Date: 09/29/09 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
I decided to review in this last chap after I read them all... I really like stories that have special!Bill in them. I like the idea of an uber innocent and slightly clueless Bill. Don't worry hun, this chapter (and previous ones) don't fail :)
Author's Response: I LOVE YOU. <3
Date: 09/29/09 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aww how adorable. Bill has a crush on Tomi. This story makes me giggle haha. Love it :)
Author's Response: :D thank yooou!
Date: 09/29/09 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awe! This chapter is adorable and I love that Bill is maturing, mentally and emotionally :D
Author's Response: lol tytyty<333
Date: 09/29/09 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...cute story
Author's Response: thank you ^_^ <3
Date: 09/29/09 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
Cute! You're Bill reminds me of the character I had to play in 'Dancing at Lughnasa.' It's this Irish play about these five sisters, and Rose, my role, was slightly handicapped. She was exactly like Bill, in she just acted a lot like a child. Her world was black and white- easily amused. She had a fling with this guy though, and was convinced he loved her. Sadly he was a douche who just used her. She was cool.
The funny thing was hearing the director's comments, 'all right now- slow... but not tooo much' I think even worse was the fact that my dad didn't even realise my character had a handicap.... O.o`
Alrighty... sorry for random story, I'm good at those, and it popped in my head. I want the next chapter like NOW. K... :D
Author's Response: Haha that's awesome lol, i totally don't mind the random story! I wish everyone would leave me one XD! More soon!
Date: 09/29/09 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
awe.:)))).
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Date: 09/29/09 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
I lovve it! *squeal* I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Oh, poor Bill and Tom! They both are trying to hide their feelings, afraid to freak out the other, when in truth, they like each other! *facepalm* Lol!
Hope things work out for them! Can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: Haha, I know! Silly boys xD haha thanks so much! More soon!
Date: 09/29/09 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love this story and I like the idea you had for the end, 'having Tom around is helping him learn more common sense', :) can't wait for another update ^^
Author's Response: Thanks so much! More soon!
Date: 09/29/09 11:29 am Title: Chapter 5
That was a good chapter.
Cant wait for the next one.
And, um, I was wondering....do you think you can do a story where either Tom or Bill are in a wheelchair?
Author's Response: Thanks :) and i think that might be a bit hard to do since i'm actually a new writer and i'm not too sure how i'd portray a fic like that, but maybe i could try? I'll see once i'm done with this one. ;) <3
Date: 09/29/09 10:43 am Title: Chapter 5
This chapter doesn't fail..........it's just so quick, you know?
Understandably, it's been a couple of months but it would've been interesting to see Bill's mental progrssion a bit more indepthly because his maturity seems to have risen from that of a five or six year old to that of prepubescent boy, not quite understanding the physical properties of being in love with or physically attracted to someone.
The whole Tom turning him 'normal' is also an interesting concept and while it's self explanatory, I feel like you should elaborate a little more on it.
All in all, it was a good chapter and it certainly didn't fail! but, it just seemed a bit vauge because of the two months inbetween.
^_^ can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you :) in the next chapter, you'll see that Bill hasn't progressed as much as it may seem. He's simply learned to be able to tell when certain things are better left unsaid, yknow, common things and how to handle them sort of. Since he's feeling stressed throughout most of the chapter, that's why he's not all giggly and cute like he usually is xD more soooon.
Date: 09/29/09 09:06 am Title: Chapter 5
Aww! This story is just too adorable and cute, I can't help it :). Even if I last time said that I don't know, I think I do. You're doing good job and it's not bothering me. I can't be bothered of something this cute and mutual. Don't worry, I don't think the next chapter will fail.
Author's Response: Aw yay thank you! Glad you're enjoying it<333
Date: 09/26/09 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
This story is simply delicious! I love it! Bill is so adorable it's sickening. I can't wait to read more :)
--Mona
Author's Response: Ahaha thank you <333 ^_^
Date: 09/25/09 01:22 am Title: Chapter 4
OMG this is so fucking adorable! ^_^ I love it! lol really, though, great plot and everything.
definitely 10/10 xD
-Honesty :P
Author's Response: UM I LOVE YOU. LOL. THANK YOU. ^_^
Date: 09/25/09 01:12 am Title: Chapter 4
so cute!! i love tom nuzzling into bill's neck. super cute!! i look forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank yooou ^_^
Date: 09/24/09 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aw! Bill's innocence is WAY TOO CUTE!! AW!!!
Author's Response: LOL thank you <333 ^_^
Date: 09/24/09 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
Fail? No, definitely not! That was so cute and sweet! I'm relieved that Tom didn't just cave and let Bill kiss him, and that he's still taking things slowly. It kept things very consistent, and I really appreciate that, since most peoplewould just rush things. I absolutely adore this story, and I can't say that enough! Can't wait to read more, darling!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah I'm trying not to rush it, especially since in the fic it's only their second day of meeting and that would've been totally unrealistic haha xD i wanna keep it sweet. I may fast forward a few weeks but don't worry, I still won't rush it ;) more soon! <333
Date: 09/24/09 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
You ok?
It wasnt a fail. I thought it was sweet.
Author's Response: I'm alright, tough week is all lol x) thanks for asking <3 and i'm glad you think so! ^_^
Date: 09/24/09 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awww it was adorable ^_^ Bill kinda reminds me of how I have him in one of my unposted fics, too adorable! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^ you should post it! I love sweet, adorable innocent Bill x) more soon!
Date: 09/24/09 08:21 am Title: Chapter 4
You know, I've had some problems with your fic. I've been struggling how to feel about this, because sometimes it scares me a little when I see them being attracted to each other and Bill being mentally so much behind his physical age. It's very sensitive topic and it could have gone very wrong...
...but it didn't. God, this is so freakin adorable that I just smile through every chapter I read. So, so sweet :). I still have some issues sometimes, but I guess because no-one is taking advantage of each other here, than it's okay. Anyways, I hink you should be careful for not forgetting Bill's state, but so far you're doing nice job. It looks like Bill is first time in his life experimenting his emotions of love and sexuality. Tom needs to be very mature and so far he has been. Also I find it very sweet how he can't deny his feelings. None of us can eventually.
I can't help loving this fic in a way it makes me smile and feel good every time. There is some sweet innocence I rarely find these days and personally I only write more or less twisted and corruptede, unhealthy angst, so... You make me smile every time :)
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reviewing :) I've been trying really hard to keep it appropriate and as real as i possibly can, but then agai. It IS fiction so if it becomes a bit strange at times, do forgive me. I can assure you that Bill will never be taken advantage of, though. That would break my heart just to write, lol. I don't intend to offend with this fic and I certainly hope it doesn't come across as mocking, or putting anyone with a disability down. It's absolutely not the case. The point is to try and show that everyone has feelings, everyone can love and bernloved. :) so i hope you never have a problem with it, or dislike it and if it does, i apologize. But thanks so much for saying you like it, and that it makes you smile because that's really what i wanted out of this; to warm peoples' hearts and make them smile ^_^
Date: 09/24/09 06:54 am Title: Chapter 4
awe.:).
Author's Response: ^_^ <3