Date: 04/26/21 05:17 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a really good story!
I wish it had a sequel to this
Date: 04/25/18 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story
Date: 07/11/12 05:09 am Title: Chapter 1
ha ha ha he just had to sit on the chair!!!
Date: 03/30/11 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
hahahhaah that was soo funny and haaawt *.* love it!!!!!!!
Date: 09/07/10 01:22 am Title: Chapter 1
lmao!
1. toothpaste o_0 really?
2. i'm loving that jonathon sat in the broken chair, haha.
Author's Response: Yes, of course toothpaste. People have to make compromises and mouthwash would have stung a bit too much. :DrnAnd thankyou for reviewing!rnxxx
Date: 06/11/10 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
hahahaha! omg i love this!!! amazing!!
Author's Response: Thankyou so much :Drnxxx
Date: 01/16/10 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
lololololol. Awesome. XD
Author's Response: Thankyou :) rnxx
Date: 09/13/09 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes! We should co-write! :)
Author's Response: Aye definitely :)
Date: 09/13/09 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
I will never look at my dentist in the same way. Thanks, really D8
Why were you so worried about this? It was GOOD. Don't you be going back to het after this beasty, missus ;)
Oh, and the make shift lube? OHMYGOD. That was NASTY.
Author's Response: Haha my pleasure :PrnJust think, next time you're brushing your teeth and you taste the minty freshness...think of Bill and Tom ;)rnI'm glad you think it's ok. I shall continue to write slash, I just need some ideas.rnWe should do some together some time, when my writing has developed. :)rnThanks for reviewing.rnxxxx
Date: 09/13/09 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol :p that was fun!! x
Author's Response: Thankyou so much hunnie :)rnglad you liked it.rnxx
Date: 09/11/09 07:01 am Title: Chapter 1
shameless smut is best.
I love the dentist clinic setting.
Author's Response: Thankyou soo much :)rnGlad you liked it.rnFeel free to check out Mile High, my other story which is full of shameless smut too. rnxx
Date: 09/09/09 09:48 am Title: Chapter 1
The ending was funny!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. rnThanks for reviewing.rnxx
Date: 09/09/09 08:53 am Title: Chapter 1
LOL!!!!!! Hilarious.....AWESOME :P
Author's Response: Thankyou so so much :)rnxx
Date: 09/09/09 04:15 am Title: Chapter 1
loooool
omg they even fucked the chair up x'D
Author's Response: Yep, those boys are just so rude. :prnThanks for reviewing.rnxx
Date: 09/08/09 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
hot sex in the dentist office...i will never look at the dental chair the same. great story
Author's Response: Haahaa me either. I'm hoping my fear of the dentist will magically disappear next time I go by imagining the greatest twin sex I possibly can ;)rnThanks so much for reviewing.rnxx
Date: 09/08/09 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
*giggles* I had to skip to the sex... I'm afraid of the dentist... I almost didn't read this story, I'm glad I did.
Author's Response: Tehe I hope the sex was good enough for you then. Who knows, maybe this will cure the dentist fear? ;)rnNext time you go, just imagine Tom and Bill going at it like rabbits and not caring who watches :prnThanks for the review.rnxx
Date: 09/08/09 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay, hotsecks! Imagining Tom fucking Bill while having cornrows will take some time to get used to (as a lot of people still write him with dreads)
I liked Bill's tooth fetish.
I wish you would've included it just a tinyyyy bit more.
But, still, reallly good.
Author's Response: Thanks for responding & yeah i probably should have sorry.rnMy next slash fic will be hoefully better, this one was written in a couple of hours and I'm very sleep deprived,so maybe it didnt come out as good as it could have. But, not bad for my first attempt.rnThanks again :)rnxx
Date: 09/08/09 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
liked it..
Author's Response: thankyou so much :)rnxx
Author's Response: thankyou so much :)rnxx
Date: 09/08/09 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
lolz that was weird but cute=]=]
Author's Response: Thanks :)rnxx