Date: 03/18/10 03:27 am Title: Epilogue: Yours Alone to Keep
Aww!! the Epilouge was so so cute! x333
I loved all the fluff. x]
Andi is so mean! XD Poor Bill thought Tom was gone again! I think Andi owed him more than just another ice cream! XD
I love the adoption thing x3
They have their own little baby! How cute! :D
And a sequel?! :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
I can't wait!!
It's going to be great!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it! :)
Haha and yes, Andi probably does owe Bill more than just an ice cream cone, but for that moment it was all Bill wanted... besides Tom, of course. ;3
Thanks again! :)
Date: 03/18/10 02:51 am Title: Epilogue: Yours Alone to Keep
YES, A SEQUEL :DDDD Anyway, I loved the chap!!!!!!!!!!!! Aaw, they be so cute *pinches T&B's cheeks* Aren't you cute *purr* ... -cough- Anywho... I loved the whole story and had a great time, but now I can't wait for the sequel xD Great idea!! Thanks AngelKisses x3
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Haha and yes, everyone who wanted a sequel owes it to AngelKisses because I honestly wasn't going to do one until she brought up that idea. XD;;
Thanks again for reading and enjoying everything! :)
Date: 03/18/10 02:42 am Title: Epilogue: Yours Alone to Keep
Awwwwww :3 that was a perfect ending haha xD i've enjoyed this so much and i'm so excited for the sequel :DDD
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you've enjoyed it. :)
Date: 03/18/10 01:48 am Title: Epilogue: Yours Alone to Keep
This story was great :D And I am very happy that it's going to be a sequel :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: 03/18/10 01:27 am Title: Epilogue: Yours Alone to Keep
Dude, it's so sad that this is ending. But I'm so excited for the sequel. I can't wait to see the other T.K. doll come to life and see what happens with him xD Oh, it would just be so sweet to see him become human and...yeah x3 So I'm so glad you're doing it.
*sob* And a good fic makes it way out of Tracked and into Favorites x3
Oh, and I kept meaning to ask...is Tom real? Tom Tom. Like, since the dolls are based off of him. I've just been wondering if the Tom Kaulitz was actually real, you know? xD
Author's Response: Haha thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :3 Ah, and I'm not sure "sweet" is the right word to describe that second doll coming to life. Well, at the moment the bit I have written so far is more troublesome for Bill and Tom than sweet. XD;;
Yeah, I kinda failed at clarifying that. I should rewrite/add parts to clear it up. XD But the Tom Kaulitz the dolls are based on is a cartoon character from a popular tv show. I purposely didn't make a human version of him or else it'd be too easy to be like "oh! T.K.'s actor so and so is at my door! hello!" even though Bill wasn't a fan. But ja, T.K. is definitely not real. XD
Date: 03/18/10 12:54 am Title: Epilogue: Yours Alone to Keep
omg you're making a sequel!!!!!!!!! woot!!!! i feel so special for suggesting it now!!!!
haha the doll winking would have been awesome but i loved this chapter without it
this story was amazing!!!!! i'm glad Bill will always have Tom around
haha Andi is so mean for the prank but it was funny, i probably would have done the same thing
i'm still excited for the sequel!!!!!! yay sequel!!
Author's Response: Hehe the idea honestly didn't cross my mind until you brought it up, so I thank you for that. ;)
"Andi is so mean for the prank but it was funny, i probably would have done the same thing" - This! Exactly! I felt so bad when I reread it, but it's just one of those things you need to do. XD
Thanks so much for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Date: 03/18/10 12:23 am Title: Epilogue: Yours Alone to Keep
Awwww, that was so sweet! Even if Andreas was a bit cruel with that joke. ;) Loved this story! I'll definitely look forward to that sequel. :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: 03/17/10 11:58 am Title: "Hey beautiful, wanna have some fun?"
*waves* hoi! Miss me? lol So yeah, I'm amazing enough that I forced (I was sniffling and everything) makemesmile to call and read this because I couldn't wait.
Even ask her, I was squeaking and squealing and clapping during parts lol! Oh, and gasping too hehe.
SO! Tom. I have to say, I'm disappointed he wasn't tangled up in the sheets lol! But yay! He's back. And I loved how they adopted the other doll.
Author's Response: Hello you!!! :D :D It's been so long! Haha I totally need to find someone to give me story time should my internet start acting up again. XD
LOL! You and that image which I can never get out of my mind now! (I swear someone needs to make a manip or fanart of it *___*) But yes! He's finally back, and will forever stay! :D
Date: 03/14/10 08:01 pm Title: "Hey beautiful, wanna have some fun?"
Very cute, as your stuff always is.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Date: 03/14/10 12:43 pm Title: "Hey beautiful, wanna have some fun?"
*dies* Possibly my most favorite chapter! I kept smiling so much I thought it'd freeze up like that! XD
Author's Response: Aww I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much! :)
Date: 03/14/10 12:19 pm Title: "Hey beautiful, wanna have some fun?"
