laugh at the whole dinner fiasco or cry at how it ended!
But an interesting story, nonetheless, even if I was a bit confused at first as to what was happening.
Date: 09/13/09 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well this was pretty cute. But is this really the end? Because if so... that was kind of a let down, leaving us with no idea what happened really...