Date: 09/17/09 09:49 am Title: Chapter 7
I loved the panty line part but WTF?!?! Why is Bill talking to that bag of douche named Lucas?!?!?! I mean he has a naked sexy beast named Tom on his bed! Did I mention NAKED!?!? If Bill thinks about getting back with the douche bag and breaks Tom's heart I'll seriously cry! :( I have a few rules.
Rule #....: Never get back with an ex after he or
she got benched. Readmitting a player cause nothig but hurt.
Rule #....: Once a player is EXTREMELY
benched they are NEVER to be unbenched.
Ok, I don't know if you wanted more rules but I could help it you know...lol. I know they are the same kinda but you can re word them.... Now that my rant and crappy shot of writing rules
is over, let me say that I loved this chapter! But I'm very uncertianed on Bill's judgement. I hope he doesn't do anything dumb because I don't like Tom or Bill being sad. As always please update soon! I love this story and you guys are doing a wonderful job on it! Also thanks for the dedication once again. You don't know how happy it makes me! Ok ok...I'm done! Lol!
:)
Author's Response: LOL, we LOVE your reviews. And sorry it has taken sooo long to post, however, Anne_Anonymous has just had surgery, and I have just been trying to be the good BFF over here, and take care of her. Buuut, we had the next few chapters planned out, so I will post in a few hours. (Plus we have another story going in the works...so be sure to be on the lookout for that!) Loves Ya-TSOA
Date: 09/15/09 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 6
=]=]=]==]=] whoa thats hot=]=] lolz..continue=]=]
Author's Response: Indeed, so...expect an update here in a few hours or so...
Date: 09/15/09 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 6
Rule 48: Never, ever let yourself open up for others.
Author's Response: Good one! :D
Date: 09/15/09 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oeeehh this is sexy!
God i want more :'D
Author's Response: LOL, expect an update in a few hours!
Date: 09/15/09 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
hahaha welll...new rule: bill is propiety of tom, no touching him.
hahaha please continue!!!
i love this story!!
Author's Response: Ain't that the truth....? So expect an update within a couple of hours!
Date: 09/15/09 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 6
Awesome Jules. This was an amazing chappie. More please. Maybe some sex and *cough* spanking *cough*. Still amazing too, *huggles*
Author's Response: Danke Jen! We heart you, too!
Date: 09/15/09 08:14 am Title: Chapter 6
Rule # ...: When the moment is right.....GET IT ON!
I'll stop! Lol. Lame! Thanks for the shout out! This is fun! You have out done yourself for this whole story! Both of you guys! Genuis! As always update soon!
:)
Author's Response: LMAO! Indeed, you too, have outdone yourself, with as many rules as you have provided! It was only rightfully so, that we include you in on "The Game..."rnrnPS, expect an update within a few hours of us posting this response! :D
Date: 09/14/09 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ooooo go tom..... I'm so glad he went to go see bill... Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Yes! We are excited too....will post later this eve. :D
Date: 09/14/09 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
Eep! Love this story. I wish I had the imagination to come up with a rule. I'll be sure to review as soon as I come up with a rule. And I looove the banner ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you for the banner compliment, it was super hard! Lol, you should thank Anony for holding mah hand and getting me through the panic that set in...lol-TSOArnrnAnd we are super glad that you like our story....! It's so much fun to write!
Date: 09/14/09 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was soso cute=] yes the banner is awesome=] cant wait 4 the next update=]
Author's Response: Yay! Am glad you like it...new post coming later this evening! :D
Date: 09/14/09 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE !!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!! XD
THANKS!!!
Author's Response: But of course, The Game must continue, for no one has won it yet! So be looking for a post later this evening! :D (And we are glad you love it!)
Date: 09/14/09 08:36 am Title: Chapter 5
ooo i like this story and pretty banner
Author's Response: TY TY TY! *Takes Bow* Banner was really, super hard for me to do...so thanx! I appreciate that! :DrnrnAnd we are glad you like this story!
Date: 09/14/09 03:02 am Title: Chapter 5
Rule #...: If he's going to be there in the morning when you wake AND are comfortable...it's ok to break rule # 4.
I dont know! Lol! I'm making this up as I see go! Great chapter and thanks again for the dedication! Love ya!Update soon!
Author's Response: But of course, mah dear! We love you, too. Yes, Anne has finally woken up long enough to get her name added...lol. And....we'll let you in on the Secret of The Game when the story is finished. But for now, we must continue with The Game...so expect an update later this evening! :D
Date: 09/13/09 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
ooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh =]=] plz i luvz thiz...
Author's Response: More is on it's way..... :D
Date: 09/13/09 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
love it!
i feel bad for bills hand lol :D
Author's Response: Me too. However, Rule #20: Don't be afraid to defend what's yours....
Date: 09/13/09 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awww I love this story it's great. I'm glad tom wants to start over and bill is going to apologize to tom (even if it was because of the flowers tom dropped off) can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: I am so glad to hear that you think the story is great. :D It's so much fun to write. Am working hard on the next couple of chapters, so cross your fingers, and hope that I get them posted soon. :D
Date: 09/13/09 11:47 am Title: Chapter 4
I loved this chapter! Thanks for the dedication! I owe you so that's why I'm working hard on trying to finish chapter 14. I have it planned out but need to write it.
:)
I have rules:
Rule #... : Be constant and don't back down in getting what you want.
Rule #... : Admit defeat if there's no way rule #... (rule above) work out.
I tried again. Lol. I was thinking about this story and thought that Tom should ignore Bills attempts at trying to start over and at the end Bill gives up because Tom learnt the rules and benched Bill but see how heart broken Bill is sitting outside of his place. Bill says something like "Rule #... : never fall in love....because of broken hearts." Then Tom comes out and Bill doesn't see him sitting next to him and say quitetly "Rule #... : Never be afriad to fall in love....you never know what you might find."
I don't know. I was just thinking! Lol. Anything you want to see in F.P.? I'll so write it in for ya my friend!
:)
Author's Response: Those just might work out....*hmmm*thinking*....rnBut no....really, you don't owe me anything. I have enjoyed your peices, finished or not. :D
Date: 09/13/09 10:08 am Title: Chapter 4
I have no idea what rule this could be but you could have 'Rule.... They get too close, push them away, by any means necessary.'
I LOVE THIS STORY!
Author's Response: :D AND I LOVE YOU~~rnrnAnd thanks for the rule, will try to get it in the story.
Date: 09/13/09 09:36 am Title: Chapter 4
So...my rule idea.
Rule #483
When it comes to Tom, all other rules go out the window.
;)
Anywho, love the story so far, looking forward to the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Yay! :D Am glad to have kept you entertained until now. Thanks so much for the rule, will try to get it worked into the storyline....
Date: 09/13/09 07:34 am Title: Chapter 4
howdy!
hehehe i love yoursory and thee idea of certain rules having to be followed. I thnk you should make a rule book! hehehe
much love!
Ellie whos keyboard is broken so her review makes no sense!
xXx
Author's Response: Am planning on somehow incorporating a complete list of rules, not sure yet how. I know it can be confusing....maybe an epilogue of sorts. But am glad that you love my story thus far... :D It's so much fun to write!