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Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/13/09 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 2: I'm Being Nice So That You Don't Tattle On Me

psht... this is funny! update!

Author's Response: hahaha. i'm glad that you find it funny ^^ and the next chapter will be up soon ^_^

Reviewer: lollipopcorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/09 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 2: I'm Being Nice So That You Don't Tattle On Me

Wheee! I want more lovin'! :P Good chapter :D Btw, where are you staying now?

Author's Response: lol. you'll get more soon, i promise xD i'm glad you liked the chapter, and oh, i'm still at home. mum's still making a fuss, but i'm making an even bigger fuss so she's leaving me alone xD

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/09 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 2: I'm Being Nice So That You Don't Tattle On Me

Awww. :) You did a good job with the light feeling in this chapter. :) However the topics that were talked about were a bit heavy, but I still don't know where you're going with this story so I won't judge yet. :) I'm glad that Tom seems like a pretty sensible person, who takes his responsabilities... and since he's being ditched on, *wink wink* he won't really mind having BIll's kid! *I'M SO EXCITEEED*!!! Please go on! I loved the quick update!

Author's Response: WOOT. yay for light feelings xD nah, it's alright to judge, i'm kinda the type of person that write all of these heavy elements in with light elements, and i don't think that's changed in this fic xD i'll try not to lay on the serious stuff/angst for as long as I can, but most of the chapters are already pre-written SO, some things I can't change xd

and yea, Tom's sensible...kinda silly/slow at times, but he understand responsibilies for the most part xD

Reviewer: ablazed Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/09 07:56 am Title: Chapter 2: I'm Being Nice So That You Don't Tattle On Me

:DDD ohmygooooood!!!!! That was hilarious!!!! :PP seriously that was soooo funny...! :'') I haven't laughed this hard in ages! :P I really loved this chapter and I'm starting to fall more and more for Tom's character! b29;____b29; Loving it! Please update again asap!!^^

Author's Response: haha i'm glad that you found it to be hilarious ^_^ i like fun-natured fics more than my sad ones, so it's a relief to be posting this now xD and yay for falling for Tom's character....just remember not to fall too hard, cuz he CAN be an ass at times *nodnod* xD

Reviewer: han Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/09 07:31 am Title: Chapter 2: I'm Being Nice So That You Don't Tattle On Me

i'm LOVING IT!!
the plot seems really really appealing

Author's Response: WOOT. I'm glad that you're loving it and that the plot is appealing ^_^

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/13/09 06:39 am Title: Chapter 2: I'm Being Nice So That You Don't Tattle On Me

Hah! Fucking through a monsoon :D.

You reached that light feeling here well, not angsty at all. I wonder what's coming up next. Jewelries, right? Interesting. No wonder Bill had a huge diamond ring... and it was Andi's? They are so messing around :D.

Tom's character feels like a very strong character. It's easy to see him as a leaders role here because of that. Bill is interesting case. I could so relate to him for not not standing up for himself. They have almost opposite characters and I think it'll be interesting in a future.

Well, waiting for a next chapter again :)

Author's Response: lol. hahah yep. I HAD to slip that in xD

and I'm glad the light feeling worked out and such. and yea, I wanted Tom to be a different sort of wealthy xD and yea, Bill's ring is amazing...well Andi's ring actually xD poor poor Bill xD

and Tom is....he definitely understands responsibilities and covering his ass, and I mean, he has his faults which will come to light later on, but *shrugs* for now we can enjoy his character xD

and I'm glad that you can relate to Bill's character, and see the opposite characteristic between the two of them, because that'll come to play in the second half of this story *nodnod*

Reviewer: broken2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/09 06:25 am Title: Chapter 2: I'm Being Nice So That You Don't Tattle On Me

OMG! this is so funny! I cant wait til next caphter!

Author's Response: haha. i'm glad you found this to be funny ^^ next chappie should be up soon.

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/13/09 05:05 am Title: Chapter 2: I'm Being Nice So That You Don't Tattle On Me

Fucking through the Monsoon!

Gah, I love you. <333333 I've only loved that line since hearing Tom say it, lol.

And Bill's billisms are making me laugh SO HARD, plus Tom's sister is a riot.

But DAMN, Tom's rather crafty, ain't he? AND HE'S MARRYING ANDY, WHO IS POSSIBLY EVEN CHEATING ON HIM TOO? :P

Sorry, I tend to not trust people like that, lol. But good for him if he's ditched Tom for a real good reason.

TOM'S CHEATING ASS, omg, I can't believe he's just...ugh and Bill still blushes when he looks at him. It's like, he WANTS to forget the fucking but yet Tom keeps talking about how good it actually was, that I'm SURE Bill's got little flashes of it again and again and again.

So much for Bill disappearing out of his life, because I have a feeling *coughbannercough* that there is soon going to be a reason for Tom to stick around for a bit  longer.



Author's Response: lol. hahahhaa. dude, when I was editing this chapter, that came to mind and I HAD to add it in. I DIED when I heard Tom say that for the first time too xD

and yea, Bill's billisms are.....perfect xD and yes, Tom's sister is definitely a riot. I had to put in some funny/normal characters xD

and yea, Tom's crafty...or well, he just doesn't want Andi to bitch him out...he really does love him...for now xD

and yea, don't trust Andi...he's psycho xD

and Tom's only cheated ONCE...so he's ok...kinda xD

and hahaha yea, Bill is so cute. he can't forget his first time OR the person his first time was with xD and yea, Bill's gonna have more flashes in the next chapter *nodnod*

AND yea....that banner....so gives a lot away xD

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/09 03:31 am Title: Chapter 2: I'm Being Nice So That You Don't Tattle On Me

...You referred to Bill as Bill Trumper when he told Tom his name, FYI. And 2 seconds later it was Kaulitz XD

I'm glad you posted! I would totally comment more (especially on the fact that Tom ALWAYS seems to be rich in your stories lol) but it's time for breakfast. toodles!

