Date: 09/24/09 03:32 am Title: Chapter 4
I'd just like to say that I absolutely love this story, and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! glad you like it lol ^_^ <333 more soon!
Date: 09/24/09 03:17 am Title: Chapter 4
Sooooo sweet! Oh, god it was so adorable and that part when Bill pulled out his bunny, I awwwed aloud.
*sigh* you're doing a great job!
And I'm sorry about your week being not so great, at least it's not reflected in your writing! I wish I could be so fortunate; I was so upset the other day, I wrote my first non-con fic and turned a humorous romance inter angst/ hurt - comfort central.
So you're amazing ^_^
Author's Response: oh my god *hugs* you just made my night. I was so worried this was a crap chapter and everyone would be like "ew no more reading, you FAILED." xD gahhh YOU are amazing. I'm so happy you liked it ^_^ <3 hopefully next chapter won't fail miserably, lol x)
Date: 09/23/09 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aww. I'd really like to read more of this and hope you'll continue the story
Author's Response: Thank you! New chapter very soon<3
Date: 09/22/09 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
awwwwwwwww... Bill is so adorable!!!!!
Author's Response: hehe thankyouuu ^_^
Date: 09/22/09 01:42 am Title: Chapter 3
Awwww bill is to cute for his own good lol
So like they should so kiss :]
Author's Response: LOL thank you ^_^ ahaha maybe they will, maybe they won't ;)
Date: 09/22/09 12:57 am Title: Chapter 3
awww hes so confused..
Author's Response: lol yep, poor boy x) thanks for reviewing/reading!
Date: 09/22/09 12:48 am Title: Chapter 3
How cute! Bill's innocence is charming. ^_^
Author's Response: thank you! haha i'm glad he's coming off the way i intended :)
Date: 09/22/09 12:26 am Title: Chapter 3
HAHAH!!! More please??!
I really like how you make Bill's character- it makes me giggle CONSTANTLY. And Tom's cute too. xD
Author's Response: more soon! and thanks so much ^_^ i tried to make bill cute haha. hope it's working x)
Date: 09/21/09 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love it hahah :)
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^
Date: 09/21/09 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
hahahah oh Bill. *ruffles his hair* so cute.
Author's Response: ahaha xD i want my own little innocent bill ^_^ thanks for reading!
Date: 09/21/09 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
Whoa, that last line. Jaw. Dropper.
Don't lose inspiration, keep going! *pumps fist*
You know, reading this, I have to wonder what Bill's mental age is and if it would totally inappropriate for him to have a certain talk with Tom or his mom. Not THE talk, but, you know, that talk parents give their kids around nine or so explaining how boys like girls or how boys like boys.
But, this was a good chapter. It started off strongly. ^_^
Author's Response: Ahahaha aw thank you ^_^ i love your reviews lol they always get me thinking xD i think tom may TRY to explain soon...we'll see ;) or maybe tom will just go with it, eh? Hahaha. Not too sure just yet x)
Date: 09/21/09 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
hehe
Hope for the new chapter soon
Author's Response: More soon! :)
Date: 09/21/09 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
Innocently adorable.
=]
Author's Response: thankyooou ^_^
Date: 09/21/09 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is really cute! *tracking* I like it. Bill's so adorable, and Tom is just... lol! Tom is just Tom. xD It's amusing, watching him try to avoid awkward situations, only to end up in a situation more awkward than the one he was trying to avoid. I can only imagine what'll happen next. xD
Author's Response: Thanks! lol Tom's a failure, I love putting him in awwkard situations because picturing it happening in real life is just too amusing xD ah yes, we will see what happens next.... ;)
Date: 09/21/09 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
cute!! i just love bill. I would like to learn more about whats wrong with bill too, so as tom learns, i hope he'll share with us. so i think district 9 would horrify bill, its a seriously disturbing movie--though good. i hope your inspiration comes back because i like this story! looking forward to more! =)
Author's Response: Haha thanks :) the summary pretty much sums up what he's got. I'm not really sure yet if i'll go deeper into it, but i may. We'll see xD and yeah District 9 is quite disturbing, but Bill's distracted ;) hahaha xD thanks for reading! ^_^
Date: 09/18/09 04:27 am Title: Chapter 2
I read this before cuz I'm cool like that I get special treatment & are able to read these before they are posted so you know I love it anyways it is nice to be friends with an awesome author who lets me read it before you post it lol. Oh & you are cool too HAHA! ;) but really you are & you know I love you. I am really anxious to read the next chapter though since I haven't read that one yet.
Date: 09/17/09 03:18 am Title: Chapter 2
I like bill, he's cute!!