Date: 05/24/10 10:19 am Title: Chapter 1
I can't believe I've never reviewed this fic... I love it so much, it's one of my favorite cause of the way you describe the twins relationship even if they are not physically present in the story... beautiful.
Date: 04/28/10 01:49 am Title: Chapter 1
This was beautifully realistic. It's rare to get a bittersweet pov from their mother. I really liked this.
Date: 02/11/10 05:27 am Title: Chapter 1
This is absolutely beautiful. I'd love to see more in this universe. The relationship you show of the boys is so beautiful and simple. And yet not simple as Simone realizes, because they had to work so hard to hide it. It would be interesting to see her next visit. and if she ever let on, to let them know she loved them anyway, and would pretend for their sake she didn't know. great great job.
Date: 01/01/10 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's nice to see the twins' relationship from their mother's viewpoint. Very well done.
Date: 01/01/10 01:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Stunning! It reminds me of "If These Walls Could Talk" which is a movie that goes through the different occupants of a house. In one of the segments two older (60 ish) women were lovers but they told their families they were just roommates because neither married. The would sleep in the same room but when the families would come to visit they had to make it seem like they weren't together together. Made me want to cry as Simone finally allowed herself to acknowledge the truth and then accept it . So well written!
Date: 11/05/09 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this is you who has written this :) I remember reading it on LJ when it wasn't known who the author is, and I completely loved it.
Simone's point of view when she enters and inds things and puts them together and realizes what is going on between her two sons was beautiful to read, even though I never felt guilt or dirtiness for her, because it was so obvious that what the twins have is beautiful and so precious. And, if it's true and real and more importantly, sincere and supportive - there should be no doubts, and I'm glad she realized that in the end.
Loved the fridge post-its conversations, that was adorable to read, as well as the glimpse into the twins' rooms which spoke volumes.
Beautiful :)
Date: 10/29/09 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well done. I have also wondered about what goes on within the walls of their big yellow house.
Date: 10/18/09 05:03 am Title: Chapter 1
This is incredible. I enjoyed reading this very much, even if it didn't physically involve the twins. Good job. =]
Date: 10/16/09 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, it was just about great.
Are you going to write a sequel? That'd be pretty nice, I think.
Date: 09/19/09 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG, this is amazing. Beautifully written, and I totally almost cried.
Date: 09/14/09 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was powerful. WOW! Is there any sequel to this please?I'd be delighted to read about her thoughts when seeing them in front of her.This is really beautiful and the notes and the little domestic things in their life made this even more powerful.Made their love ten times more believable.It's like love was printed on each item in their house.I got all emotional reading this.Thank you so much!
Date: 09/12/09 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
AMAZING! *sigh* had to write it in caps. That was absolutely amazing and like, I'd love to see what would happen on Thursday because I was just so captured by this story.
Date: 09/11/09 01:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Awesome. I can't even really think of any other way to describe it...
Date: 09/10/09 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really good, you did a great job showing both simon's growth over the chapter and the twins relationship. It was really beautiful.
Date: 09/10/09 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. That's all I can really say. The way you describe Simone's feelings and what she thinks is just unremarkable ^^ This is definitely a new favorite of mine.
Date: 09/10/09 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1
It's so good and so sad at the same time. I mean if I'm a mother I would be heart broken too.
Writing in her point of view, you nailed it.
Date: 09/10/09 09:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, it's really beautiful :o
I really like it, I think it's brilliant (:
Date: 09/10/09 08:54 am Title: Chapter 1
This.. this is again one reason why I concider you as one of my favorite authors here. This was really touching and beautiful. How much I wish them to have an opportunity to live their lives the way they are happy! Together or separately, twincest or not. This fic was a beautiful example of hidden and judged, but at the same time very warm and powerful love. Makes me believe in everlasting love again, you know :)
I liked the way you created Simone's character here. The POV was interesting and the fact that this whole fic was actually all about her is impressive. Sure Simone has baan visiting in many fics, but in this scale it's rare. You did good job there.
Well-written and beautiful vision, full of emotions and I can't really even imagine what kind of emotional rollercoaster it could be. Also the vision of twins home was so sweet; notes, shared beg with their personal belongings on bedside tables, pictures, doggies... and Tom's childhood dream. So sweet!
Date: 09/09/09 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I didn't know how I was going to feel about this, but you did an excellent job with it!! Very heartwarming...