Date: 08/21/11 05:51 pm Title: To See The Stars
hope one day you will update this fic >.
Date: 09/30/09 05:55 am Title: To Seek Comfort
so far so good. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll do my best to get a new chapter out quickly.
Date: 09/29/09 05:25 pm Title: To Seek Comfort
I'm so surprised that this story doesn't have more reviews. it should be featured! I love this story so much :) you shuold relly really update soon, hehe.
thank you for writing :)
Author's Response: Meh, I write for myself first and foremost. Reviews are nice, simply because I like to gauge my audience, but no matter what I'll keep posting until we're finished. But Thank You for seeking out my little fic and taking the time to read it. I will do my best to have the next chapter out sooner, rather than later.
Date: 09/29/09 01:55 am Title: To Seek Comfort
Oh jeez, they have one track minds. I can't wait to see how long it takes for them to be rescued.
I really hope they're not harassed by animals and the like, but of course, they probably will be, knowing Bill he's wearing something fruity smelling.
I have a couple of friends who have been to South Africa, and it's just as gorgeous as you describe it. Just breathtaking.
Author's Response: Considering the torture I'm about to put the pair through, I almost felt obligated to let them indulge themselves. Even I can be soft like that. As for the challenges they're going to run into within the next few chapters, there certainly will be the wildlife to consider, and things a lot worse. Thank you for taking the time to read and drop a comment.
Date: 09/28/09 10:37 pm Title: To Seek Comfort
Only Tom would think about sex when trapped in the middle of nowhere and lost. I'm glad that they are ok for the most part at the moment though. I know they won't stay that way but at least they are for now. I think it was cute that Tom was trying so hard to sooth Bill with his story about everyone finding them by lunch. Good luck with that though. Nice job can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: lol, I'm surprised you seem surprised. He IS A hormonal young male, after all. Though trust me, sex is going to be absolutely the last thing on his mind for a very long time. Thanks for continuing to read!
Date: 09/17/09 04:23 pm Title: To See The Stars
Yeah, I hope Bill is okay :( but I love people getting hurt in stories cause I'm just that mean x3
You're welcome, I'm trying to comment more on stuff cause I know what it's like to be ignored when you write something, especially when it something as good as this ^.^
Date: 09/17/09 01:11 pm Title: To Find Trouble
Daaayum, that's bad. I wonder what the maid was saying...Tom Tom Tom *shakes head*
This is awesome, the atmosphere is good, I could really imagine the scenery in my head, the breeze everything ^^ And now the suspense is killing me, moar plz thx Dx
Author's Response: As a rule, when I write something, there is almost always a point to it. Poor Tom is going to learn the hard way. Ah, but thanks so much for not only reading, but dropping a comment.
Date: 09/16/09 06:41 pm Title: To Find Trouble
Oh wow :( Poor Tom. I hope Bill is ok. How frightening for them and kind of stupid to think is was ok to leave the hotel. It makes for a great start to a slightly scary story though. Nice job can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: lol, I hope I move more into the area of suspense, rather than anything else. I think I write better suspense, but we'll see. Thanks so much for taking the time to read.
Date: 09/09/09 03:26 pm Title: To See The Stars
Aw how sweet...then it all goes wrong x3 fun fun
Date: 09/07/09 01:51 am Title: To See The Stars
OMG!!! How I've missed you :) Welcome back :)
I was so excited to see this and of course you have started out with nothing less than... uh oh what's going to happen now? :) Tom is sweet and wants to make his brother happy as usual I love it. Great start and yay you're back.