Date: 01/07/08 03:25 pm Title: Under the Influence
Tom stared at Bill in disbelief as he rolled and pinned him in the small space and kissed him like there was no tomorrow.
Because honestly, there wasn’t a tomorrow.
Oh jeez. You're too good at this.
Author's Response: Thank you, and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/07/08 03:06 pm Title: Under the Influence
Wow this was just amazing! You're an amazing author and your stories are always great, and this was no exception!
Author's Response: Thanks Gisele, and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/07/08 02:15 pm Title: Under the Influence
It has really good rhythm. Almost like poetry in the beginning. I was so blown, yo. No, srsly. Gone.
Author's Response: srsly? whoa, naice.
Date: 01/07/08 02:11 pm Title: Under the Influence
love it love it love it love it!!!omg it was so cute!!! i felt so bad for Tom to.....stupid bill!! lol great work!!! hope to see more from you ^^
Author's Response: lol wow, thank you and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/07/08 02:09 pm Title: Under the Influence
That was amazing
Especially the denial both twins had
That was sooo good
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Date: 01/07/08 02:00 pm Title: Under the Influence
This was really, really great.
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Date: 01/07/08 01:22 pm Title: Under the Influence
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Brilliant. Perfect. Gorgeous. Awesome. GRangrhs.
Author's Response: Thank you, and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/07/08 01:21 pm Title: Under the Influence
lol forgot to rate...
Author's Response: no prob.
Date: 01/07/08 01:19 pm Title: Under the Influence
Fuck! *is speechless* Ok, I absolutely loved this. The pace, the language, the descriptions, everything. It was perfect. Definitely one of the best oneshots I've read in a long time,if not ever. There were a couple of tiny mistakes but nothing serious enough to detract from the impact of the story. 10 out of 10 for this one girl. And it's going in my favourites :D
Author's Response: Thank you, and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/07/08 01:18 pm Title: Under the Influence
^^ you actually write the best sex scenes on the site. :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D fact. I want to mary your stories. ^^
Author's Response: the best? you have read razzle right? cynical_terror, undrockroll, and mnschoen right? *blinks* But thank you for the compliment and the review!
Date: 01/07/08 01:17 pm Title: Under the Influence
WOW! 0_0 I loved that!
Author's Response: lol thank you, and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/07/08 01:13 pm Title: Under the Influence
Seriously, I love this story! I can't just envision poor Tom lying in his bunk, looking all heartbroken and small... Poor baby *pets*
Author's Response: Thank you and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/07/08 01:08 pm Title: Under the Influence
i love it. (: one of the best i've read on the site.
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Date: 01/07/08 01:06 pm Title: Under the Influence
bill is a drug, so bad it hurts.
you took it right like it is, gosh, i really think you are the best writer, that all is so believable. while im reading this im in the other world, where only those characters exists. it's amazing you know.
your fictions always have this good point, and exact feeling is always together with one word and the other.
this is perfect like you are perfect.
Author's Response: Wow. I am nowhere near perfection, but I thank you and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/07/08 01:01 pm Title: Under the Influence
exquisite
Author's Response: Thank you, and thank you for the review!
Date: 01/07/08 01:00 pm Title: Under the Influence
You killed me.
you have such a way with words, you can take a totally erotic setuation and turn it into something sweet and beautiful.
you amaze me once again hun.
great work as always :D
Author's Response: lol Thank you, and thank you for the review!
Date: 01/07/08 01:00 pm Title: Under the Influence
You know it was good, very good. Exploring the dephts of human psychology while making a work enoyable to read is a true talent.
Author's Response: Thank you, and thank you for your review.
Date: 01/07/08 12:55 pm Title: Under the Influence
That was beautiful and hot. The depth of feeling as superb. Wonderul.
Author's Response: Thank you, and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/07/08 12:49 pm Title: Under the Influence
oh wow, this was, let me explain. i felt like the whole story was rolling down a hill, and i was rolling with it nonstop, and it was like a frustrated roll to read to the end. no, it's a good thing! i like stories that make me roll with them. ummmmm i loved it. :) very much.
one thing! this line - You’ve ruined me on every other person in the world because you can’t compare.
should it have been "You’ve ruined me on every other person in the world because *they* can’t compare."?
oh god I hate doing stuff like that, I'm sorry. I love it, seriously. :)
Author's Response: thanks. :D