Date: 09/12/09 05:58 pm Title: Strangers on a Train
Awww that was so sweet and hot at the same time I LOVED the fanny pack part, it had me laughing so hard! lovely simply lovely
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 09/12/09 03:19 pm Title: Strangers on a Train
That last sentance just made this entire fic perfect. I absolutely adore that last line. I love that you were able to make it so hot, but you didn't even finish, and the kiss between Bill and Tom was possible even hotter than the blow job between Bill and hot bodyguard. This is going on my favorites and then I'm immediately going to read it again. You definately deserved to be featured.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 09/11/09 11:20 pm Title: Strangers on a Train
awww 'im yours,tomi' so sweet!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 09/11/09 09:07 pm Title: Strangers on a Train
Pfft! Fannypack! I couldn't help but giggle at that too. XD
Author's Response: A grown man does look very silly in a fannypack. Actually, I think ANYONE looks silly in a fannypack.
Date: 09/11/09 06:54 pm Title: Strangers on a Train
Homg, that was hot.
And you dont even know how glad i am that you didnt have them fuck ._. I get so scared of someone else having Bill other than Tom, its pathetic. I was all squirming around in my chair, like, oooh Hans, you're so big and .... no. dont touch Bill there. But ohhh, you're huggggeee compared to him that would be sooo hottt....NO ONLY TOM CAN DO THAT!!
So yeah, i went a little nuts. xD
Btw, i loved this.
Author's Response: Haha...this is a very entertaining review! I'm glad you liked the story.
Date: 09/11/09 11:18 am Title: Strangers on a Train
awwwww....I love Hottie McBodyguard!!!! :)
Author's Response: haha...don't we all? Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: haha...don't we all? Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 09/11/09 07:10 am Title: Strangers on a Train
Oh I loved it. I busted out laughing when Tom mentioned the fanny pack. The way he said it, like it was the worst thing about the guy lol
“You’re not supposed to want to fuck around! You’re supposed to be pure and innocent, not sneaking off to blow your bodyguard! For christssakes, he wears a FANNYPACK!” Tom shouted the last part, something that for him was clearly the final indignation.
Author's Response: Well, fannypacks ARE pretty awful. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 09/11/09 05:03 am Title: Strangers on a Train
I read a brief part of this at some point when it first went up, but I'm glad I've had another chance to savour it properly. This really is delicious and it sets a great standard for all the bodyguard fics to come. Nice job!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 09/11/09 02:06 am Title: Strangers on a Train
I love this so much. The interaction between Bill and "Hans" in the beginning was perfect. Except:
"Bill had planned to be all coolly seductive when he came to talk to the bodyguard, like the sexy woman in the old movies, but he instead he found himself blushing like a schoolgirl under the man’s gaze."
I think you mean sexy women?
Author's Response: Good catch! I'm not sure whether I meant sexy woman in an old movie, or sexy women in old movies, but either way -- what I had was wrong. Thanks for pointing it out!
Date: 09/08/09 01:30 am Title: Strangers on a Train
Last line was so cute I wanted to flail.
And man, the freaking apex chat about Hans, Marius, John, whoever the fuck was brilliant... Fannypack.
Author's Response: The apex thread had me cracking up so hard I just had to write this story!
Date: 09/08/09 12:17 am Title: Strangers on a Train
OH HELL YES. I was waiting for this ever since the post(s) over at apex, and you delivered! I love you love you love you for this.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
Date: 09/07/09 02:22 pm Title: Strangers on a Train
it went from sexy to cute i love it lol
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 09/07/09 10:52 am Title: Strangers on a Train
OMG I'm strictly twincest-only but this fic was just hot! When they started laughing about the fannypack it was all awkward for him but it was really too funny. I love the new bodyguard, he's hot and he's so effing tall! *_*
Author's Response: I'm a twincest girl, too. In fact, this story was meant to just be Bill/Bodyguard, but my brain short-circuited at the idea of not including Tom. Oh, well.
Date: 09/07/09 10:41 am Title: Strangers on a Train
Awwww :) that was a adorable, and I was laughing hysterically at the fannypack, poor bodyguard XD It was hot in the beginning with Hans, and Bill and then Tom, omg, I loved that part n_n lol this is such a fun pairing...bodyguard and Bill, I can now see it :) I'm not sure if that's a good thing... XD
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
Date: 09/06/09 11:08 pm Title: Strangers on a Train
Hans/Bill was HOTTTTTTT.
Like, dayummm. That NEEDS to happen in real life, like, right now.
But, Bill will always be Tom's... so it just had to end that way.
Reallly nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you! And as for Bill/Hans, I really hope it IS happening in real life. Bill needs a hot, tall boyfriend.
Date: 09/06/09 10:56 pm Title: Strangers on a Train
bwahahahahahhaha.
you named him Hans. I LOVE you for that. I'm one of those crazy bitches from th_apex that was speculating with you, and I CAN'T WAIT to write a fic with this pairing....kinda xD
“Shut the fuck up! Christ, you’re blowing the help now?” He demanded incredulously. LOVE THAT EFFING LINE!!!! like i'm loving it night and day babe xD
For christssakes, he wears a FANNYPACK!” *humps you* THAT. just THAT. xD
as hot as that was, I happened to have DIED laughing as I read all the things we fangirled over in apex xD
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm sure this is funnier for the people who were in that post last night...I stole a lot of material from you guys. I also like that my campaign to call this guy Hans is slowly winning people over.
Date: 09/06/09 09:41 pm Title: Strangers on a Train
LMAO.
That made me laugh so hard!
FANNY PACK.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 09/06/09 07:44 pm Title: Strangers on a Train
Aaaaw.... awesome. cute ^^
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 09/06/09 07:29 pm Title: Strangers on a Train
I'm not gonna lie, Bill/Bodyguard is about as appealing to me as Bill/Bushido, but luckily my curiosity got the better of me! I freaking laughed so hard at the fannypack thing and the last sentence really made me feel all warm and fuzzy. Great fic!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, despite the bodyguard! I don't normally do Bill/anyone who isn't Tom, but I enjoy this new guy. Not as much as I enjoy twincest, however.
Date: 09/06/09 07:12 pm Title: Strangers on a Train
btw will there be a sequel?? Or any random one shots with bill/bodyguard or maybe a tom/bill/bodyguard! Xp
Hans looks like a tony to me xp
Author's Response: I meant this to be just a oneshot, but now I'm contemplating a sequel. I think Tom might want to get in on the Bill/Bodyguard action.