Ok, so first things first. The grammar and spelling is not too bad, yet you should proofread it because there are small mistakes here and there, like "wouldn't waist gas", that should actually be "waste". There are more, but I'm too lazy right now to find them.

As for the writing style, I like it, it doesn't seem rushed, but also doesn't feel dragging on forever and ever and ever more. I'll keep reading this, for sure, and if you don't find anyone to fix those little mistakes, feel free to contact me.

Author's Response: huh...i did have some one go over it.... ok well i'll talk to them about it later but i will keep it in mind thanks