Date: 09/09/09 02:59 pm Title: The Not so Yellow Banana
Its definitely more than ok! I really liked this, and I can actually picture Bill being so argumentitive about that 'banana'! Very good first one-shot and slash, well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! You have given me the will to continue to write oneshots. I'll be moving the story to my 'Colors' series, which will be a bunch of pointless oneshots based off of prompts with colors! Hopefully I'll have time to write anouther one today.
Date: 09/09/09 12:03 pm Title: The Not so Yellow Banana
LOL =)) it'd be better if you continued for a bit :)) but it's already good! LOL, i'll really never look at bananas the same way again. :)) and i'll keep a mental note to NEVER ask my boyfriend about bananas.
Author's Response: Lol, thanks. Maybe I'll rewrite it once I'm a bit more comfy with writing it. I'll get there! Writing that will definately keep me from looking at bananas the same way again, I think I managed to scar myself! Lol. XDrnrnAlso, I wanted to let you know that I'm moving that one to my series 'Colors' which is going to be a bunch of pointless oneshots based off of prompts involving colors.