Date: 10/24/09 07:52 am Title: Chapter 8
So I'm a 99% twincester, and I hate Het, but I started reading this story cuz I'm into incest (yeah, i'm kinky like that), and it had a dash of the twins also, so yeah, I thought why not try Gustav/Franzi for once?
I actually read this when u first wrote it a few months ago now and I'm only reviewing it now.
I rem I liked the way you weaved the complixity and mystery of what happend to Franzi into the plot for so long, kept the reader guessing, instead of just telling what happened from the start. It made the story more interesting to keep reading to find out the truth. I rem I thought the love scenes were ok, but Het in general (in fanfic) turns me off a bit. Tho I rem I found the bathroom scene to be quite touching. I rem I loved when Bill would poke his nose into the plot and like picked out clothes for Franz to wear -cute plot addition that made it seem more realistic.
So yeah, not my fav story because its out of my genre-comfort-range, but I applaude you on making it interesting enough for me to read to the very end. Which makes this (probably, based on my memory right now) the first and only Het I've read from start to finish on this site! lol. So good job. :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I'm glad I made you read Het. I too am agaisnt it if it's not well written and if the characters are not beliavable (slash has more of a wiggle room with me on those points).rnrnI am also glad you liked it from start to finish! That means i made it interesting enough :P
Date: 10/04/09 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 8
Thank you. I really liked this story from beginning to end!
Author's Response: i'm very glad to hear that. It was a lovely story to write ;)
Date: 09/28/09 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 7
its good... real good
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 09/28/09 10:02 am Title: Chapter 7
I feel so bad
for all of them
Author's Response: It's gonna get better. They'll pull each other through.
Date: 09/28/09 08:04 am Title: Chapter 7
-skvishes- well u did a good job. it was amazing as always and i totally did NOT expect her story o.o xxAli
Author's Response: then that means i did real good, cause i wasn't expecting anyone to expect it :D
Date: 09/25/09 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh fuck. I think I'm starting to get the picture, and it's...not so good.
I must say that I terribly like this story, it's got the right amounts of everything and it should totally be featured.
Author's Response: thank you for thinking so :)
Date: 09/25/09 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 6
WOW O_O
Fucking AMAZING!!!
Author's Response: thank you :D
Date: 09/25/09 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 6
awwwwww omg. -squishes- Sorry I didn't review the last chapter. I didn't realize it had updated. o.o But I'm reviewing now. This story is still amazing. I luv it! xxAli
Author's Response: thank you very much :)
Date: 09/21/09 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow
this is inlike anything Ive ever read
and its beautiful
perfect
I need more
Really...Im amazed
Author's Response: thank you very much for thinking so :)
Date: 09/21/09 06:16 am Title: Chapter 5
O_O
WOW
MORE
Author's Response: okay, thank you :)
Date: 09/19/09 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
ok. i didnt like the brevity of the chapter, because im loving the feel of this story. what you said in your chapter end notes about it being familiar and easy(obviously not trivial, its a great story), totally shows in the writing and i cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: thank you very much :)
Date: 09/19/09 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ooh. So kawaii. I love this story so as usual I was glad to see that it updated. -hugglesthemboth- I think this is progressing quite nicely. Can't wait for what happens next! xxAli
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm taking it at a moderate pace :)
Date: 09/16/09 08:48 am Title: Chapter 3
I wasn't sure about this at first. Normally a fic would need to be a Bill/Tom main, to interest me.
But I'm glad I decided to read it. So far I find it very endearing and tender, and it's extrememly well written.
Author's Response: thank you very much for thinking so :)
Date: 09/16/09 07:38 am Title: Chapter 3
Aw. Poor Gusti. -petshim- You'll know what's going on when the time's right. -nods- :D Can't wait for more. I was glad to wake up and see an update. Made me very happy! -huggles- xxAli
Author's Response: thank you very much. :)
Date: 09/16/09 06:35 am Title: Chapter 3
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 09/16/09 06:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Ok, first things first, I must say that this story is TOTALLY out of my comfort zone in this site.
Still, I am rapt by the way you describe things, and the atmosphere in this fic. I must agree with Anony when she thanked you for bringing good het in this site, and indeed this is not getting as many reviews as it should, probably because people freak out at the thought of incest out of Bill and Tom.
Anyway, I really hope you keep this coming, because I love it. And I'm so totally hating the bastard who hurt her, btw.
Author's Response: oh, well thank you very much. A lot of HP fandom has kind of got me imune to incest in any shape and form (the Weasleys are 6 brothers and a sister, after all, and I won't even start talking about the Malfoys). But I know how touchy this subject is and I'm not forcing people to read it if they don't like it.
Date: 09/14/09 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
-sniffle- I feel her pain :( -sniffle- Gustav, god, he is going to be a wreak. To know that she was pregnant, that someone hurt her, caused her to loos the baby.. He feels bad now, he is going to be ten times worse when he finds out. He is going to want to kill whoever it was .. hopefully the others will be there to support him as well as Franziska. They both will all the support they can get. Update soon :)
Author's Response: it's more complicated than you think, actually. That's how I tend to do things-in an unbelievably complicated ay. You'll have to wait and see.rnBut they'll get their support and thing will turn out for the best.
Date: 09/14/09 10:11 am Title: Chapter 2
AWwww omg. Poor girl...poor boy. -petsgusti- At least she has him. -nods- I was really glad to see you updated this! It made me having to be up this early a little better! :D xxAli
Author's Response: I'm so sorry for her, but it'll get better.
Date: 09/13/09 02:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh well i'm really glad you're doing a multi-chapter fic with them! i like this! -squishes you- Thanks for providing good het to this site! It's about time! :D xxAli
Author's Response: thank you for liking it :D