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Reviewer: DarkThlorD Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/11 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 9

GAME OVER

Reviewer: eilonwe Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/11 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 5

Holy crap!!!!

I have this drop jawed look on my face right now... Tom did NOT just kiss Bill!!! ~~ oh yes he did dear~~

Reviewer: eilonwe Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/11 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oh man!! I'd have done more than punch bushido... I'd have gotten a good two-fisted grip on his nads and TWISTED and not let go till he promises to leave me the hell alone!!

Aww man... Poor Tom!

Reviewer: eilonwe Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/11 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 3

Meahahaha.... Yes dickhead you did kinda deserve that. But then Bill wasnt being much of a peach either....

Another rule... Bench anyone too egocentric as to forget to take the price tag off a gift ( so you can see how much they ~ didn't ~ spend on you)

Reviewer: eilonwe Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/11 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ooh you got the cold shoulder x3 for that mistake!!

Reviewer: eilonwe Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/11 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice!

I have a few rules to add though
1) must not be Still living at home with momma. Must have his/her own place.

2) must have own transportation.

3) must be gainfully employed. I can't afford to be anybody's sugar-momma and I'm certainly NOT a gold-digger!

4) must have the (uncommon) courtesy to call/text that you're going to be late/ can't show. No-call/no-show and showing up 3 hours late without a heads up or some lame excuse will get you BENCHED. COURTESY ! Dont waist my time....

Reviewer: HaiZOE Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 9

I like Tom's rules the best :") and actually, some of those rules aren't a bad idea... might have to steal a few of them :) loved the story; it was original and funny, as well as sad, in all the right places. :))

Author's Response: I am glad that you liked this story! This story, will always be my baby. I hope that you continued the series, and I hope that you found them to be enjoyable, as well. Much love.

Reviewer: HaiZOE Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 5

"Monsoon Ave." I like that. :) and YAY! No girlfriend! And DOUBLE YAY! They kissed! :D

Reviewer: HaiZOE Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ahahaha! I just find the idea of Bill punching anyone kinda funny! ^.^ And this whole "BENCHED!" thing has me in stitches. :"D

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/10 04:45 am Title: Chapter 9

I love the Game and the Rules! xD

Author's Response: Thank you! This story/series is my baby. I am glad to see that you liked it. Hope you read the others, as well...

Reviewer: s3s3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/10 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 9

lol funny story , i like it :-D thank you!!!

Reviewer: innocent as far as you know Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/19/10 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 9

:}
i love this story!!!!!!!!!! update soon!!!

Author's Response: Unfortunately, the story is finished, but please continue on with the series!

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 2

GAH, I JUST LOST THE GAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Lol, despite me being tragically behind on review responses, how on earth did you lose the game?

Reviewer: bookofnicodemus Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

UGH THIS FIC, ONE CHAPTER IN AND I'VE ALREADY LOST THE GAME LIKE A JILLION TIMES MY GOD

Author's Response: You can't lose the game! Don't give up! Really, I do though, hope you liked this story. I'm sure it's riddled with typos, and run-ons, and other things to make an English teacher's skin crawl, but really, this story is my baby. *huggles*

Reviewer: Rockstar101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 3

"Booo, motherfuckers..."

Oh man jules. Oh man.

Also, BILL NO RUM AND COKE FOR YOU DAMMIT!

Reviewer: Rockstar101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 2

"Andi held up his hand and said, "Benched!" and continued along his way"
Oh mannn, tom just got bencheddddd! Fer sure. I approve ;) hahhaha

Reviewer: Rockstar101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh snaps. I'm following The Rules now. You have a new player to the game.

Fer totes.

Oh man Jules, i loved it. just sayin.

Reviewer: LelleMecKii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/10 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 9

HAHAHAHA wonderfull game!!! :D:D:D

Author's Response: I'm terribly behind on review responses, but thanks for your review! Hopefully, you checked out the rest of the series, as well!

Reviewer: Sarajuly382 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/10 09:47 am Title: Chapter 2

The prize of the player who got benched the most rapidly goes to.....TOM!!!

Author's Response: *flutterclaps* Yes, yes indeed. :)

Reviewer: Gloria Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/10 11:32 am Title: Chapter 1

I haven't read the story (yet!) and I'm just asking out of curiousity:

Is the story inspired the "The Game" by Neil Strauss? The book about the pick up artists and how they play "the game" to pick up girls?

It would be an awesome story concept:D

Author's Response: Hmm, no, I haven't read that story, so I couldn't really tell you if it's almost the same thing, this one is based on "Rules" that me and the co-auth abide by in our little dating game....it's kinda based on baseball? IDK, please read and tell me if it's simular....I'd like to know. -TSOA

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