Author's Response: thanks, I fixed that. i knew there was something amiss BUT i twas too lazy to figure it out xD

anyways, i'm glad you were happy I posted.

as for the rich thing, *shrugs* it kinda just happens that way. I have other stories I'm working on (that haven't been posted) where they're equally as rich, OR Bill's the rich one. IT kinda all just depends on which character is which....like I wouldn't be able to have Bill act certain ways if he was loaded, and Tom has to be rich in certain roles, or his haughty attitude will seem misplaced lol.

Reviewer: Cinematics Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/09 02:47 am Title: Chapter 2: I'm Being Nice So That You Don't Tattle On Me

:3 Well worth the wait, my dear. You better update this soon or Dresden's going to pop out of me and kick your ass.

Loovveee you. ;flail;

Author's Response: WOOT....there was no real wait, i swear it! *shifty eyes* and I will. I'm editing the next chapter in a couple minutes....like after i respond to the reviews xD and i LOVEEEE you too *giggles xD

Reviewer: freedom-reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/09 01:28 am Title: Chapter 2: I'm Being Nice So That You Don't Tattle On Me

Want MORE :P

Author's Response: lol. there is more??? xD

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/09 01:19 am Title: Chapter 2: I'm Being Nice So That You Don't Tattle On Me

*giggles* Gosh you really had me in a giggle fit... I love it lol AND *brainfart* IDk..

 well I think I will leave you with one smile.

 

:'D



Author's Response: hahaha. YAY for gigglefits xD and brainfarts xD but i LOVE the one smiley you left me ^_^

Reviewer: SapphireVampire Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/09 01:08 am Title: Chapter 2: I'm Being Nice So That You Don't Tattle On Me

You should have them say 'Snapcracklemitchandpop' instead. X3 I like this alot....especially cus Bushido's a jerk that's basically gonna get told off (again) :P Tom seems so funny! Serious then not really serious all at once. X3 love it. I can't wait for the next chapter! ^^v

Author's Response: lol. hahah. WELL, the sayings are actually things my friends and I say, which is why it's just 'snapcracklepop' and Tom's reaction to it was MOST DEFINITELY my brother's reaction to hearing me say it for the first time...he thought i was high xD and i'm glad that you like it ^^ Bu is....i hate making him a jerk since i love him so much, BUT it had to be done xD and Tom is....interesting xD he had is faults and his good parts, but naturally he's just a fun person to be around xD

Reviewer: lollipopcorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/09 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 1: I'm Gonna Ignore This and Pretend It Never Happened.

Lol I knew you'd get on me about that. Ummm, it'll happen eventually lol. Once I get in the mood to write and after my college applications are over lol

Author's Response: lol. hahahah. you know me so well xD and alright. i'll be here waiting......as usual xD

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/12/09 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: I'm Gonna Ignore This and Pretend It Never Happened.

Oh my! This is freakin' delicious! In a twisted way, of course. Impressive start, really... You really managed to get this whole situation so confusing and I can just relate to Shitfuckdamn-feeling :D. And it's been a while since I last time read some mpreg, so I'll wait for it.

Interesting, I have to say. Needless to say that I just loved Tom here? :D

Author's Response: hahah. WOOT for being delicious in a twisted way xD i'm glad you liked the start. and yea, i like confusion and having people go 'wtf?' because i'm like that all the time. just a whirlwind of 5000 things going on at once xD and WOOT yay for mpreg. this is gonna be an interesting journey xD

and hahah YAY for loving Tom...there's gonna be an interesting love-hate relationship with Tom later on, because he's kind of a conflicting character, ^^

but OH YEA....Needles is just about finished. I'm going back and forth btwn responding to reviews and editing stuff xD

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/12/09 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1: I'm Gonna Ignore This and Pretend It Never Happened.

i like it.... this is really interesting! Update more soon, please!

Author's Response: yay for you liking it then ^^ i'm glad i could make it interesting ^^ and I'll definitely update ^_^

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/09 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 1: I'm Gonna Ignore This and Pretend It Never Happened.

O_o whoa, I like Tom already. :) When I first read the title, I thought it was Bill denying he was preg or something, I had to gasp. :o I'm SO SO SO excited there's a new mpreg to read!!! I always love some, especially good some. ;) I feel this is going to be good! :) Please post soon. *_*

Author's Response: Lol. YAY for liking Tom...kinda...xD he's a good person....he's just gonna be stupid later one xD and awwww, i'm sorry the title misinterpreted what the story's about, nah, Bill's gonna deny it at first...like he does everything else that happens out of his control xD But I;m glad that you're excited and I hope that I can keep this in the 'good mpreg' category xD

Reviewer: alekaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/09 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1: I'm Gonna Ignore This and Pretend It Never Happened.

:) OMG!! YOU'RE ALWAYS DOING THIS TO ME I THINK THERE'S NO STORY OF YOU THAT I DON'T READ!! BUT I LOVED IT!!!

Author's Response: *blushes* It makes me SOOOO happy to know that you read all of my stories and that you LOVE this too ^_^

Reviewer: han Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/09 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1: I'm Gonna Ignore This and Pretend It Never Happened.

i want more!!!;)

Author's Response: lol. well i want to give you more ^^

Reviewer: tokioqueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/09 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: I'm Gonna Ignore This and Pretend It Never Happened.

Oh love the way Tom comes to the rescue! more please!

Author's Response: lol. haha i'm glad you love that part ^^. And yes I'll give more tonight ^^ I already have the chapters written, I'm just tryna give people enough time to read this chappie ^^

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