Date: 09/09/09 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE IT! I WAS SCARED AT FIRST FOR WHAT THEIR MOTHER WAS GOING TO DO ABOUT FINDING OUT BUT IT WAS A HAPPY ENDING AND IT MADE ME SMILE WIDE!
Date: 09/09/09 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the description of their home and the photo of Bill. I wonder if Simone's change of heart comes a little too quickly, though. Does this fit into the Brother's Keeper universe?
Date: 09/09/09 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was wonderful, hun =]
Date: 09/09/09 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so nicely written. Like always your writing is beautiful.
Date: 09/09/09 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, that was wonderful. :) So wonderful.
Date: 09/09/09 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is lovely. The little signs of domesticity and couple-ness scattered around the house, and Simone's evolution of emotions...it's all so perfectly done.
Date: 09/09/09 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I thought it was really beautiful bby.
Date: 09/09/09 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
gah! <- sound that symbols both love, amazment, heartfelt wonderment, absolute adoration ect. Hun, ther ehas not benn ONE of your stories that have not made me at least tear up over the beuty of the writing, story detail, or the emotion portayed in it, be it bitter sweet, sad, or unerringly happy! and most of the time, ou reduce me to single sylable exclamations, such as "gah"
I must say thank you. youve managed on the msot part to reduce this long winded diva-thing to silence for at least the amount of time it takes me to read this. I'm sure my Sechslings would thank you too, as they know how much I talk. lol
Date: 09/09/09 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH MY!
What a punch in the gut for her, to discover how blind she truly had been, for the twins were always so sweetly innocent in front of her and with each other, but to discover that they were now men and very much together, wow. I admire her for not breaking down, get angry, start calling them immediately and demanding some answers NOW.
I love how she got the flashbacks of Tom saying what he said and how it all just made SENSE the more she walked into the house.
That picture, omg, I cannot even put myself on her shoes and try to think what I would say, but still, yes, call yourself stupid for never seeing something that should have been obvious and yet not.
But, kudos to her for the last two paragraphs and how she resolved to get over it.
They have each other, they were happy. That's all as a mother she could ever wish and want for her boys. <333
Date: 09/09/09 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww, beautiful story.. i can't imagine what it must be like, to go through something like that as a mother.. x
Date: 09/09/09 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMAGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADDD...T^T
I can't help but cry... It's just.. Gaaaaaaagghhh... I feel sorry for Simone if something like this is real..*sniff*
What would a mother do?? It's really hard to think when you're in a situation like this. It's so painful...T^T What would a mother do??
You always make me cry - in a good way, of course..*sniff*
Date: 09/09/09 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh gosh, this is so adorable.
Tom's dream to marry Bill and have a big house together was just so lovely.
I'm glad Simone was able to understand in the end.
This is going straight into my faves!
Date: 09/09/09 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
This fic was wonderfully written. Thank you so much! It has left me longing for more, and hoping you may be inspired to write the boys finding out that Simone knows and still accepts them.
Her struggle seems real and her realization is perfect.
Thank you!
Date: 09/09/09 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was beautiful. I am so happy Simone was so accepting of their love in the end.
Date: 09/09/09 11:53 am Title: Chapter 1
-cries- this.. -cries harder- It's so beautiful.
it may be disgusting to other people but for me the thought of seeing them together would be the most beautiful thing in the world. Being born with your soulmate and the love of your life is something special.
sorry just got cheesy. But really there are rarely fics that makes me cry. and this is one of them. <3 <3
-hugs- good job.
Date: 09/09/09 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1
THIS. WAS. AWESOME!!!
Date: 09/09/09 11:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Ahw, that is just so adorable! ^_^
Date: 09/09/09 11:06 am Title: Chapter 1
O_O woa... just simply woa... I love this kind of fic when their secret is found out >_
Date: 09/09/09 10:39 am Title: Chapter 1
aw this is is cute!!!!! I love it!