Date: 11/22/09 10:06 pm Title: 01
well I forgot what it actually means, you can look it up though, but I used it cause I just like he word*laughs*
and believe me, I don't have good English if that was what you were implying..!
Author's Response: My first language isn't English! That's why I have my friend Tosha listed as a co-writer. Because she helps out with the English, since she's Canadian. Haha.
Date: 11/21/09 07:53 pm Title: 04
YAY YOU UPDATED!!!
I missed this so much!!
Oh poor Tomi D=
I hope he can sort this shit out for his baby bro
Lovin' the story!
Update soon please :D
xx
Author's Response: Did it really take me that long? Haha, sorry. Maybe he gets in more shit? I don't actually know, since I make it up as I go. This is why I take so long. I hope this won't take as long. (:
Date: 11/20/09 08:05 pm Title: 01
okay, good!
and fantastical.. means fantastical!
Author's Response: Is it like fantastic? I thought I was pretty good at English, but you've got me confused.
Date: 11/20/09 08:53 am Title: 04
Wow, they are really assholes...
I'm glad Tom doesn't join in, though!
Author's Response: Hmm... we'll see.
Date: 11/19/09 10:27 pm Title: 01
yup, I'm a fantastical writer*wink wink*
And like, just leave it... some authors just stop writing and stuff, ya know..?
Author's Response: Fantastical? What's that mean?rnrnOh, no, if I did that, it would eat away at me for forever and I'd feel bad. Hahaha.
Date: 11/19/09 08:01 pm Title: 04
awe.:(.
Author's Response: Now you're making me sad about my own story. Stop that.):
Date: 11/19/09 06:49 pm Title: 01
wow.. i said hoe.. i meant hope... *gulps* and i wrote ans too! it was and.. *sighs*
anyways, i will.. as soon as you update! i hope you don't ditch this one!!
Author's Response: It's okay, haha. You're just so amazing at typing that sometimes your fingers take a break and mistype...a lot. What do you mean ditch?! I'm thinking up the next part currently, okay? Hahaha. (:
Date: 11/18/09 09:59 pm Title: 04
O____o fuck I hate all the ppl at that school!! I hope bill will be ok soon
Author's Response: I know right?! They just suck! I don't know, we'll have to see, hahaha.
Date: 11/18/09 09:27 pm Title: 04
just found out about this fic today, ans love at first read!
Hoe you update soon~
Author's Response: I love you, then.<3 You better keep reading.
Date: 10/19/09 06:38 pm Title: 03
i like this story! Poor Bill.. i hope Tom come to rescue him from his "loving Daddy"
update soon
plz
xoxo
Author's Response: As soon as possible. Thankyou. :)
Date: 10/19/09 04:52 pm Title: 03
You contradicted yourself here, saying Bill knew he was "taking it up the ass" and that he could do that for money, and that would make him a prostitute, but then saying he didn't know what sex was. Yeah, not much sense there, might want to fix that if you want Bill to be clueless about sex, even though no seventeen year old who goes to school isn't going to know what sex is, lol. It's inevitable that you'll find out one way or another, even without sex ed classes.
"He could sell himself! It’s not like he wasn’t already used to taking it up the ass."
"He didn’t even know what sex was. What kind of seventeen year old has no clue what sex is?"
Author's Response: I'm surprised my beta didn't catch this. I'll fix it. Somehow. Thankyou very much.
Date: 10/19/09 09:23 am Title: 03
Poor little Billa. :(
Update soon please, I'd love to see how it goes with Tom being there.
Author's Response: I actually have no idea yet...
Date: 10/19/09 08:10 am Title: 03
Shit I feel so sorry for Bill D=
I wanna post amassive review but if I don't turn my computer off now my mum's gonna knife me so all i can say is
UPDATE SOON!!!
Gah... I wish I didn't have school tomorrow D=
Author's Response: Aw, I would've liked to read a massive review. Next time, maybe? Haha.
Date: 10/19/09 07:17 am Title: 01
Ugh that's awful!!
How could a parent treat their own son like that?
And he must miss Tom!!
I have to go read more, Im loving this!!
Author's Response: Well I'm sure it happens to a lot of people, and because their parents are traumatised alcoholic wankers. (;
Date: 10/19/09 02:39 am Title: 03
Update again please!!!
Author's Response: As soon as I can!
Date: 10/10/09 12:23 pm Title: 02
Aw, this is good :]
I like it a lot. I've been looking for all the Jorg/Bill fics to see which one of them can make me cringe xD I'm so weird like that. But yeah. This is a good story.
I like how you actually put detail into it. Not a lot of people do that. Like, how he pronounced the words and everything. Most people would be like, "Okay, time to make him go to the bathroom, get a hall pass, k bye."
So yeah :]
Author's Response:
Hahaha, thankyou! Also, I wish everyone who reads this story to read this, though I doubt any will: I'm terribly sorry I haven't updated this story in forever. My laptop's cord is bad-tempered and didn't work for quite some time.
Anyways, haha, I try to put as much detail as I can; until it comes to sex-scenes. I cannot describe a sex-scene to save my life. I start giggling far too hard. It feels so odd for me to do it. Though, I may have to in the upcoming chapter. D:
Date: 09/13/09 03:59 pm Title: 02
I really like this stroy! I can't wait tom read more of it! P.S. You might or might not know who this is...It's Baylee. I am Tosha's friend. And she told me about this story so I decided to read it. AND IT'S AWESOME!
Author's Response: I saw the Chizu and knew who you were, hahahaha. THANKS.<3
Date: 09/13/09 09:17 am Title: 02
Not a bad start. I would like to read the next chapter.
Date: 09/13/09 09:17 am Title: 02
Not a bad start. I would like to read the next chapter.
Date: 09/11/09 02:26 pm Title: 01
Ooo... What happens next? I knoooow... I think ‘‘
Author's Response: I'm not so sure you do!