Date: 09/11/09 06:28 am Title: The Skin Game
Awww!!! You know what? This was even better than the train-fic. So entertaining. Some fics are kind of hard to follow or reader needs to use imagination to connect things, but here it was so easy, like watching an entertaining tv-show. Very talented writing.
And hotness.... Yay! I have to say that I don't find Mr.Bodyguard attractive at all, he just isn't my type, but 3some is always VERY nice thing. There should be more 3some stories here. You did it well. Very exciting to think about Bill's exhibionism, the way he WANTS someone to watch as he fucks with Tom. HOT!
And of course; twins belong together. Thank you for making that very clear. I would have been upset, if Bill prefers Mr.Bodyguard over Tom :).
And congratulations on being featured!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 09/11/09 05:46 am Title: The Skin Game
I don't have anything much more constructive to say than 'awwww', lol. This was yummy and still adorable, very cute follow-up.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 09/11/09 01:33 am Title: The Skin Game
the handful line was so corny, it was painful))
i loved it=)
Author's Response: Haha...I don't know why I picture Bill being cheesy like that in bed, but I totally do. Oh, well.
Date: 09/11/09 12:13 am Title: The Skin Game
I love that! Hottie McBodyguard? Genius nickname.
And the story was amazing, too. ;D
Author's Response: Yeah, I keep calling him that, because I'm a giant loser. Glad you liked it!