I hate for this to come to an end!! :( but I totes love it!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry, I just feel like it's time. :( And thanks so much! :)
Date: 03/14/10 01:38 am Title: "Hey beautiful, wanna have some fun?"
Awwww that was so cute!!!
And Tom's back!! :DDDDDDDD
Yay!
And he's fully human for Bill! :DDD
I loved this chapter, so much! x3
Oh and Tom not being in control of his bodily functions was hilarious. XDDD
I can't wait for the last chapter! :D
Author's Response: Hehe yes! He's finally back, and here to stay! :3 Thanks so much!
Hehe and it's not like he was wetting his pants or anything, but yeah, he definitely wasn't used to having to actually use a toilet. XD
Date: 03/14/10 01:37 am Title: "Hey beautiful, wanna have some fun?"
i loved it!!!!! ughn, you rock, my dear~
Author's Response: Lol thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 03/14/10 12:20 am Title: "Hey beautiful, wanna have some fun?"
Wow, I loved the big surprise~! You were right he wasn't in the room. XD Anyways I'm so happy about this story because of your awesome ability to write love and angst scenes. It's so good that I have checked everyday for a week for updates before this came out! I love your story and thank you for writing it, for reality is a lot more boring than talking dolls. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear you've enjoyed this! :)
Date: 03/13/10 07:41 pm Title: "Hey beautiful, wanna have some fun?"
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! i'm not even finished the chapter yet but i just wanted to say YOU ARE FUCKING AWESOME FOR BRINGING TOM BACK!!!!! ok now i'm gonna finish the chapter
ok, once again i'm not finished yet but i have to comment AGAIN! LMAO Tom is so mean but he's adorable! i loved how he wanted to surprise Bill! that's so cute! aww Mama Tomi! i'm glad Bill is keeping the doll, that would be pretty awesome if that one came to life too. ok, i'm gonna try to finish it for real this time
ahhhhh have i ever told you how much i love you? well i'm telling you again! I FUCKING LOVE YOU FOR THIS CHAPTER!!!
i love that Tom's fully human! now we can all be extremely happy!
haha Tom's embarrassed about using the bathroom, thats so cute
yay! fun with Bill and Tom! me likely!
amazingly, wonderful, great chapter!!!
i'm sad there's only the epilogue left! i'm totally gonna cry when this is finished
Author's Response: Lol it took long enough for Tom to come back, huh? XD I love attempting to make Tom the girly one, and so I couldn't resist that Mama Tomi bit. And oh gosh, you're giving me ideas with if that second doll came to life, and just... hm, making me consider things... damn you! XD
Lol I'm glad you enjoyed this! XD :)
Date: 03/13/10 05:37 pm Title: "Hey beautiful, wanna have some fun?"
omigosh its almost the end gah i cant wait to find out what happens afterwards
Author's Response: I'll try to have it up soon! :3
Date: 03/13/10 05:37 pm Title: "Hey beautiful, wanna have some fun?"
Okay this isn't actually from makemesmile. Synnie demanded story time and wants me to review for her because her internet is a douche.
AAAAHHHHHHHHH! WHAT THE HELL DO YOU MEAN THERE'S ONLY AN EPILOGUE LEFT?! Not cool man. Not cool. *cries*
The last couple of chapters when Tom was plastic had me tears pretty much. So I'm glad that he's finally human again.
Author's Response: Lol story time? Oh Synnie... XD
I have mixed feelings right now because I feel like it should be ending, but at the same time if I did end it then it feels really abrupt. There's definitely only going to be an epilogue after this, but I am [kind of] considering a sequel. Can't promise anything since I'm kind of against sequels for some odd reason, but we'll see what happens once the epilogue gets written. :3
It took long enough for him to change back, huh? XD
Date: 03/13/10 03:03 pm Title: "Hey beautiful, wanna have some fun?"
i'm feeling a little overwhelmed right now...i was so soooooo happy when tom appeared at bill's door that tears welled up in my eyes...i was feeling bill's despair too til then :) (i really got into this story..it was your fault for making it this awesome ;P )
thank god he's staying human!!!and with bill..forever..i'm happy xD
thank you so much for this story
(can i hope for a sequel????)
Author's Response: Aww I'm glad you were able to feel the emotions along with the story. Thank you so much! :)
As for a sequel, I'm usually against them, but for some reason I'm feeling this one ended a bit abruptly. I'll think about it, but I'm going to say I probably won't write a sequel. We'll see how the epilogue works out though, and by then I'll be certain whether I'd continue this or not. :3
Date: 03/13/10 01:49 pm Title: "Hey beautiful, wanna have some fun?"
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! :'D
Author's Response: Yay? XD
Date: 03/13/10 01:15 pm Title: "Hey beautiful, wanna have some fun?"
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Author's Response: *offers tissues* :3 ?